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Just The Girl – Chapter Fifty Three (a HYD-inspired fic)
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“What was that about?” Alice turned to an innocent-looking Bette as she toyed with Sam’s toothpick art. Judging from the lack of surprise from their friend, she knew Porter had something to do with the whole thing.
Knowing just how pointless it was to hide from the blonde, Bette spilled the beans. They weren’t gonna keep it a secret anyway. “I set her up with one of the girls I met in the leadership convention.”
“One of those foreign girls? I thought they already left the country?”
“Yeah, they did.” Bette nodded. She craned her neck a bit to get a better view of Tina as she waited for her salad right beside the service window. Their eyes met and they exchanged brief, challenging glares which quickly melted into smiles as soon as they had both looked away. “But this one just flew in yesterday from Mexico, she’s staying in town for two weeks to check out a few universities in the west coast. She needed someone to show her around LA so I volunteered Shane. Tina would throw a fit if I play the hospitality game with another girl – a really hot one at that.”
“So Shane’s playing tour guide?” Sam couldn’t help but chuckle.
Alice snorted. “You do know that the only place she’d take that friend of yours for a tour is the four corners of her bed, right?”
Bette gave a resigned shrug.
“At least her bedroom has a nice view of the Hollywood sign.”
Alice and Sam laughed. “Yeah, lucky her then.”
———-
A few hours later..
“I’m sorry, a what?”
“A meteor shower.”
Bette helped Tina inside the passenger seat of her colorful beetle and closed the door for her girlfriend. Walking briskly to the other side, she let herself in and put the keys in the ignition.
“When is it?”
“Tomorrow. God, I’m so psyched about it..”
“What’s so exciting about a bunch of rocks falling from the sky?” Bette asked as she brought Double D roaring into life.
Tina let out a huge breath, slightly disappointed by her girlfriend’s obvious lack of enthusiasm. She stared outside the window as they pulled away from the Planet’s parking lot and into the streets of West Hollywood. “It’s not just a “bunch of rocks” falling from the sky. There’s a sense of romanticism there, a bit of poetry and art and a huge dose of wonderment in the vision of the night sky being littered with falling meteors and stars. It’s beautiful, spell-binding, utterly enthralling.” She exclaimed with unbridled passion. Her eyes twinkled, her voice airy and light. She was practically swooning at the images inside her mind. Yeah, she was such a sucker for astronomy and she knew it.
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See… My heart dropped at page 30. I knew something sad was on its way. I really love how you write. So good! Soooo good! But please fix this. It’s too good to end it like how I think it is. Unless you’re doing it like the show which has a chapter 2.
So great to see this story back.Tina should go with Bette.
Oh, no! I feared this might happen, but I trust you to make everything turn out right for our girls. BTW since you left it like that, you can’t keep us waiting long!
i can’t believe tina wants to go to different schools… and could under stand if it was money… but thats not an issue… i some times don’t under stand her… she has to realize bette will not go to yale… ok i trust you to make things right… MERRY CHRISTMAS… to you and your family… PPS
i absolutely love, love love this story and i get frustrated at the length of time between posts but when you post you soooooo make it for it!! The way you write these two (especially Bette) is just brilliant even though its quite obvious Bette is whipped by Tina i’m not sure it’s all gonna go Tinas way this time…can they really be parted long term?!! pps!
Man, I was having withdrawls & it wasn’t pretty…I am so glad that you are back. It was a long chapter & was way wirth the read. very funny & sexy.. I loved F4’S pranks-they were classic. Great job!!!!!
That was sad and hope Tina will go with Bette. The F4’s spranks is funny. Please post soon, thanks!
What a power Tina’sgotover Bette? A bit sad at the end. Hope Tina will go with Bette. These two can not be apart. Thank you for the long chapter, you are rock. PPS
Noooo long disyance never works. Suck it up Tina and go to Yale or just let Bette go to USC, it really doesn’t matter where you go to school, it’s how you run with the big boys! PPS
I’m so going to cry! They need a happy ending! Fix this, please!!!
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO :(
ur gonna split them up. tina is right bette needs to grow and so does she.. distance will only make the heart grow fonder! please don’t let tina hook up with guys:)PPS
great chapteroh god what an ending!! PPS
Damn, I so saw that coming but still my heart broke a liitle. I am glad Tina is going to give Bette what she needs. I just hope they make it through college still together. I love this Story. Thank you
OMG! All mighty queen of the induced heart attack, please spare us this agony and let this be a happy ending. Thanks for the post.
Wow, a 33-page update. You’re an awesome writer, Alchemy. The lovebirds’ “unique” reviewing method in the last chapter is awfully funny! :> I’m not familiar with HYD but I have a bad feeling on how this story is gonna end. So Alchemy, if I go down on my knees and beg, would you consider deviating from the probable gloomy ending of that story and give us a happy ending instead? I don’t know how their relationship will survive such distance and painful parting. There’s enough gloom in the real world right now what with the global recession and all the other shit that when I retreat into the fictional world of these young, horny lovebirds, I just want to see them happy, together and in love. Please, please fix this ending, Alchemy. Anyway, thanks a lot for sharing this story and writing these lovely, kilometric updates! And Merry Chrismas to you and your loved ones!!! :>
great story , please update soon