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Just The Girl – Chapter Fifty Three (a HYD-inspired fic)
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“Overly cautious.” Tina agreed. “Jeez Porter, you’re absolutely audacious and bullheaded most of the time but when it comes to certain things, your views are completely archaic and anachronistic.”
“Say what?!”
“I said,”
Bette waved a hand. “I know what you said, and weirdly enough, I know what you mean. But why the highfalutin words? Did you swallow a dictionary or something?”
Tina folded her arms and stuck her nose up in the air. “I’m expanding my vocabulary. Ten new words a day.”
“Let me guess, you’re still stuck in the A words?” Bette chided.
“There’s a lot of them.” The blonde defended herself.
Bette chuckled. “You know what else starts with A?”
“What?”
“Anal.”
Tina’s jaw dropped down, completely appalled by what her girlfriend was trying to imply. “Ass!”
“Tsk tsk tsk.. that’s how you expand your vocabulary? The classier term is buttocks or derrière, my dear.”
“Shut up!”
Bette laughed. “I see your words are getting deeper and more profound by the second..”
“Arg!” The blonde scowled.
“Arg? Is that even a word?”
“Porter!”
Tina frowned and faced away from her playful girlfriend, feeling her level of annoyance increase significantly. Bette caught wind of her sudden shift in mood and wisely stopped her ribbing. Uh-oh.
“Hey..” She gently called out to the blonde, her hand inching towards the balled fist on Tina’s lap. The moment their skins made contact, Tina swatted the offending hand away, causing Bette to flinch. Well this was bad, Bette bit her lip. Not only had she shot down Tina’s desire to watch something that seemed to fascinate her immensely, but she had made fun of her as well. And now she was pissed. Great job Porter.
Damage control, her mind screamed.
Oh man, she was hoping for a whole night in bed with Tina on Wednesday, but what the heck? Her wants and needs can wait. Tina would always come first.
“Baby, guess who has a high powered telescope stashed somewhere?”
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The next day. Porter estate.
As promised, and as a way of appeasing Tina, Bette maneuvered the golf cart around the grounds of her former home. Knowing the place like the back of her hand, she lead them both to an isolated place by the edge of a steep hill. It was the highest point in the whole estate, and it gave them a nice, unobstructed view of the night sky. Holding the steering wheel in one hand and Tina’s hand in the other, she kept her eyes on the uneven path and tried to make conversation with her silent girlfriend.
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See… My heart dropped at page 30. I knew something sad was on its way. I really love how you write. So good! Soooo good! But please fix this. It’s too good to end it like how I think it is. Unless you’re doing it like the show which has a chapter 2.
So great to see this story back.Tina should go with Bette.
Oh, no! I feared this might happen, but I trust you to make everything turn out right for our girls. BTW since you left it like that, you can’t keep us waiting long!
i can’t believe tina wants to go to different schools… and could under stand if it was money… but thats not an issue… i some times don’t under stand her… she has to realize bette will not go to yale… ok i trust you to make things right… MERRY CHRISTMAS… to you and your family… PPS
i absolutely love, love love this story and i get frustrated at the length of time between posts but when you post you soooooo make it for it!! The way you write these two (especially Bette) is just brilliant even though its quite obvious Bette is whipped by Tina i’m not sure it’s all gonna go Tinas way this time…can they really be parted long term?!! pps!
Man, I was having withdrawls & it wasn’t pretty…I am so glad that you are back. It was a long chapter & was way wirth the read. very funny & sexy.. I loved F4’S pranks-they were classic. Great job!!!!!
That was sad and hope Tina will go with Bette. The F4’s spranks is funny. Please post soon, thanks!
What a power Tina’sgotover Bette? A bit sad at the end. Hope Tina will go with Bette. These two can not be apart. Thank you for the long chapter, you are rock. PPS
Noooo long disyance never works. Suck it up Tina and go to Yale or just let Bette go to USC, it really doesn’t matter where you go to school, it’s how you run with the big boys! PPS
I’m so going to cry! They need a happy ending! Fix this, please!!!
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO :(
ur gonna split them up. tina is right bette needs to grow and so does she.. distance will only make the heart grow fonder! please don’t let tina hook up with guys:)PPS
great chapteroh god what an ending!! PPS
Damn, I so saw that coming but still my heart broke a liitle. I am glad Tina is going to give Bette what she needs. I just hope they make it through college still together. I love this Story. Thank you
OMG! All mighty queen of the induced heart attack, please spare us this agony and let this be a happy ending. Thanks for the post.
Wow, a 33-page update. You’re an awesome writer, Alchemy. The lovebirds’ “unique” reviewing method in the last chapter is awfully funny! :> I’m not familiar with HYD but I have a bad feeling on how this story is gonna end. So Alchemy, if I go down on my knees and beg, would you consider deviating from the probable gloomy ending of that story and give us a happy ending instead? I don’t know how their relationship will survive such distance and painful parting. There’s enough gloom in the real world right now what with the global recession and all the other shit that when I retreat into the fictional world of these young, horny lovebirds, I just want to see them happy, together and in love. Please, please fix this ending, Alchemy. Anyway, thanks a lot for sharing this story and writing these lovely, kilometric updates! And Merry Chrismas to you and your loved ones!!! :>
great story , please update soon