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Just The Girl – Chapter Fifty Three (a HYD-inspired fic)
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Bette blinked and briefly looked at Tina through the corner of her eyes.
“What?” Tina asked, her girlfriend’s silence pulling her out from her dreamy stupor.
Poetry? Art? “I don’t know about you love, but I prefer poetry on paper and art on walls. And really, there’s nothing romantic about giant intergalactic rocks hurtling towards the earth, threatening to wipe out the human race.”
It was Tina’s turn to give her girlfriend an unbelieving look. “What the heck are you talking about?”
Bette sighed, gripping the steering wheel tightly and staring intently at the road ahead. “Have you seen Armageddon and Deep Impact? Shit like that can happen, you know.”
Tina responded by chuckling at her girlfriend’s baseless fears and paranoia. “Are you serious?”
The brunette’s jaws clenched. “Yes.”
The blonde laughed some more. “Sometimes, you can be really funny..”
Bette rolled her eyes. “Yeah, my comedic skills are at par with your blatant disregard for safety and self-preservation.”
Tina bit the tip of her thumb to try to hold back her laughter. She could see that Bette was dead serious, and laughing at a serious Porter was never a good thing. She was really scared then? So cute. “You’ve got it all wrong babe. Armageddon and Deep Impact were movies about asteroids, not meteors. A meteor shower is basically a celestial light show, cosmic debris are vaporized by the atmosphere before they even hit the earth. You really have nothing to worry about, things like this happen every month.”
Brown eyes widened in fear and surprise. “They do?”
“Yep. And look love, we’re not dead.” Tina grinned.
Bette pursed her lips together and exhaled loudly, not wanting to admit that she was wrong. “I still think its unsafe and risky, and like every thing else, it has potential for danger.”
“You’re incorrigible.”
“I’m cautious.”
“Obviously. The end of the world huh? Don’t tell me you Porters have an underground bunker hidden beneath your giant estate in preparation for such catastrophic events..” Tina raised an eyebrow, a hint of teasing in her voice.
Her girlfriend’s silence answered her question.
“Omigod! You do?!”
“Cautious.” Bette reminded the blonde. Her grandfather, ever the paranoid loon, had that bunker built during the peak of the cold war. She hasn’t been in that place since she and the gang were kids, mostly because the enclosed space scared the crap out of them and brought out their claustrophobic selves.
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See… My heart dropped at page 30. I knew something sad was on its way. I really love how you write. So good! Soooo good! But please fix this. It’s too good to end it like how I think it is. Unless you’re doing it like the show which has a chapter 2.
So great to see this story back.Tina should go with Bette.
Oh, no! I feared this might happen, but I trust you to make everything turn out right for our girls. BTW since you left it like that, you can’t keep us waiting long!
i can’t believe tina wants to go to different schools… and could under stand if it was money… but thats not an issue… i some times don’t under stand her… she has to realize bette will not go to yale… ok i trust you to make things right… MERRY CHRISTMAS… to you and your family… PPS
i absolutely love, love love this story and i get frustrated at the length of time between posts but when you post you soooooo make it for it!! The way you write these two (especially Bette) is just brilliant even though its quite obvious Bette is whipped by Tina i’m not sure it’s all gonna go Tinas way this time…can they really be parted long term?!! pps!
Man, I was having withdrawls & it wasn’t pretty…I am so glad that you are back. It was a long chapter & was way wirth the read. very funny & sexy.. I loved F4’S pranks-they were classic. Great job!!!!!
That was sad and hope Tina will go with Bette. The F4’s spranks is funny. Please post soon, thanks!
What a power Tina’sgotover Bette? A bit sad at the end. Hope Tina will go with Bette. These two can not be apart. Thank you for the long chapter, you are rock. PPS
Noooo long disyance never works. Suck it up Tina and go to Yale or just let Bette go to USC, it really doesn’t matter where you go to school, it’s how you run with the big boys! PPS
I’m so going to cry! They need a happy ending! Fix this, please!!!
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO :(
ur gonna split them up. tina is right bette needs to grow and so does she.. distance will only make the heart grow fonder! please don’t let tina hook up with guys:)PPS
great chapteroh god what an ending!! PPS
Damn, I so saw that coming but still my heart broke a liitle. I am glad Tina is going to give Bette what she needs. I just hope they make it through college still together. I love this Story. Thank you
OMG! All mighty queen of the induced heart attack, please spare us this agony and let this be a happy ending. Thanks for the post.
Wow, a 33-page update. You’re an awesome writer, Alchemy. The lovebirds’ “unique” reviewing method in the last chapter is awfully funny! :> I’m not familiar with HYD but I have a bad feeling on how this story is gonna end. So Alchemy, if I go down on my knees and beg, would you consider deviating from the probable gloomy ending of that story and give us a happy ending instead? I don’t know how their relationship will survive such distance and painful parting. There’s enough gloom in the real world right now what with the global recession and all the other shit that when I retreat into the fictional world of these young, horny lovebirds, I just want to see them happy, together and in love. Please, please fix this ending, Alchemy. Anyway, thanks a lot for sharing this story and writing these lovely, kilometric updates! And Merry Chrismas to you and your loved ones!!! :>
great story , please update soon