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    Just The Girl – Chapter Fifty Three (a HYD-inspired fic)

    Story written on December 21, 2008 by Alchemy10.
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    Number of Comments: 17
    Words: 33352
    Story Shortlink: https://mail.assertive-maroon-jellyfish.104-250-143-187.cpanel.site/?p=72075
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    For you, anything..

     

    And Bette and Tina? They decided to come, dressed to the nines as Fred Astaire and Ginger Rogers, respectively. Her curly brown hair pulled back from her face, Bette rocked her form fitting Stella McCartney suit. With the jacket’s buttons undone and the white top underneath dipping low, she sent hearts aflutter with the amount of juicy cleavage that she was revealing. Her girlfriend further fanned the flames of desire by complimenting Bette’s outfit with a white, low cut dress that clung on in all the right places. Even the jealous souls in attendance had to admit that Tina looked damned fine tonight. Bette would argue that she looked mighty fine every night.

     

    Needless to say, the stunning pair caused palpitations throughout the entire evening.

     

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    “Wow.. this is nice..” Bette smiled as she surveyed the small balcony on the second floor. It was littered with tiny candles, its only source of illumination apart from the soft moonlight bathing the space. It was probably the most and only romantic thing the two will get to see tonight. Inside the house, loud jazz beats made the walls thump, telling them that this party was all about celebration and debauchery than anything else.

     

    “Yeah..” Tina squeezed her girlfriend’s hand affectionately, gazing at the candles. “It’s like a horror house.”

     

    Bette looked at the blonde with a frown on her face. “You’re a mood killer.”

     

    “I was kidding.” Tina did that cute wink of hers.

     

    Bette walked towards the middle and turned to look at the her girlfriend.

     

    “Hey Ginger?”

     

    “Yeah?”

     

    “Dance with me?” A dazzling smile formed on Bette’s lips as she extended a hand to Tina.

     

    More than happy to accept, Tina placed her hand over the brunette’s. She giggled when she was quickly pulled into a pair of strong arms. “Ready Fred?”

     

    “Always.” Bette winked and began to lead, swaying them both to the music of Cole Porter’s Night and Day.

     

    —–

     

    “..so I talked to your dad yesterday, he told me all about the two of you driving to USC tomorrow for a tour.”

     

    “Hmm.” Tina nodded dumbly, the mere mention of USC jolting her to complete wakefulness. It was enough to pull her back from her fairytale evening and send her crashing to reality. For the past few weeks, she had been bottling everything in – keeping a strong facade in front of Bette while she struggled with the options made available to her. It was only during a few days before graduation that she made up her mind and told Ken her decision. It had been hard, but he was very supportive. Now the only thing left was to tell Bette.

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    1. See… My heart dropped at page 30. I knew something sad was on its way. I really love how you write. So good! Soooo good! But please fix this. It’s too good to end it like how I think it is. Unless you’re doing it like the show which has a chapter 2.

    3. Oh, no! I feared this might happen, but I trust you to make everything turn out right for our girls. BTW since you left it like that, you can’t keep us waiting long!

    4. i can’t believe tina wants to go to different schools… and could under stand if it was money… but thats not an issue… i some times don’t under stand her… she has to realize bette will not go to yale… ok i trust you to make things right… MERRY CHRISTMAS… to you and your family… PPS

    5. i absolutely love, love love this story and i get frustrated at the length of time between posts but when you post you soooooo make it for it!! The way you write these two (especially Bette) is just brilliant even though its quite obvious Bette is whipped by Tina i’m not sure it’s all gonna go Tinas way this time…can they really be parted long term?!! pps!

    6. Man, I was having withdrawls & it wasn’t pretty…I am so glad that you are back. It was a long chapter & was way wirth the read. very funny & sexy.. I loved F4’S pranks-they were classic. Great job!!!!!

    8. What a power Tina’sgotover Bette? A bit sad at the end. Hope Tina will go with Bette. These two can not be apart. Thank you for the long chapter, you are rock. PPS

    9. Noooo long disyance never works. Suck it up Tina and go to Yale or just let Bette go to USC, it really doesn’t matter where you go to school, it’s how you run with the big boys! PPS

    12. ur gonna split them up. tina is right bette needs to grow and so does she.. distance will only make the heart grow fonder! please don’t let tina hook up with guys:)PPS

    14. Damn, I so saw that coming but still my heart broke a liitle. I am glad Tina is going to give Bette what she needs. I just hope they make it through college still together. I love this Story. Thank you

    16. Wow, a 33-page update. You’re an awesome writer, Alchemy. The lovebirds’ “unique” reviewing method in the last chapter is awfully funny! :> I’m not familiar with HYD but I have a bad feeling on how this story is gonna end. So Alchemy, if I go down on my knees and beg, would you consider deviating from the probable gloomy ending of that story and give us a happy ending instead? I don’t know how their relationship will survive such distance and painful parting. There’s enough gloom in the real world right now what with the global recession and all the other shit that when I retreat into the fictional world of these young, horny lovebirds, I just want to see them happy, together and in love. Please, please fix this ending, Alchemy. Anyway, thanks a lot for sharing this story and writing these lovely, kilometric updates! And Merry Chrismas to you and your loved ones!!! :>

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