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Just The Girl – Chapter Fifty Three (a HYD-inspired fic)
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The sight was alarming.. and the smell? Dear God, she blanched as her stomach lurched and did flip-flops.
“Woof!”
Her gaze shifted towards her leather sofa where a huge Siberian Husky was looking at her with big eyes. “Oh fuck.” She cursed beneath her breath, she had a morbid fear of dogs. “Good doggy, please don’t go here.” She pleaded and froze when the animal jumped off the couch and stalked towards her. Driven by curiosity, the dog proceeded to sniff her. Phyllis didn’t dare breath when he was doing that.
Satisfied with what he had deemed to be acceptable, the dog lifted its hind leg and peed at the shaken woman. After marking her as his territory, he sauntered off, leaving the horrified headmistress with her mouth agape and her head reeling.
Like what happened on top of the stage an hour ago, a flash of red caught her attention.
You have always complained that we were turning your school into a zoo.
Said the note that was taped to her desk.
You were right.
“F4!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!” Phyllis Kroll shrieked like a banshee in heat.
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A few days later.
Seniors Graduation Ball.
A rented mansion overlooking the coast in Malibu was the setting for the traditional graduation ball. After months of debate, the students organizing the event finally settled on a classic Hollywood theme with the classy clothes, fancy jewelry and all the glitz and glamour that accompanies it – if only to give everyone a chance to flaunt their wealth to their equally blessed classmates.
Usually prone to skip school related events, the powerful four decided to journey down from their place up above and mingle with their batchmates for the last time. Looking every bit like the celebrities that they are, they certainly did not disappoint their adoring public. Of course, they all came with dates – even Shane, who brought along a fame-whoring starlet but was curiously texting someone else the entire time. Meanwhile, Dana and Alice came as Spencer Tracy and Katherine Hepburn – and portrayed them quite realistically with their constant bickering – playful and otherwise. Sam and Helena kept to themselves the whole night, making up for lost time since the young Peabody’s three day trip to New York.
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See… My heart dropped at page 30. I knew something sad was on its way. I really love how you write. So good! Soooo good! But please fix this. It’s too good to end it like how I think it is. Unless you’re doing it like the show which has a chapter 2.
So great to see this story back.Tina should go with Bette.
Oh, no! I feared this might happen, but I trust you to make everything turn out right for our girls. BTW since you left it like that, you can’t keep us waiting long!
i can’t believe tina wants to go to different schools… and could under stand if it was money… but thats not an issue… i some times don’t under stand her… she has to realize bette will not go to yale… ok i trust you to make things right… MERRY CHRISTMAS… to you and your family… PPS
i absolutely love, love love this story and i get frustrated at the length of time between posts but when you post you soooooo make it for it!! The way you write these two (especially Bette) is just brilliant even though its quite obvious Bette is whipped by Tina i’m not sure it’s all gonna go Tinas way this time…can they really be parted long term?!! pps!
Man, I was having withdrawls & it wasn’t pretty…I am so glad that you are back. It was a long chapter & was way wirth the read. very funny & sexy.. I loved F4’S pranks-they were classic. Great job!!!!!
That was sad and hope Tina will go with Bette. The F4’s spranks is funny. Please post soon, thanks!
What a power Tina’sgotover Bette? A bit sad at the end. Hope Tina will go with Bette. These two can not be apart. Thank you for the long chapter, you are rock. PPS
Noooo long disyance never works. Suck it up Tina and go to Yale or just let Bette go to USC, it really doesn’t matter where you go to school, it’s how you run with the big boys! PPS
I’m so going to cry! They need a happy ending! Fix this, please!!!
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO :(
ur gonna split them up. tina is right bette needs to grow and so does she.. distance will only make the heart grow fonder! please don’t let tina hook up with guys:)PPS
great chapteroh god what an ending!! PPS
Damn, I so saw that coming but still my heart broke a liitle. I am glad Tina is going to give Bette what she needs. I just hope they make it through college still together. I love this Story. Thank you
OMG! All mighty queen of the induced heart attack, please spare us this agony and let this be a happy ending. Thanks for the post.
Wow, a 33-page update. You’re an awesome writer, Alchemy. The lovebirds’ “unique” reviewing method in the last chapter is awfully funny! :> I’m not familiar with HYD but I have a bad feeling on how this story is gonna end. So Alchemy, if I go down on my knees and beg, would you consider deviating from the probable gloomy ending of that story and give us a happy ending instead? I don’t know how their relationship will survive such distance and painful parting. There’s enough gloom in the real world right now what with the global recession and all the other shit that when I retreat into the fictional world of these young, horny lovebirds, I just want to see them happy, together and in love. Please, please fix this ending, Alchemy. Anyway, thanks a lot for sharing this story and writing these lovely, kilometric updates! And Merry Chrismas to you and your loved ones!!! :>
great story , please update soon