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    Just The Girl – Chapter Fifty Three (a HYD-inspired fic)

    Story written on December 21, 2008 by Alchemy10.
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    Number of Comments: 17
    Words: 33352
    Story Shortlink: https://mail.assertive-maroon-jellyfish.104-250-143-187.cpanel.site/?p=72075
    Author Notes:

    For you, anything..

     

    You’re dead.

     

    F4

     

    PS. Kidding! Thanks for the memories though. And.. heads up.

     

    Uh-oh. Phyllis gulped. With fear in her eyes, she slowly looked up.

     

    And that was Shane’s cue.

     

    Somewhere in the audience, a thumb pressed down on a button on a small remote. Instantly, an ominous sounding chime started playing near the stage – slow at first then gradually increasing in speed.

     

    Ting..

     

    Ting..

     

    Ting..

     

    Ting..

     

    …

    …

    …

     

    BAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAANG!

     

    The students at the front row shrieked in surprise as a load of white liquid exploded over the headmistress’ head, covering her from head to toe in sticky goo.

     

    A nasty grin spread across Alice’s face as she nodded at Bette. “I told ya she looks good in white.”

     

    “That may be, but she can carry different colors too.” Bette answered back as Shane pressed the second button and confetti rained down unto the stage, making a human rainbow out of Phyllis Kroll.

     

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    “Proud of yourself, aren’t you?” Tina raised an eyebrow and placed a hand on her hip as soon as she caught sight of her girlfriend jogging towards her after the ceremony.

     

    “Of course.” Bette smirked as she leaned in and gave the blonde a quick peck on the cheek. “Admit it, you enjoyed the show.”

     

    “It was organized, I’ll give you that. But,”

     

    “But?”

     

    “It was juvenile. Seriously Porter, is that the legacy you want to leave behind? A history of pranks and bullying?”

     

    “Oh c’mon, the four pranks were done so we could leave school with a bang. That..” She pointed to the barren area a couple of meters from the amphitheater where a huge soon-to-rise sign was placed. “..is our legacy.”

     

    Tina squinted at the letters. “The student center?”

     

    “The F4 Student Center.” Bette corrected. Funded by the four from their own deep pockets. This was her first major splurge after access to the Porter billions was restored.

     

    “So Redwind gets another building, what’s new?” Tina sighed. They should’ve spent the money on a public school – where assistance from those with money were badly needed. She was about to tell Bette this when a thought occurred to her. “Wait a minute, you said four pranks?” She asked, she was pretty sure she only witnessed three play out in the ceremony.

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    1. See… My heart dropped at page 30. I knew something sad was on its way. I really love how you write. So good! Soooo good! But please fix this. It’s too good to end it like how I think it is. Unless you’re doing it like the show which has a chapter 2.

    3. Oh, no! I feared this might happen, but I trust you to make everything turn out right for our girls. BTW since you left it like that, you can’t keep us waiting long!

    4. i can’t believe tina wants to go to different schools… and could under stand if it was money… but thats not an issue… i some times don’t under stand her… she has to realize bette will not go to yale… ok i trust you to make things right… MERRY CHRISTMAS… to you and your family… PPS

    5. i absolutely love, love love this story and i get frustrated at the length of time between posts but when you post you soooooo make it for it!! The way you write these two (especially Bette) is just brilliant even though its quite obvious Bette is whipped by Tina i’m not sure it’s all gonna go Tinas way this time…can they really be parted long term?!! pps!

    6. Man, I was having withdrawls & it wasn’t pretty…I am so glad that you are back. It was a long chapter & was way wirth the read. very funny & sexy.. I loved F4’S pranks-they were classic. Great job!!!!!

    8. What a power Tina’sgotover Bette? A bit sad at the end. Hope Tina will go with Bette. These two can not be apart. Thank you for the long chapter, you are rock. PPS

    9. Noooo long disyance never works. Suck it up Tina and go to Yale or just let Bette go to USC, it really doesn’t matter where you go to school, it’s how you run with the big boys! PPS

    12. ur gonna split them up. tina is right bette needs to grow and so does she.. distance will only make the heart grow fonder! please don’t let tina hook up with guys:)PPS

    14. Damn, I so saw that coming but still my heart broke a liitle. I am glad Tina is going to give Bette what she needs. I just hope they make it through college still together. I love this Story. Thank you

    16. Wow, a 33-page update. You’re an awesome writer, Alchemy. The lovebirds’ “unique” reviewing method in the last chapter is awfully funny! :> I’m not familiar with HYD but I have a bad feeling on how this story is gonna end. So Alchemy, if I go down on my knees and beg, would you consider deviating from the probable gloomy ending of that story and give us a happy ending instead? I don’t know how their relationship will survive such distance and painful parting. There’s enough gloom in the real world right now what with the global recession and all the other shit that when I retreat into the fictional world of these young, horny lovebirds, I just want to see them happy, together and in love. Please, please fix this ending, Alchemy. Anyway, thanks a lot for sharing this story and writing these lovely, kilometric updates! And Merry Chrismas to you and your loved ones!!! :>

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