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Just The Girl – Chapter Fifty Three (a HYD-inspired fic)
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“Aww, my poor baby.” Bette hid her smile behind Tina’s hair as she placed a succession of kisses on her head. “I didn’t know you took up ballet..”
“I sucked at it. My first recital was also my last. Besides, I can’t do all the moves and I’m not that flexible.”
“Hey, I beg to disagree. I find you pretty limber..”
Tina laughed. “Only when it counts, babe.”
“Then I should be thankful.” Bette winked. “So did any one of your hundred wishes ever come true?”
The blonde paused and smiled, her eyes twinkling as she looked at Bette. “Just one.”
“Yeah? What was it?”
“It’s a secret.” Tina leaned in and brushed her lips lightly against Bette’s.
“Fine.” Bette smiled into the kiss. “Did you wish for bigger breasts? Cause I swear you got shortchanged in that one. Ow!” She laughed as Tina bopped her on the head. “I was joking!”
“It was a bad joke.”
“Sorry.”
“Maybe I shouldn’t have wished for someone like you after all.” Tina crossed her arms and pouted, edging out of the vehicle and stomping towards the illuminated area in the near distance.
“You wished for me?” Bette ran after the blonde.
“No, I wished for someone kind, compassionate, sweet and patient to come along and sweep me off my feet.”
“And?”
“Instead, I got you.” Tina replied dryly, rolling her eyes. “And I think I got duped by the stars.
Now it was Bette’s turn to pout. “What? You can’t be serious..” She whined.
Payback for the boob joke, Tina hid a naughty smile. She stopped at the area that Bette had arranged for tonight’s activities. “Why are there two?” She pointed at the expensive telescopes positioned side by side.
“Cause I know you’d hog the telescope when the meteor shower starts. Figured that if I was to wait for it all night, I might as well get to watch it too.” Bette said matter-of-fact.
“Fair point.” Tina acquiesced.
“What time did they say it will begin?”
Tina looked at her watch. “In about an hour.”
“What will we do till then?” Bette wiggled her brows suggestively, her voice dripping honey. She didn’t order people to set up a blanket and a couple of pillows in here for nothing.
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See… My heart dropped at page 30. I knew something sad was on its way. I really love how you write. So good! Soooo good! But please fix this. It’s too good to end it like how I think it is. Unless you’re doing it like the show which has a chapter 2.
So great to see this story back.Tina should go with Bette.
Oh, no! I feared this might happen, but I trust you to make everything turn out right for our girls. BTW since you left it like that, you can’t keep us waiting long!
i can’t believe tina wants to go to different schools… and could under stand if it was money… but thats not an issue… i some times don’t under stand her… she has to realize bette will not go to yale… ok i trust you to make things right… MERRY CHRISTMAS… to you and your family… PPS
i absolutely love, love love this story and i get frustrated at the length of time between posts but when you post you soooooo make it for it!! The way you write these two (especially Bette) is just brilliant even though its quite obvious Bette is whipped by Tina i’m not sure it’s all gonna go Tinas way this time…can they really be parted long term?!! pps!
Man, I was having withdrawls & it wasn’t pretty…I am so glad that you are back. It was a long chapter & was way wirth the read. very funny & sexy.. I loved F4’S pranks-they were classic. Great job!!!!!
That was sad and hope Tina will go with Bette. The F4’s spranks is funny. Please post soon, thanks!
What a power Tina’sgotover Bette? A bit sad at the end. Hope Tina will go with Bette. These two can not be apart. Thank you for the long chapter, you are rock. PPS
Noooo long disyance never works. Suck it up Tina and go to Yale or just let Bette go to USC, it really doesn’t matter where you go to school, it’s how you run with the big boys! PPS
I’m so going to cry! They need a happy ending! Fix this, please!!!
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO :(
ur gonna split them up. tina is right bette needs to grow and so does she.. distance will only make the heart grow fonder! please don’t let tina hook up with guys:)PPS
great chapteroh god what an ending!! PPS
Damn, I so saw that coming but still my heart broke a liitle. I am glad Tina is going to give Bette what she needs. I just hope they make it through college still together. I love this Story. Thank you
OMG! All mighty queen of the induced heart attack, please spare us this agony and let this be a happy ending. Thanks for the post.
Wow, a 33-page update. You’re an awesome writer, Alchemy. The lovebirds’ “unique” reviewing method in the last chapter is awfully funny! :> I’m not familiar with HYD but I have a bad feeling on how this story is gonna end. So Alchemy, if I go down on my knees and beg, would you consider deviating from the probable gloomy ending of that story and give us a happy ending instead? I don’t know how their relationship will survive such distance and painful parting. There’s enough gloom in the real world right now what with the global recession and all the other shit that when I retreat into the fictional world of these young, horny lovebirds, I just want to see them happy, together and in love. Please, please fix this ending, Alchemy. Anyway, thanks a lot for sharing this story and writing these lovely, kilometric updates! And Merry Chrismas to you and your loved ones!!! :>
great story , please update soon