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Just The Girl – Chapter Fifty Three (a HYD-inspired fic)
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“Damn, caught me there.” Bette answered, peering into the telescope with a goofy grin on her face.
Tina smiled. She momentarily tore her eyes from her telescope to gaze at the brunette. She frowned when she caught her girlfriend’s lie. Instead of staring at her butt, or even at the sky, Bette was pointing her telescope down into the cliff below. Her frown got deeper as Bette’s grin got bigger. What the fuck? She adjusted her own telescope and pointed it down, trying to see what got her girlfriend so amused and preoccupied. All she could see were mansions.. cars.. gardens.. pools.. and.. SHIT. Tina twisted her mouth and widened her eyes. She was looking at some girl night swimming in the nude at one of the houses below. Nice rack, great ass, drool-worthy body. And blonde. Alluringly blonde with a killer physique. She was SO Bette’s type. Her brows got knit together as she heard a distinct sound from her companion. Was that..? She asked herself, feeling her cheeks getting warm. Yeah.. it was definitely a wolf-whistle.
Tina gritted her teeth, pulled back from the telescope, straightened up and smacked Bette behind the head.
“Ow! What the fuck?!” Bette cried out, one hand rubbing her head and the other one placed over one side of her face. Tina’s slap drove her face right into the telescope. Now there was a big circle, the size of the eyepiece around her right eye. “What was that for?!”
“That obnoxious whistle I just heard, did that come out of this mouth?” Tina asked, pinching the sides of Bette’s face and tugging at the skin.
“Ow! Ow! Ow!” Bette’s face contorted in pain. “What the heck did I do?” She whined when the blonde let her go.
“Breathtaking, huh?” Tina arched an eyebrow, shifting her gaze to the house below and quickly back to the brunette, letting the girl know that she had caught her. Try to wiggle yourself out of this one, she narrowed her eyes at her girlfriend’s wandering gaze.
“Uh..” Bette giggled nervously, sweating bullets at the murderous look on the blonde’s face. “..what I meant was, uh.. b-breathtaking in her ugliness.. she was um.. positively hideous.” She scrunched her nose and exaggeratedly rolled her eyes. “Swimming in the nude for everyone to see. Ewwww..” She made a disgusted face. If it looked forced and contrived, it probably was. “It was like witnessing an accident, you know its bad but you just can’t look away.”
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See… My heart dropped at page 30. I knew something sad was on its way. I really love how you write. So good! Soooo good! But please fix this. It’s too good to end it like how I think it is. Unless you’re doing it like the show which has a chapter 2.
So great to see this story back.Tina should go with Bette.
Oh, no! I feared this might happen, but I trust you to make everything turn out right for our girls. BTW since you left it like that, you can’t keep us waiting long!
i can’t believe tina wants to go to different schools… and could under stand if it was money… but thats not an issue… i some times don’t under stand her… she has to realize bette will not go to yale… ok i trust you to make things right… MERRY CHRISTMAS… to you and your family… PPS
i absolutely love, love love this story and i get frustrated at the length of time between posts but when you post you soooooo make it for it!! The way you write these two (especially Bette) is just brilliant even though its quite obvious Bette is whipped by Tina i’m not sure it’s all gonna go Tinas way this time…can they really be parted long term?!! pps!
Man, I was having withdrawls & it wasn’t pretty…I am so glad that you are back. It was a long chapter & was way wirth the read. very funny & sexy.. I loved F4’S pranks-they were classic. Great job!!!!!
That was sad and hope Tina will go with Bette. The F4’s spranks is funny. Please post soon, thanks!
What a power Tina’sgotover Bette? A bit sad at the end. Hope Tina will go with Bette. These two can not be apart. Thank you for the long chapter, you are rock. PPS
Noooo long disyance never works. Suck it up Tina and go to Yale or just let Bette go to USC, it really doesn’t matter where you go to school, it’s how you run with the big boys! PPS
I’m so going to cry! They need a happy ending! Fix this, please!!!
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO :(
ur gonna split them up. tina is right bette needs to grow and so does she.. distance will only make the heart grow fonder! please don’t let tina hook up with guys:)PPS
great chapteroh god what an ending!! PPS
Damn, I so saw that coming but still my heart broke a liitle. I am glad Tina is going to give Bette what she needs. I just hope they make it through college still together. I love this Story. Thank you
OMG! All mighty queen of the induced heart attack, please spare us this agony and let this be a happy ending. Thanks for the post.
Wow, a 33-page update. You’re an awesome writer, Alchemy. The lovebirds’ “unique” reviewing method in the last chapter is awfully funny! :> I’m not familiar with HYD but I have a bad feeling on how this story is gonna end. So Alchemy, if I go down on my knees and beg, would you consider deviating from the probable gloomy ending of that story and give us a happy ending instead? I don’t know how their relationship will survive such distance and painful parting. There’s enough gloom in the real world right now what with the global recession and all the other shit that when I retreat into the fictional world of these young, horny lovebirds, I just want to see them happy, together and in love. Please, please fix this ending, Alchemy. Anyway, thanks a lot for sharing this story and writing these lovely, kilometric updates! And Merry Chrismas to you and your loved ones!!! :>
great story , please update soon