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    Just The Girl – Chapter Fifty Three (a HYD-inspired fic)

    Story written on December 21, 2008 by Alchemy10.
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    Words: 33352
    Story Shortlink: https://mail.assertive-maroon-jellyfish.104-250-143-187.cpanel.site/?p=72075
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    For you, anything..

     

    What will they do? “Stargazing!” Tina proclaimed, completely elated. That certainly burst her girlfriend’s horny bubble. Tina turned around and headed straight to a telescope.

     

    Bette slowly and silently expelled a huge sum of air. She couldn’t let Tina hear her, the blonde would be so disappointed if she knew just how much she didn’t share her enthusiasm. Stargazing would have been a romantic thing if it only involved the two of them, a blanket, their lips, their tongues and their hands. But throwing an attention-grabbing telescope in the mix did nothing but put a damper on things. With a heavy heart – and even heavier feet – she dragged herself beside the blonde. Mimicking Tina, she closed one eye and peered into her telescope.

     

    Shit, this is so boring. Like watching paint dry, she thought after a few minutes ticked by. Her only saving grace was the happy sighs that she heard from her companion. If Tina was happy, than that was enough to tide her over for the next few hours.

     

    Beside her, Tina was talking animatedly about the different celestial bodies that she was seeing. After talking for fifteen minutes about the different constellations, she launched straight into a lecture about Mars. She really knew her stuff, Bette smiled wistfully. Too bad she couldn’t see just what the blonde was pointing out, she gave another suppressed sigh. She moved her telescope left to right, up and down. Maybe she was unimaginative but there’s really nothing to see except tiny dots of light and.. more tiny dots of light.. and even more tiny dots of light.. and..

     

    Hmmm.. well well well.. what do we have here? A cheeky smile tugged at Bette’s lips.

     

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    “It’s so beautiful..” Tina breathed out in complete awe as she stared right into the eyepiece. This was a perfect night to gaze at the stars. The sky was unusually clear and free from the obstruction that clouds posed. In a few minutes, the real show would begin – and she couldn’t hardly contain her excitement.

     

    “It is.” Bette agreed. “Very nice..”

     

    “Breathtaking..”

     

    “Uh-huh.”

     

    Tina smiled. “You’re not, by any chance, gazing at my ass, are you Porter?” She teased.

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    1. See… My heart dropped at page 30. I knew something sad was on its way. I really love how you write. So good! Soooo good! But please fix this. It’s too good to end it like how I think it is. Unless you’re doing it like the show which has a chapter 2.

    3. Oh, no! I feared this might happen, but I trust you to make everything turn out right for our girls. BTW since you left it like that, you can’t keep us waiting long!

    4. i can’t believe tina wants to go to different schools… and could under stand if it was money… but thats not an issue… i some times don’t under stand her… she has to realize bette will not go to yale… ok i trust you to make things right… MERRY CHRISTMAS… to you and your family… PPS

    5. i absolutely love, love love this story and i get frustrated at the length of time between posts but when you post you soooooo make it for it!! The way you write these two (especially Bette) is just brilliant even though its quite obvious Bette is whipped by Tina i’m not sure it’s all gonna go Tinas way this time…can they really be parted long term?!! pps!

    6. Man, I was having withdrawls & it wasn’t pretty…I am so glad that you are back. It was a long chapter & was way wirth the read. very funny & sexy.. I loved F4’S pranks-they were classic. Great job!!!!!

    8. What a power Tina’sgotover Bette? A bit sad at the end. Hope Tina will go with Bette. These two can not be apart. Thank you for the long chapter, you are rock. PPS

    9. Noooo long disyance never works. Suck it up Tina and go to Yale or just let Bette go to USC, it really doesn’t matter where you go to school, it’s how you run with the big boys! PPS

    12. ur gonna split them up. tina is right bette needs to grow and so does she.. distance will only make the heart grow fonder! please don’t let tina hook up with guys:)PPS

    14. Damn, I so saw that coming but still my heart broke a liitle. I am glad Tina is going to give Bette what she needs. I just hope they make it through college still together. I love this Story. Thank you

    16. Wow, a 33-page update. You’re an awesome writer, Alchemy. The lovebirds’ “unique” reviewing method in the last chapter is awfully funny! :> I’m not familiar with HYD but I have a bad feeling on how this story is gonna end. So Alchemy, if I go down on my knees and beg, would you consider deviating from the probable gloomy ending of that story and give us a happy ending instead? I don’t know how their relationship will survive such distance and painful parting. There’s enough gloom in the real world right now what with the global recession and all the other shit that when I retreat into the fictional world of these young, horny lovebirds, I just want to see them happy, together and in love. Please, please fix this ending, Alchemy. Anyway, thanks a lot for sharing this story and writing these lovely, kilometric updates! And Merry Chrismas to you and your loved ones!!! :>

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