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    Just The Girl – Chapter Fifty Four (a HYD-inspired fic)

    Story written on January 13, 2009 by Alchemy10.
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    Story Shortlink: https://mail.assertive-maroon-jellyfish.104-250-143-187.cpanel.site/?p=72284
    Author Notes:

    A little thing called eternity..

     

    Bette_Porter: Heeeey.. I see you. Looking good Kennard ;9

     

    Inside her own bedroom, a frustrated Tina cursed as she stared at static.

     

    Tina_Kennard: Babe, I can’t see a thing..

    Bette_Porter: Really? Shit. Wait a minute, something must be wrong with my webcam. I’ll just check out the settings. I won’t be long.

    Tina_Kennard: Okay. I’ll wait right here.

     

    Tina busied herself by a humming along to a song on the radio. She crossed her fingers, willing that her girlfriend would be able to find a way to fix the cam. She hadn’t seen Bette all day and she somehow, it made her feel incredibly antsy.

     

    Bette_Porter: Baaaack!

    Bette_Porter: I think it’s fixed now. Can you see me?

    Tina_Kennard: Nope..

    Tina_Kennard: Wait..

    Tina_Kennard: Yeah, there you are.. 

    Bette_Porter: Great :D

    Bette_Porter: For you, my baby.

     

    Bette looked directly into the camera and blew Tina a kiss.

     

    Bette_Porter: We’ll have to try this thing with a headset now. Ready?

     

    Tina stared at Bette’s image as the girl struggled to plug the headset in. Though she couldn’t hear her, she could decipher the words ‘shit’ and ‘fuck’ from Porter’s lips. She was laughing at the funny expression on Bette’s face – she was sure of that. That’s why it took her by surprise when a choked sob left her lips.

     

    She didn’t know where it came from or why, but a strong pang of loneliness and panic suddenly engulfed her chest. A huge lump formed on her throat as tears burned her eyes.

     

    Her conversation with Jenny this morning played back inside her head.

     

    Do you want to be with her? She had asked her just when Hannibal Lecter was about to decapitate his next victim.

     

    Yeah, of course.

     

    She could still remember Jenny’s sad smile. In front of them, the poor guy shouted in pain. You can’t do that from across the country, Tina.

     

    And that was the truth.

     

    A million and one questions raced through her mind while she continued to stare at Bette.

     

    Is this how it’ll be in the next few weeks? In the next months and years? Sure, there would be occasional visits, but would that be enough? Looking at Bette, she felt her heart breaking into a thousand pieces. She saw her, she read her words, and pretty soon she’d get to hear her voice. But would that be enough? When looking at Bette now, the only thing she yearned for was to touch her, to feel her, to hold her close. To smell her, to kiss her, to.. to..

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    2. wow that was a loooonnnnggg but fantastic chapter.how harsh is Bette just leaving for Yale like that!!!anyway,it will be a sad day when this story ends but yet i can’t wait til the end to find out what happens.PPS cheers

    3. There is so much that could happen, and you say the End is next…will they remain together or fall apart? I can finally read now that the tears have cleared, thanks for the post!!

    4. god how i love this story, every chapter is like a mini book! i’m not right stoked to read that the next will be the last though, i absolutely love how you write these two…especially bette! my only hope is that you keep them together and that you promise to carry on writing other stories…well????!

    5. What was Tina going to say to Bette on the beach? Will Tina be able to forgive Bette for not saying goodbye? Will Tina catch the next available flight out to Connecticut? I hope so… I can’t wait to see how you wrap everything up, but I’m really going to miss this story. Thanks for the chapter.

    8. This has/is an incredible story. I look for it daily and was so glad to see a post today. Please say it isn’t so, Your not ending it are you? Their still young and have slots to go through. A sequel maybe?.

    11. WOW!!!!! I just got a chance to read all 37 pages of it-it was a long one…but well worth it. I can understand why Bette went ahead & left-but Tina will be hurt…but I think she will understand. I hope they can work through this & I can’t wait for the next update. Great job.

    12. *Sniffle* Oh dear, this has got to be the saddest JTG chapter. *Sniffle* So begging on my knees didn’t work. *Sniffle* I don’t know how they’ll ever get to eternity when it’s hard to say they’ll even get to survive the next 24 hours, weeks or months apart. *Sniffle* I hope Tina will still change her mind but if not…then, *Thank you very much* for this lovely, funny, sometimes sexy high school TiBette tale. It’s been a great ride, Alchemy! *Crysmiles like Bette* Okay… I’m gonna go to a corner now and cry my heart out. Boohoo. :(

    17. Hey Alchemy! So glad to have you back with another chapter, but extremely sad that the end is coming. I have loved this story from the beginning as your writing is incredible. I have the feeling Tina had decided to go with Bette, but will maybe stick to their plan now that Bette has left. Bette’s letter had me teary-eyed which is one of the best things about your writing… one minute I’m laughing out loud, the next I’m choked up. Thanks for the post.

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