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    Just The Girl – Chapter Fifty Four (a HYD-inspired fic)

    Story written on January 13, 2009 by Alchemy10.
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    Words: 39603
    Story Shortlink: https://mail.assertive-maroon-jellyfish.104-250-143-187.cpanel.site/?p=72284
    Author Notes:

    A little thing called eternity..

     

    I take a deep breath as I exit the vehicle. Burbank. It’s funny to be back in this place so soon, though in different circumstances – very different.

     

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    Six days ago..

     

    Bette_Porter has signed in

    Bette_Porter: Hey

    The_Immortal_Weed: LOL

    Bette_Porter: What?

    The_Immortal_Weed: Bette_Porter? Can’t you think of a more original username?

    Bette_Porter: What’s wrong with using my real name?

    The_Immortal_Weed: Let me see..

    The_Immortal_Weed: One, it doesn’t have any ring of mystery in it. No anonymity at all. And two, it’s not clever.

    The_Immortal_Weed: Check out Dana’s username. It’s cute.

    Bette_Porter: FumblingBumbling? Its not cute. Its the truth.

    The_Immortal_Weed: Don’t be mean Bette_Porter :P

    Bette_Porter: Pfft.

    Bette_Porter: Kennard, let’s get one thing straight shall we? I did not spend an hour trying to register and figure this damn thing out just so I could chat with someone else, pick up women or have cybersex with a random guy masquerading as a girl. I came here for you. Only you. So who cares if I don’t use a more clever username?

    The_Immortal_Weed: …

    Bette_Porter: What?

    The_Immortal_Weed: Awwww babe J That’s kinda sweet.

    The_Immortal_Weed: We started on the wrong foot. How about starting this thing all over again?

    Bette_Porter: Sure

    Bette_Porter: If we’re gonna practice having a decent conversation on IM, might as well do this right.

    The_Immortal_Weed: OK. brb

    The_Immortal_Weed has signed out

     

    —-

     

    Tina_Kennard has signed in

    Bette_Porter: LOL. Nice. Hey Tina_Kennard!

    Tina_Kennard: Hey Bette_Porter!

    Bette_Porter: How’s your day?

    Tina_Kennard: It was good. Wait.. scratch that. It was great.

    Bette_Porter: That’s nice. So what did you do?

    Tina_Kennard: Movie marathon at Jen’s house.

    Bette_Porter: Oh really? We also watched a movie at Al’s place, a test screening for Lenore’s latest psycho slasher film. What did you guys watch? Chick flicks?

    Tina_Kennard: Please. Give us some more credit. We watched the first three Hannibal Lecter movies..

    Bette_Porter: Ooh.. excellent choice. First one’s my fave tho.

    Tina_Kennard: Me too. I think I developed a crush on Anthony Hopkins. Jealous?

    Bette_Porter: Of an old guy? Hardly. But if you had said Jodie Foster, then that’s another thing entirely.

    Tina_Kennard: LOL. How was the film you tested?

    Bette_Porter: Its your typical serial killer movie. Lots of blood, severed body parts, screaming women and a basic, kinda predictable plot. In short, it will probably sell and kill in the box office.

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    2. wow that was a loooonnnnggg but fantastic chapter.how harsh is Bette just leaving for Yale like that!!!anyway,it will be a sad day when this story ends but yet i can’t wait til the end to find out what happens.PPS cheers

    3. There is so much that could happen, and you say the End is next…will they remain together or fall apart? I can finally read now that the tears have cleared, thanks for the post!!

    4. god how i love this story, every chapter is like a mini book! i’m not right stoked to read that the next will be the last though, i absolutely love how you write these two…especially bette! my only hope is that you keep them together and that you promise to carry on writing other stories…well????!

    5. What was Tina going to say to Bette on the beach? Will Tina be able to forgive Bette for not saying goodbye? Will Tina catch the next available flight out to Connecticut? I hope so… I can’t wait to see how you wrap everything up, but I’m really going to miss this story. Thanks for the chapter.

    8. This has/is an incredible story. I look for it daily and was so glad to see a post today. Please say it isn’t so, Your not ending it are you? Their still young and have slots to go through. A sequel maybe?.

    11. WOW!!!!! I just got a chance to read all 37 pages of it-it was a long one…but well worth it. I can understand why Bette went ahead & left-but Tina will be hurt…but I think she will understand. I hope they can work through this & I can’t wait for the next update. Great job.

    12. *Sniffle* Oh dear, this has got to be the saddest JTG chapter. *Sniffle* So begging on my knees didn’t work. *Sniffle* I don’t know how they’ll ever get to eternity when it’s hard to say they’ll even get to survive the next 24 hours, weeks or months apart. *Sniffle* I hope Tina will still change her mind but if not…then, *Thank you very much* for this lovely, funny, sometimes sexy high school TiBette tale. It’s been a great ride, Alchemy! *Crysmiles like Bette* Okay… I’m gonna go to a corner now and cry my heart out. Boohoo. :(

    17. Hey Alchemy! So glad to have you back with another chapter, but extremely sad that the end is coming. I have loved this story from the beginning as your writing is incredible. I have the feeling Tina had decided to go with Bette, but will maybe stick to their plan now that Bette has left. Bette’s letter had me teary-eyed which is one of the best things about your writing… one minute I’m laughing out loud, the next I’m choked up. Thanks for the post.

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