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Just The Girl – Chapter Fifty Three (a HYD-inspired fic)
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“That was a torturous read.” Sam pulled a face.
“And we have to sit through the oral version of that on Tuesday.” Shane groaned.
Alice chuckled lightly, judging from the faces of her friends, she was the only one who enjoyed the whole thing. “I don’t know about you girls, but I find it unintentionally amusing. C’mon, it’s meant to be this serious and inspiring ‘go-out-to-the-world-and-make-it-a-better-place’ kind of thing, but being the cornball that she is, she just couldn’t help but make it cheesy and campy. I bet it’ll give me shits and giggles during the ceremony.”
“Whatever, its a train wreck.” Bette wrinkled her nose in utter distaste.
“Are you sure its the final draft?” Alice questioned as she gently closed her laptop and returned the small storage device to the brunette.
“Positively sure.” Bette raised a hand and flagged the nearest waitress down. “She just sent it to the AV guys to put on the prompter.” She opened the menu and briefly perused the selection. With a bright smile at the server who had just appeared beside her, she began reciting her orders.
“I’ll have toast with spinach and artichoke dip, a large order of tenderloin tips, a plate of cream of mushroom pasta, two slices of Italian sausage pizza, a slice of Decadent cake and a glass of bottomless iced tea. Can you make it fast please? I’m starving.”
The waitress returned her smile and took the menu from her hands. “Sure ma’am, I’ll give you your order of garden salad and water right away.”
“What?!” Bette frowned at the older woman. WTF? Salad? Water? Those weren’t her orders.
The waitress smiled apologetically at the young heiress. “I’m so sorry ma’am, but we are under strict instructions to serve you a single dish and nothing else. If you were to order more than that, we were told to bring you a salad and a glass of water instead.
“Just one dish?”
“Yes.”
“And it only applies to me?”
“Yes.”
“Who gave you this order?” Bette challenged, feeling her face growing hot in anger.
“Your boss.”
“My boss?!” Her voice hiked up as her brows met. Last time she checked, Porters never answered to anybody. Well.. not technically.. since there was a lone exception to this.
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See… My heart dropped at page 30. I knew something sad was on its way. I really love how you write. So good! Soooo good! But please fix this. It’s too good to end it like how I think it is. Unless you’re doing it like the show which has a chapter 2.
So great to see this story back.Tina should go with Bette.
Oh, no! I feared this might happen, but I trust you to make everything turn out right for our girls. BTW since you left it like that, you can’t keep us waiting long!
i can’t believe tina wants to go to different schools… and could under stand if it was money… but thats not an issue… i some times don’t under stand her… she has to realize bette will not go to yale… ok i trust you to make things right… MERRY CHRISTMAS… to you and your family… PPS
i absolutely love, love love this story and i get frustrated at the length of time between posts but when you post you soooooo make it for it!! The way you write these two (especially Bette) is just brilliant even though its quite obvious Bette is whipped by Tina i’m not sure it’s all gonna go Tinas way this time…can they really be parted long term?!! pps!
Man, I was having withdrawls & it wasn’t pretty…I am so glad that you are back. It was a long chapter & was way wirth the read. very funny & sexy.. I loved F4’S pranks-they were classic. Great job!!!!!
That was sad and hope Tina will go with Bette. The F4’s spranks is funny. Please post soon, thanks!
What a power Tina’sgotover Bette? A bit sad at the end. Hope Tina will go with Bette. These two can not be apart. Thank you for the long chapter, you are rock. PPS
Noooo long disyance never works. Suck it up Tina and go to Yale or just let Bette go to USC, it really doesn’t matter where you go to school, it’s how you run with the big boys! PPS
I’m so going to cry! They need a happy ending! Fix this, please!!!
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO :(
ur gonna split them up. tina is right bette needs to grow and so does she.. distance will only make the heart grow fonder! please don’t let tina hook up with guys:)PPS
great chapteroh god what an ending!! PPS
Damn, I so saw that coming but still my heart broke a liitle. I am glad Tina is going to give Bette what she needs. I just hope they make it through college still together. I love this Story. Thank you
OMG! All mighty queen of the induced heart attack, please spare us this agony and let this be a happy ending. Thanks for the post.
Wow, a 33-page update. You’re an awesome writer, Alchemy. The lovebirds’ “unique” reviewing method in the last chapter is awfully funny! :> I’m not familiar with HYD but I have a bad feeling on how this story is gonna end. So Alchemy, if I go down on my knees and beg, would you consider deviating from the probable gloomy ending of that story and give us a happy ending instead? I don’t know how their relationship will survive such distance and painful parting. There’s enough gloom in the real world right now what with the global recession and all the other shit that when I retreat into the fictional world of these young, horny lovebirds, I just want to see them happy, together and in love. Please, please fix this ending, Alchemy. Anyway, thanks a lot for sharing this story and writing these lovely, kilometric updates! And Merry Chrismas to you and your loved ones!!! :>
great story , please update soon