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    Just The Girl – Chapter Fifty Three (a HYD-inspired fic)

    Story written on December 21, 2008 by Alchemy10.
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    Story Shortlink: https://mail.assertive-maroon-jellyfish.104-250-143-187.cpanel.site/?p=72075
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    For you, anything..

     

    Needless to say, the loudest and longest cheer was for the famous foursome’s leader. The student body even gave Bette a standing ovation when her name was called for a special academic award for being in the honor roll. A proud and gloating Melvin was the one who pinned the medal on his daughter as Bette beamed and flashed a smile that nearly tore her face in half. With a wave and a wink at a clapping Tina, Bette walked off the stage and went back to her seat.

     

    As serious and solemn as most parts were, the ceremony was not without comic relief. At some point, the whole crowd burst out laughing when an overzealous and emotional parent began cheering widely when his daughter’s name was called. The blonde student’s face was a nice shade of red from high up the stage all the way to her seat where she nearly died of embarrassment. Needless to say, Tina Kennard wished that her dad would’ve cried on his seat instead. That was absolutely mortifying.

     

    While some were basking in happiness, there were those who got a little emotional. Sniffling and dabbing their eyes with tissue, a handful of students shed tears as thoughts of goodbye loomed near. Even esteemed members of Redwind Academy’s faculty cried. Tears of joy, that is. Nobody cried as much as they did. Finally, after four years of torture, F4 was leaving. They could die happy now.

     

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    Nearing the end of the ceremony, four students exchanged loaded looks from their places at varying seats inside the theater. All the diplomas had been given and all the special academic medals had been awarded. Now it was time for Headmistress Kroll’s closing speech.

     

    For most, it was time to get ready to leave.

     

    For F4, it was time to leave their mark in Redwind’s history.

     

    The audience clapped politely as the emcee called in the class valedictorian to introduce Phyllis Kroll. After a long, boring intro that was nothing short of kissing ass, Phyllis walked to the podium and smiled a sickeningly sweet smile at the crowd. She proceeded to blow kisses at the students, earning more than a few gagging noises from the teens.

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    1. See… My heart dropped at page 30. I knew something sad was on its way. I really love how you write. So good! Soooo good! But please fix this. It’s too good to end it like how I think it is. Unless you’re doing it like the show which has a chapter 2.

    3. Oh, no! I feared this might happen, but I trust you to make everything turn out right for our girls. BTW since you left it like that, you can’t keep us waiting long!

    4. i can’t believe tina wants to go to different schools… and could under stand if it was money… but thats not an issue… i some times don’t under stand her… she has to realize bette will not go to yale… ok i trust you to make things right… MERRY CHRISTMAS… to you and your family… PPS

    5. i absolutely love, love love this story and i get frustrated at the length of time between posts but when you post you soooooo make it for it!! The way you write these two (especially Bette) is just brilliant even though its quite obvious Bette is whipped by Tina i’m not sure it’s all gonna go Tinas way this time…can they really be parted long term?!! pps!

    6. Man, I was having withdrawls & it wasn’t pretty…I am so glad that you are back. It was a long chapter & was way wirth the read. very funny & sexy.. I loved F4’S pranks-they were classic. Great job!!!!!

    8. What a power Tina’sgotover Bette? A bit sad at the end. Hope Tina will go with Bette. These two can not be apart. Thank you for the long chapter, you are rock. PPS

    9. Noooo long disyance never works. Suck it up Tina and go to Yale or just let Bette go to USC, it really doesn’t matter where you go to school, it’s how you run with the big boys! PPS

    12. ur gonna split them up. tina is right bette needs to grow and so does she.. distance will only make the heart grow fonder! please don’t let tina hook up with guys:)PPS

    14. Damn, I so saw that coming but still my heart broke a liitle. I am glad Tina is going to give Bette what she needs. I just hope they make it through college still together. I love this Story. Thank you

    16. Wow, a 33-page update. You’re an awesome writer, Alchemy. The lovebirds’ “unique” reviewing method in the last chapter is awfully funny! :> I’m not familiar with HYD but I have a bad feeling on how this story is gonna end. So Alchemy, if I go down on my knees and beg, would you consider deviating from the probable gloomy ending of that story and give us a happy ending instead? I don’t know how their relationship will survive such distance and painful parting. There’s enough gloom in the real world right now what with the global recession and all the other shit that when I retreat into the fictional world of these young, horny lovebirds, I just want to see them happy, together and in love. Please, please fix this ending, Alchemy. Anyway, thanks a lot for sharing this story and writing these lovely, kilometric updates! And Merry Chrismas to you and your loved ones!!! :>

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