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Just The Girl – Chapter Fifty Three (a HYD-inspired fic)
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“Excuse me..”
“Ouch!”
“Sorry..”
“Ow!”
“Coming through..”
“Eep!”
“Step away please..”
“Agh!”
“Pardon me..”
“Wah!”
“Move please..”
“Ack!”
“Thank you..”
“Gaaah!”
And finally..
“Kennard!”
Tina turned around and came face to face with a smiling Bette. As quickly as it came, her worry dissipated into feelings of relief. But as much as she wanted to return Bette’s warm smile, the sound of loud groaning ruined the moment for her. Tilting her head to the side, Tina looked past her girlfriend’s shoulders, her jaw dropping at the sight that greeted her. Behind Bette, a handful of bodies were bent over, their faces contorted in pain. Some students were rubbing their feet while the others clutched their sides, looking every bit like victims of a hit-and-run.
Lifting an eyebrow, Tina returned her gaze to her girlfriend.
“What?” An innocent Bette asked, smiling angelically.
“Porter.”
“Oh, they were in the way.” The cheeky brunette grinned, waving a hand dismissively. Looking all proud of herself, she continued. “And get this, I was very polite. I said excuse me, please, sorry and even thank you..” She puffed her chest out and smiled brightly. When Tina looked at her unconvincingly, she cleared her throat and raised her voice. “Didn’t I?” She directed the question to her poor, injured batchmates.
“Yes ma’am!” Her victims chorused almost robotically.
“See?”
Tina rolled her eyes. Some things never change. “Why aren’t you in line?”
“There’s a line?” Bette feigned ignorance. A pair of hazel eyes narrowed at her. “Okay fine, I just wanted to say hi and do this..” She moved in and placed a chaste kiss on Tina’s lips. “I missed you last night.”
“Just last night?”
“And this morning too.” Bette smiled.
“Were you able to sleep?” The blonde asked, stepping closer to her girlfriend and re-arranging the lopsided cap on Bette’s head.
“Hardly. You?”
“About the same as you.” Tina sighed. She stroked the end of Bette’s curls. “You look tired babe..”
“I do?” Brown orbs widened in surprise.
“Yeah, you look a little pale and your eyes are bloodshot.”
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See… My heart dropped at page 30. I knew something sad was on its way. I really love how you write. So good! Soooo good! But please fix this. It’s too good to end it like how I think it is. Unless you’re doing it like the show which has a chapter 2.
So great to see this story back.Tina should go with Bette.
Oh, no! I feared this might happen, but I trust you to make everything turn out right for our girls. BTW since you left it like that, you can’t keep us waiting long!
i can’t believe tina wants to go to different schools… and could under stand if it was money… but thats not an issue… i some times don’t under stand her… she has to realize bette will not go to yale… ok i trust you to make things right… MERRY CHRISTMAS… to you and your family… PPS
i absolutely love, love love this story and i get frustrated at the length of time between posts but when you post you soooooo make it for it!! The way you write these two (especially Bette) is just brilliant even though its quite obvious Bette is whipped by Tina i’m not sure it’s all gonna go Tinas way this time…can they really be parted long term?!! pps!
Man, I was having withdrawls & it wasn’t pretty…I am so glad that you are back. It was a long chapter & was way wirth the read. very funny & sexy.. I loved F4’S pranks-they were classic. Great job!!!!!
That was sad and hope Tina will go with Bette. The F4’s spranks is funny. Please post soon, thanks!
What a power Tina’sgotover Bette? A bit sad at the end. Hope Tina will go with Bette. These two can not be apart. Thank you for the long chapter, you are rock. PPS
Noooo long disyance never works. Suck it up Tina and go to Yale or just let Bette go to USC, it really doesn’t matter where you go to school, it’s how you run with the big boys! PPS
I’m so going to cry! They need a happy ending! Fix this, please!!!
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO :(
ur gonna split them up. tina is right bette needs to grow and so does she.. distance will only make the heart grow fonder! please don’t let tina hook up with guys:)PPS
great chapteroh god what an ending!! PPS
Damn, I so saw that coming but still my heart broke a liitle. I am glad Tina is going to give Bette what she needs. I just hope they make it through college still together. I love this Story. Thank you
OMG! All mighty queen of the induced heart attack, please spare us this agony and let this be a happy ending. Thanks for the post.
Wow, a 33-page update. You’re an awesome writer, Alchemy. The lovebirds’ “unique” reviewing method in the last chapter is awfully funny! :> I’m not familiar with HYD but I have a bad feeling on how this story is gonna end. So Alchemy, if I go down on my knees and beg, would you consider deviating from the probable gloomy ending of that story and give us a happy ending instead? I don’t know how their relationship will survive such distance and painful parting. There’s enough gloom in the real world right now what with the global recession and all the other shit that when I retreat into the fictional world of these young, horny lovebirds, I just want to see them happy, together and in love. Please, please fix this ending, Alchemy. Anyway, thanks a lot for sharing this story and writing these lovely, kilometric updates! And Merry Chrismas to you and your loved ones!!! :>
great story , please update soon