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Just The Girl – Chapter Fifty Four (a HYD-inspired fic)
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“I changed my mind Al. It’s off.”
The blonde started pacing the room, a futile attempt to blow off steam. She was frustrated, but the feeling of disappointment weighed heavily on her chest above anything else. How could Shane give up so easily? “We’ve been working on this for five hours straight. And now that it’s done, you don’t want to do it anymore?”
“Nope.” Shane shook her head.
Desperate, Alice turned to their leader, the one with the last say. “Bette?”
“It’s Shane’s call.” Bette answered simply, running a tired hand through her hair. “What do you want to do?” She looked at the girl in question.
“Nothing.” Shane replied, playing with the cigarette in her hand.
“Then we’ll do nothing.” Bette turned to Alice.
But the blonde could not be swayed. “What about your honor?”
“My honor?” Shane repeated with a slight grimace.
“Aren’t you gonna defend it or something?”
“Al,” Shane sighed. “I’ve been screwing women left and right since I hit puberty. Do you even think I have any honor left to defend?”
The blonde groaned in defeat as she dropped down on her chair. She haphazardly arranged the papers scattered on the dining room table before giving Shane a swift kick underneath. “Fine, we’re not doing it anymore. But you better give me one damn good reason why, McCutcheon.”
Shane grunted in the affirmative as she rubbed her aching shin. Alice had been nothing but a good friend today, the least she could do was give her what she was asking for. She sighed and took a long drag from her cigarette before explaining her decision. “My rep’s been soiled in WeHo. I was planning to leave this place a legend, but now I’m just a-”
“Joke who lost her girl to a college loser?” Alice supplied. Shane glared at her. “Sorry, carry on.”
“Revenge is a tempting thing, but I’m beginning to think it’s a bad idea. If I’m doing damage control, then playing the role of the vengeful girlfriend is not the way I want to go. That would give the impression that I’m hurting over the break-up, that I actually care for Carmen,”
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Yeah, I have missed this story, glad to see you back
wow that was a loooonnnnggg but fantastic chapter.how harsh is Bette just leaving for Yale like that!!!anyway,it will be a sad day when this story ends but yet i can’t wait til the end to find out what happens.PPS cheers
There is so much that could happen, and you say the End is next…will they remain together or fall apart? I can finally read now that the tears have cleared, thanks for the post!!
god how i love this story, every chapter is like a mini book! i’m not right stoked to read that the next will be the last though, i absolutely love how you write these two…especially bette! my only hope is that you keep them together and that you promise to carry on writing other stories…well????!
What was Tina going to say to Bette on the beach? Will Tina be able to forgive Bette for not saying goodbye? Will Tina catch the next available flight out to Connecticut? I hope so… I can’t wait to see how you wrap everything up, but I’m really going to miss this story. Thanks for the chapter.
Wow that was an amazing chapter! and so many looming questions. PPS
Wow-your story never ceases to amaze me. I love it and your writing, and I hope to see both soon in a sequel to this story! PPS!
This has/is an incredible story. I look for it daily and was so glad to see a post today. Please say it isn’t so, Your not ending it are you? Their still young and have slots to go through. A sequel maybe?.
Its coming to an end, does it have to? I love this chapter for all the right reasons. Please dont keep to long for the next one.Thanks
WOW!!! That was Amazing!!! I just hope that the end will be just as good. Thank you PPS
WOW!!!!! I just got a chance to read all 37 pages of it-it was a long one…but well worth it. I can understand why Bette went ahead & left-but Tina will be hurt…but I think she will understand. I hope they can work through this & I can’t wait for the next update. Great job.
*Sniffle* Oh dear, this has got to be the saddest JTG chapter. *Sniffle* So begging on my knees didn’t work. *Sniffle* I don’t know how they’ll ever get to eternity when it’s hard to say they’ll even get to survive the next 24 hours, weeks or months apart. *Sniffle* I hope Tina will still change her mind but if not…then, *Thank you very much* for this lovely, funny, sometimes sexy high school TiBette tale. It’s been a great ride, Alchemy! *Crysmiles like Bette* Okay… I’m gonna go to a corner now and cry my heart out. Boohoo. :(
This is sad !
That ws beautiful and sad, it brought tears to my eyes.
I laughed and cried ….. It just broke my heart :( But there has to be a happy ending in here some where :)
Great chptr, Al will there be a sequl to this story maybe College life ???
Hey Alchemy! So glad to have you back with another chapter, but extremely sad that the end is coming. I have loved this story from the beginning as your writing is incredible. I have the feeling Tina had decided to go with Bette, but will maybe stick to their plan now that Bette has left. Bette’s letter had me teary-eyed which is one of the best things about your writing… one minute I’m laughing out loud, the next I’m choked up. Thanks for the post.
Sniff sniff. This was hard, I laughed and cried very hard. How come? Tina go get you future wife please?