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The Greatest Love Story Ever Told
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disparaging daddy dearest. She had endured a like-dislike relationship with him since day one, his disapproval of the insolent whippersnapper next door as he not so affectionately referred to her, was undeniably obvious. Since those neighbourly days her title had been upgraded to Ms Kinnard as had his disapproval, as far as Mel was concerned a title he cringed at every time Tina greeted him as such, the blame for Bette’s alternative lifestyle lay firmly at her door. For her part the only thing Tina gave credit to him for was producing her one and only, and for that she would always be thankful.
“You know, he probably just didn’t want to disrupt your life, he knows how important the gallery is to you and if he told you, you would have insisted on being with him”
Bette sniffed, sighed and nodded her agreement “I have to book a flight, he has something that he needs to tell me before…” she paused, dropped her face into her hands, pressing her fingers tightly to her eyes in a vain attempt to stop the flow of tears.
Tina pulled her close, “I know babe, I know” she repeated as Bette cried on her shoulder. It was a small consolation but at least Bette would get a chance to say her goodbyes as hard as it would be for her, it was something that Tina never got the chance to do when she lost her parents.
The incessant ringing of Bette’s cell was becoming too much, but it wasn’t until the unmistakable tune of Another One Bites the Dust that came from Tina’s cell that Tina cringed “Sorry” and she moved to turn it off. “It was Helena” she announced.
“You should go Tina, Shane will be devastated if neither of us show up for her graduation” Bette said getting up “I’ll call you when I have my flight details”
Tina frowned “My flight details….” she questioned “Your not going alone Bette, I’m coming with you” Poor Shane she thought, yeah she would be devastated but she would also understand that Bette’s need was greater. Tina passed Bette her laptop “Here you book the flights, I’ll call Shane and explain, ok” The tone of that ok left no room for argument.
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WOW! You have very vivid fantasy. :o) This chapter could be Bette’s second interrogation tape. LOL! Well done Skim!
Hi Skimmy as always you are the best, love the story and hurry up between that kitten and christmas and post a new chptr.
Skimmy, I’m not sure I can let go of FLF… I’m sorry. If it makes you feel better, it was never about your legs. Maybe Bette’s? ;) And yay! Helena is back! The way T and Al treat just makes me laugh too freaking much. I’m glad it came out that they both know the risks of the surgery. And as the big geek that I am, I have to say that yeah, Tina wouldn’t forget her love for Bette. Love appears to be located in a different area of the brain than memory :) Sorry for geeking out on you comments, Skimmy!
Oh, and yeah, I forgot to comment on Melvin. What a freaking jerk! Is Bette going to have a chance to get in touch with her mom? I hope so… PPS!!!
Thank you for this wonderful update. You have a way with words for sure Skimmer. Your story just gets better and better. Thank you again for this.
Skimmy, I have to confess; when I got to the “Promise” word I was a little lost, I had to go back & found I have missed several chapters. I have spent my night reading your story. First let me say sorry about your great loss over the summer. Also hope your sons arm is on the mend. As far as your guys having a normal mom, forget about it, I have 4 kids and none of them have a normal mom, don’t worry about that it helps them build character. I have laughed so hard tonight reading chapter after chapter, you are effing hilarious. That is until I got to this one. Holy sheets woman wasn’t growing up with Melvin enough? What a rat bastard, I think if I were Tina I would go to the grave and piss all over it. Oh the part about the cake was killing me. Can’t wait for more. Thank you, Md aka Oma Oh ya, and if you would have locked the card door, well you know. Thanks again.
So sorry for the multiple posts, never can tell when my computer at home will do that.
You are and always will be ” the Skimminator”! WHat an amazing story this is…thank you so much for taking the time to post here. The menopause cake had me in stitches…LMAOOOO!
Wow Skimmy…that was awesome! That would be quite the thing…finding out your existence wasn’t what you thought it was after all those years. Bette has a lot to sort out and I’m glad Tina is right there with her all the way. This story is getting more intriguing all the time!
What a wonderful update. PPS
Hiya Skimmy! Thanks for the PM hun. I’m ** slowly ** coming along. The chapter rocked. I absolutely loved when Bette said this to Tina: “My love for you is something my heart could never forget, they could wipe my memories clean, dump me in the far corner of the earth and my heart would lead me back home, of that I have no doubt” * Awwww – my heart was melting at that. * Thanks for posting an update! {{ hugs }} ttys.
Heartbreaking! Same favourite part as Chicki. Something we all wish we would hear one day I guess.
My day just turned a whole lot better -no doubt about that. Thanks for a beautiful update.
Oh man, what a mess. Melvin sure was a secretive bastard, wasn’t he? Bette’s really his granddaughter? At least it would explain why he had the mentality of a crusty old man. I hope Bette can find Catherine. Tina’s been a rock, in the past as well as now. No hurdle too big for these guys. I know they’ll be fine. Awesome, skimmer. Thanks :)
Hel-p!!!! what wicked web u wove. PPS.
thats some heavy shit
What a heck of a chapter. Oh what a tangled web we weave when first we practice to deceive. Melvin, the lying old bastard and I can’t blame Tina at all, I, too, would choke the life out of him. This is really terrible for Bette and thank goodness she has Tina and her love to see her thru. This news is just heartbreaking, Melvin should have been ashamed of himself. He died with a very guilty conscience and now he and the devil can make chili powder and matches together. One bright spot in this chapter is when Tina told Bette that, “My love for you is something my heart could never forget, they could wipe my memories clean, dump me in the far corner of the earth and my heart would lead me back home, of that I have no doubt.” How beautiful is that and we all wish for someone to love us like that. That is awesome. Thanks for posting. PPVS
What a heck of a chapter. Oh what a tangled web we weave when first we practice to deceive. Melvin, the lying old bastard and I can’t blame Tina at all, I, too, would choke the life out of him. This is really terrible for Bette and thank goodness she has Tina and her love to see her thru. This news is just heartbreaking, Melvin should have been ashamed of himself. He died with a very guilty conscience and now he and the devil can make chili powder and matches together. One bright spot in this chapter is when Tina told Bette that, “My love for you is something my heart could never forget, they could wipe my memories clean, dump me in the far corner of the earth and my heart would lead me back home, of that I have no doubt.” How beautiful is that and we all wish for someone to love us like that. That is awesome. Thanks for posting. PPVS
What a heck of a chapter. Oh what a tangled web we weave when first we practice to deceive. Melvin, the lying old bastard and I can’t blame Tina at all, I, too, would choke the life out of him. This is really terrible for Bette and thank goodness she has Tina and her love to see her thru. This news is just heartbreaking, Melvin should have been ashamed of himself. He died with a very guilty conscience and now he and the devil can make chili powder and matches together. One bright spot in this chapter is when Tina told Bette that, “My love for you is something my heart could never forget, they could wipe my memories clean, dump me in the far corner of the earth and my heart would lead me back home, of that I have no doubt.” How beautiful is that and we all wish for someone to love us like that. That is awesome. Thanks for posting. PPVS
waoooooo did not see this coming. Where is Kit now? Dying to know what happened next. PPPVS