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London to LA ch13
Alice – so who wants pizza, and what would you like?
Alice takes the order and goes inside to phone through the order, Dana sees this as her chance and follows Alice into the house.
Dana – Alice
Alice – Dana, what are you doing in here, you should be with the others it sounds like they are having fun out there.
Dana – yeah they are, Lucy is nice, she certainly tells a good story
Alice – she’s certainly unique I’ll give her that she’s been a good friend to me, it still gets me though her and Will are so different.
Dana – has a confused look oh her face – Lucy and Will is there a connection I’m missing here
Alice – Lucy is Will’s sister, catch up Dana
Dana – Oh I never realized that, look Alice I need to talk to you
Alice – is now the right time
Dana – I don’t think anytime would be the right time Al, but you have to hear what I’m going to say
Alice – Oh I have to hear it do I ! I don’t get a choice
Dana – of course you do Al, but there is something that I really need to tell you.
Alice – well what if I don’t want to hear it
Dana – raises her voice and moves closer to Alice – for gods sake Alice will you please just listen to me
Alice – No I don’t need too, I know what you are going to say, don’t worry I understand, I hope you and Kate are very happy together
Dana – what the fuck has Kate got to do with any of this?
Alice – d’ah you are fucking her Dana
Dana – throws her hands in the air in disbelief – No I’m not, I’m not fucking anyone, there’s only one person I want to fuck, there is only one woman I am totally in love with. But I’m scared because I broke her heart and I don’t think she will forgive me, but I have to tell her how I feel, the problem is she wont listen to me.
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(30 votes, average: 3.73 out of 5)
I really missed your story! I’m glad all the misunderstandings are dealt with. :D Dana really has do A LOT when it comes to Alice trusting her again. It will take a while…probably a very long while. But if Dana’s stick around and stays persistent, shlice’s heart again. (She already won Jake over. ;))
damn..poor alice. thats a lot to take in. i hope she finds her way back to dana, and it all works out. great post, please update soon!
Well hope Alice will give Dana a chance. Ok post soon please, thanks!
loved it~ please post more soon
Hey i’ve just found this story and its brilliant! Please post more! :)
So glad you’re back with this story. I love this side of them. Hope Alice makes Dana fight for her and Jake.
I’m happy Dana finally told Alice how she was feeling. But I’m especially happy that Alice’s reaction was realistic. I’m glad she didn’t immediately fall into Dana’s arms again.
Great post and it’s nice to see that you’re back! I love this story and I find it very realistic. I just hope that Danish get together sooner rather than later, but rebuilding that trust will prolly take a while. Anyways, I can’t wait to find out what happens next, so please post soon:)
im so glad you’ve returned. i’ve loved this story from the beginning. i love the whole lucy aspect. she reminds me of debra messings cousin in the wedding date.
Theyve got to get back together, its ment to be. Great chapter, please post again soon. Love this story.
I read it and later I realize that I didn’t comment, how foolish of me. I think this was a great chapter Alice is right not to trust so soon that was an extreme break up for the poor girl and I can see where she’s coming from. I do want to see them together so I hope that’s in the cards. I also loved the donkey too. great job