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London to LA ch13
Alice jumps off the sofa and runs out of the house as fast as she can, which isn’t that quick considering. She reaches the edge of the pool and manages to stop herself just in time, but unfortunately Lucy doesn’t and she sends both of them tumbling into the water.
They surface and start play fighting unaware that they now have an audience of Bette, Tina and Dana.
Bette – looks like the party has already started
Tina – hey guys
Alice – Hi
Lucy gets out of the pool then helps Alice out both of them stood there in their dripping wet clothes looking like a couple of naughty school children.
Alice – make yourselves at home I’m just going to go and get changed
Lucy – yeah me too
Both women scuttle off through the kitchen and into their rooms giggling
Dana – see I told, I’m not imagining it am I?
Tina – Dana they were just messing around, just calm down and talk to Alice
Dana – I don’t know if I can handle this
Bette – well just try ok, I don’t know about you two but I’m looking forward to a night of grown up chat and a good old family night just like the old days.
Tina – yeah me too
Shane – and me
Dana – hey I didn’t hear you creep in
Shane – what can I say I’m light on my feet
Bette – its down to all the sneaking out of bedrooms she’s done in her life, shane’s turned it into an art form
Shane – ahh I never thought of that
Tina – is Helena coming?
Lucy has walked back into the kitchen, and joins the rest of the women
Lucy – would that be Helena Peabody
Bette – yes the one and only
Lucy – well fuck me, I haven’t seen her since school
Dana – you went to school with Helena?
Lucy – for a couple of years, my parents thought a private education would curb my wild ways
Dana – did It work?
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(30 votes, average: 3.73 out of 5)
I really missed your story! I’m glad all the misunderstandings are dealt with. :D Dana really has do A LOT when it comes to Alice trusting her again. It will take a while…probably a very long while. But if Dana’s stick around and stays persistent, shlice’s heart again. (She already won Jake over. ;))
damn..poor alice. thats a lot to take in. i hope she finds her way back to dana, and it all works out. great post, please update soon!
Well hope Alice will give Dana a chance. Ok post soon please, thanks!
loved it~ please post more soon
Hey i’ve just found this story and its brilliant! Please post more! :)
So glad you’re back with this story. I love this side of them. Hope Alice makes Dana fight for her and Jake.
I’m happy Dana finally told Alice how she was feeling. But I’m especially happy that Alice’s reaction was realistic. I’m glad she didn’t immediately fall into Dana’s arms again.
Great post and it’s nice to see that you’re back! I love this story and I find it very realistic. I just hope that Danish get together sooner rather than later, but rebuilding that trust will prolly take a while. Anyways, I can’t wait to find out what happens next, so please post soon:)
im so glad you’ve returned. i’ve loved this story from the beginning. i love the whole lucy aspect. she reminds me of debra messings cousin in the wedding date.
Theyve got to get back together, its ment to be. Great chapter, please post again soon. Love this story.
I read it and later I realize that I didn’t comment, how foolish of me. I think this was a great chapter Alice is right not to trust so soon that was an extreme break up for the poor girl and I can see where she’s coming from. I do want to see them together so I hope that’s in the cards. I also loved the donkey too. great job