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    London to LA ch13

    Story written on July 30, 2006 by combatbarbie.
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    Story Shortlink: https://mail.assertive-maroon-jellyfish.104-250-143-187.cpanel.site/?p=61884
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    Pizza and wine

     

    Dana – but Alice please

     

    Alice – sobbing – I cant

     

    Dana – turns Alice around and looks at her – but you said you loved me, that you always have.

     

    Alice – I’ll always love you Dana, but ive changed, look at me, you could do so much better than me, I have nothing to offer you.

     

    Dana – don’t you dare say that Alice, you are beautiful the most beautiful woman I have ever met, you are kind, loving, funny and so much more, don’t ever put yourself down

     

    Alice – it wont work Dana

     

    Dana – don’t say that, it will, it can, I know it, I know it in here – she places her hand on her heart. She takes alice’s hand and places it on alice’s heart – and you have this to offer me and to me that is the greatest prize of all.

     

    Alice – I’m so tired, I need time to think

     

    Dana – I’m not going to give up on us Alice, I will make you see. All I ask is that you give me a chance, its up to you, but I know when you look into my eyes and I look into yours that we  see a greater love that most people will never see in their entire lives, and I’m not willing to lose that again.

     

    Alice – she looks to the ground and then straight back up to look into Danas eyes – I need time, I need to think, but please Dana don’t push me to hard, you have to realize that if you want me, its not just me anymore its my son too Dana, you need to think if you are ready for that

     

    Dana – ok Al, I know and I love Jake he’s adorable. But I understand what you are saying.

     

    Dana walks past Alice towards the door – I’m going to go, its late, you need to sleep

     

    Alice walks up to Dana and stops just behind her.

     

    Alice – nite dana, i promise i will think about what you said 

     

    Dana – can I call you tomorrow Alice? Talk with you,  please

     

    Alice – i guess so, its something we should have done a long time ago.

    Dana – thank you.

    Dana is now facing Alice as she turns to leave she places a light kiss on Alice’s forehead, turns and walks out of the door.  As soon as she has gone Alice breaks down slides down the wall and sobs.  This was something that she had wished for, for years and now Dana was saying the words she longed to hear, she had disregarded them as meaningless, her heart and her head torn in two completely different directions.

     

    Alice – what the fuck am I going to do?

     

     

    tbc

     

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    1. I really missed your story! I’m glad all the misunderstandings are dealt with. :D Dana really has do A LOT when it comes to Alice trusting her again. It will take a while…probably a very long while. But if Dana’s stick around and stays persistent, shlice’s heart again. (She already won Jake over. ;))

    7. I’m happy Dana finally told Alice how she was feeling. But I’m especially happy that Alice’s reaction was realistic. I’m glad she didn’t immediately fall into Dana’s arms again.

    8. Great post and it’s nice to see that you’re back! I love this story and I find it very realistic. I just hope that Danish get together sooner rather than later, but rebuilding that trust will prolly take a while. Anyways, I can’t wait to find out what happens next, so please post soon:)

    11. I read it and later I realize that I didn’t comment, how foolish of me. I think this was a great chapter Alice is right not to trust so soon that was an extreme break up for the poor girl and I can see where she’s coming from. I do want to see them together so I hope that’s in the cards. I also loved the donkey too. great job

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