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    I’ve Got You Under My Skin – Chapter 4

    Tina:  “Ah, I should just probably go home and get some rest so I am ready to tackle tomorrow.  Besides, I don’t even own a swimsuit.”

    Shane:  “Who said anything about swimsuits?”

    Alice:  “Come on, Tina.  I can bring you home whenever you want to go.”

    Dana:  “I’ll give you a ride home since we are neighbors.  I’ll stand as long as you want to.”

    Kit:  “Yeah, baby girl . . . just for awhile, it will be fun!  Come on, for me?”

    Tina:  (feeling a little outnumbered)  “Okay, just for awhile.”

    Kit:  “Bette, we’ll be over in a little while and I will fix you a plate of Chinese.  You can heat it up in the microwave.  Can you handle that or is that too much cookin’ for you?”

    Bette:  “God, Kit, just because I don’t like to cook, why do you have to throw it in my face all of the time?”

    Kit:  “Calm down.  I am only playin’ with you baby sis.”

    Bette:  “Fine bring me a plate.  I will probably be home in 40 minutes with the way traffic is moving on the 405.”

    Kit:  “Okay, see you in a bit.”


    All through dinner the girls filled Tina in on all the ***** hot spots in West Hollywood and L.A.  Everything from their favorite clubs, bars, restaurants, to well . . . even where they go to get their toys.  Alice noted what spot each ended up on L.A. Magazine’s Top Ten Lists.  As soon as they finished their dinner, Tina offered to do the dishes and Alice who hardly ever volunteers to help with anything, insisted on helping.  Kit put a container of food together for Bette and they were soon ready to leave.

    Dana:  “Are we going to ride together or are we taking seperate cars?”

    Shane:  “I’ll meet you all over there since I will probably be leaving early.”

    Alice:  “Tina, you can ride with me, I mean, if you would like.”

    Tina:  “Okay, sure.  I just need to go grab a couple things from home before we leave, if that’s okay?”

    Dana:  “Sure, we’ll wait for you . . . (Alice gives Dana a look) I mean, I might as well ride with you because we’re neighbors.”

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    1. Hey portard you know this is just wrong leaving us hanging like that right?! well it was a good chapter, but what the hell do they say to one another. hmmmmm. pls don’t leave us hanging too long, K?

    2. Hey…I’ve been lurking in the shadows catching up on this story bit by bit, and not commenting (sorry) because I’ve been so pressed for time lately–sooooo many awesome stories to read and sooooo little time *sighs* Anyway… I finally caught up at this post and just couldn’t wait to let you know how much I’ve enjoyed your version of a B & T beginning so far. In fact, I’m totally enamoured with it! You’re writing is so fresh and witty–I was completely hooked from the first chapter! I love the way you’ve brought Kit up more into the forefront and I can’t get enough of the way that you’ve been able to capture the “feel” of being part of a loving group of friends. I’m looking forward to more of your posts–Thanks=)

    3. Damn this chapter is so funny and they have a good time, but now at Bette house I see we have a little problem here, Bette and Tina see each other again and let see what’s next. Post soon please, thanks!

    4. hey porTARD – f’n funny. “the whole erika thing” and “im a dyke” that so cracked me up. i dont think ive ever heard tina utter anything remotely like that. just sent me into a fit of giggles. cant wait for the next riot of a chappy. the bitch and farm girl actually meet, properly. heehee. post soon

    5. Not 2 seconds into the story and I am cracking up hysterically at this: Kit: “Ah, baby girl, I’m sorry you had to experience the cold hearted rage of some psycho bitch!….. I cant wait til she discovers she was talking about her own sister….

      I could NEVER imagine Tina being “meat tagged” or like in the grocery store buying some meat.

      Tina: “Kit, thanks for your concern, but I am a big girl and can handle them. The truth is they really aren’t my type…..LMAO @ Dana & Alice falling all over themselves to get to Tina and she aint even interested in them.

      “Hold on Miss Crispy, she’s not interested in you either.”……..Ohhhhhhhh man…I’m dying ova here!!

      BTW….that was dasterdly where you stopped at……post again soon. I loved this chapter a lot; and now that they have *cough* bumped into each other again, I am sure the next chapter is going to be an even bigger riot!

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