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I’ve Got You Under My Skin – Chapter 4
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Dana: “Okay, by me.”
Shane: “I second.”
Alice: “Done!”
Shane: “Ah, guys, can we eat? I am starving?”
Dana: “Oh . . . yeah, sorry! Let’s eat! Tina, you go first, you are our guest of honor.”
Alice rolls her eyes and does the gag reflex to Shane. Shane picks up that Tina has been meat tagged by Dana and Alice. Shane admits to herself that Tina is one hot girl, but doesn’t seem to be her type. In Shane’s mind Tina is too sweet and kind to be one of her one night flings. As they wait for Tina to dish her plate up, Alice moves in behind Tina. Alice gets as close as she possibly can to take in Tina’s addictive fragrance.
Tina: (Oblivious to the attention that she is receiving): “Ah, Dana where would you like for us to sit?”
Dana: “Let’s eat outside on my balcony. I think it might be cooler out there.”
Alice: “Yeah, what’s with this *****’ heat?”
Shane: “Tina, what can I get you to drink? Beer, wine, water, tea . . me? Ha, just kiddin’. Seriously what would you like?”
Tina: “I’d love a nice cold beer.”
Shane: “One beer it is.”
Ring, ring, ring . . .
Alice: “Is that me?”
Shane: “It’s not me.”
Kit: “I think it’s my cell . . . hold on (yelling at phone).”
Kit: “Baby sis!”
Bette: “Kit, I’ve just have had the worst day, I just thought I would tell you I am not coming over.”
Kit: “What? Not coming? We just started eating and you still haven’t met Tina.”
Bette: “Kit, I just want to go home and get out of these clothes and go for a swim. I am so *****’ hot.”
Kit: “You still have to eat and we have plenty. Come on, please.”
Bette: “I just want to go home. If you guys want to come over here and swim after you are done eating that’s fine with me. I just want to be home tonight.”
Kit: “Okay, well, let me ask the girls . . . hey ya’ll wanna go to Bette’s to swim after we eat?”
Alice: “***** ya!”
Dana: “I’d love to cool off.”
Kit: “Shane, Tina, you in?”
Shane: “I could go for a little bit, I’m meeting someone at 10 p.m.”
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Honey what an understatement…Oh my God
Adorable, funny, what a great story! I can’t wait to see what unfolds with the dynamic duo…
OH MY GOD, IS RIGHT….THAT WAS FABULOUS PLEASE POST AGAIN CAN’T WAIT FOR MORE…THANKS
LOL!!!!! What a way to stop!!!!!! LMAO!!!!! POST SOON WILL YA!!!!!
Oh, my God too..lol..oh please post soon i cant wait for the next one
oh dont leave us hanging, please,
post real soon, great job
Hey portard you know this is just wrong leaving us hanging like that right?! well it was a good chapter, but what the hell do they say to one another. hmmmmm. pls don’t leave us hanging too long, K?
Very cute story. I just caught up with all the chapters and now I’m all tuned in and waiting for the next episode.
great story! can’t wait to hear Bette get out of this one! don’t leave us hanging like this….c’mon WHAT HAPPENS NEXT?!?!?
PLEASE POST TONITE!!!!! cant wait to see what Bette and Tina do!
Oh my God…what an understatement indeed. This is going to be an interesting introduction none the less. Bette & Tina…sparks are going to fly.
Hey…I’ve been lurking in the shadows catching up on this story bit by bit, and not commenting (sorry) because I’ve been so pressed for time lately–sooooo many awesome stories to read and sooooo little time *sighs* Anyway… I finally caught up at this post and just couldn’t wait to let you know how much I’ve enjoyed your version of a B & T beginning so far. In fact, I’m totally enamoured with it! You’re writing is so fresh and witty–I was completely hooked from the first chapter! I love the way you’ve brought Kit up more into the forefront and I can’t get enough of the way that you’ve been able to capture the “feel” of being part of a loving group of friends. I’m looking forward to more of your posts–Thanks=)
Oh please don’t leave us out here..waiting..must have another chapter…this story is funny and sweet. We are here for the ride
Damn this chapter is so funny and they have a good time, but now at Bette house I see we have a little problem here, Bette and Tina see each other again and let see what’s next. Post soon please, thanks!
post soon-can’t wait to see what happens next
GReat chapter keep them coming!!!
wow def agreeing with jackiee def a understatement
Oh my fuckin God is more like it. To funny post real soon I can’t wait to see what is said between the two. Excellent story.
funny story. what a way to end this chapter love the cliff hanger. what will tina do. hit bette for her rudeness? slap her? cant wait to find out.
K
I can’t believe you stopped there! lol Great chapter, can’t wait to see what happens.
hey porTARD – f’n funny. “the whole erika thing” and “im a dyke” that so cracked me up. i dont think ive ever heard tina utter anything remotely like that. just sent me into a fit of giggles. cant wait for the next riot of a chappy. the bitch and farm girl actually meet, properly. heehee. post soon
Not 2 seconds into the story and I am cracking up hysterically at this: Kit: “Ah, baby girl, I’m sorry you had to experience the cold hearted rage of some psycho bitch!….. I cant wait til she discovers she was talking about her own sister….
I could NEVER imagine Tina being “meat tagged” or like in the grocery store buying some meat.
Tina: “Kit, thanks for your concern, but I am a big girl and can handle them. The truth is they really aren’t my type…..LMAO @ Dana & Alice falling all over themselves to get to Tina and she aint even interested in them.
“Hold on Miss Crispy, she’s not interested in you either.”……..Ohhhhhhhh man…I’m dying ova here!!
BTW….that was dasterdly where you stopped at……post again soon. I loved this chapter a lot; and now that they have *cough* bumped into each other again, I am sure the next chapter is going to be an even bigger riot!