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I’ve Got You Under My Skin – Chapter 4
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Alice: “You’re right Kit, I’m sorry. Dane, I am sorry too. Forgive me?”
Kit: “Now that’s what I like to see!”
Alice: “Sorry, Kit.”
Dana: “Yeah, sorry.”
Kit: “It’s not me that you need to apologize to.”
Just as Kit finishes her sentence Tina walks up with a small canvas bag. As she approaches, Alice and Dana look at one another and immediately get out of the car.
Alice: “Hey, Tina. Dana and I need to apologize to you.”
Tina: “Why, what for?”
Dana: “I think you know. Thanks for being so gracious.”
Alice: “We’re sorry we’ve been acting like two crazy ***** to you. We are glad you are here in L.A. . . .”
Dana: ” . . . and we are glad that we met a new friend. And . . .”
Tina (interupting Dana): “Guys, don’t worry about it. I’m a *****, I know what it means to be interested in new blood. I’m flattered that either one of you would be interested in me. You two are so beautiful . . . inside and out. I believe love is going to be right before your eyes and you won’t have to work so hard to find it. Let’s just forget about this and move on.”
Alice and Dana look at each other and then walk over to Tina . . .
Alice: “New friend hug!”
Dana: “Come on Kit, get in here.”
Alice, Dana, Tina and Kit embrace.
Kit: “Come on ladies, let’s go get cooled off!”
Alice: “Sounds good to me.”
Alice and Dana get back into Alice’s car. Kit and Tina head towards Kit’s ride. Tina looking over to Kit says . . .
Tina: “Thanks Kit.”
Kit: “Sure, what are friends for.”
Meanwhile . . . At Bette’s House
Shane (talking out load to herself): “*****, Bette. How could one person make such a big mess?”
Bette: “Sorry, I wasn’t expecting company.”
Shane (turning around): “*****, when did you come in? You *****’ scared me.”
Bette: “That’s what you get when you talk about someone else. Where’s everyone else?
Shane: “They are on their way over. They should be here any moment. In fact, I think I see them now.”
Bette: “I am going to change real quick. I have to get out of these clothes. I’ll meet you all outside in a minute.”
Shane: “Okay.”
Shane walks to the front door and opens it for the rest of the group.
Shane: “Bette just got home, she is changing out of her work clothes.”
Kit: “Tina, come on in, make yourself at home.”
Alice and Dana walk immediately outside, strip down to their panties and jump into the pool. From the sqeals and laughter outside, you would have thought there were a couple of teenagers in the pool.
Shane: “Catch you outside.”
Tina: “Wow, I really like your sisters house. She really has an eye for art. I love this piece . . . oh, look at that one. Amazing! Is that one of her photos? I love the definition and contrast of the . . .”
Kit: “Girl . . . I don’t know anything about art. I got the gift of music and she got the gift of art. We are about as opposite as two sisters can be. I can’t help you with any of it. I am sure she would love to give you the grand tour. I am going to go over and fix her Chinese food for her. She should be out anytime. Feel free to look around.”
Tina: “Oh, that’s okay, I will let her eat. Is there a bathroom I can use?”
Kit: “Sure, down the hall to the left. You can’t miss it.”
Just as Tina comes out of the bathroom, Bette walks out of the bedroom almost repeating this mornings misfortunate events. Both women stop just before they collide.
Tina: “Oh, my God! . . .”
TBC
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Honey what an understatement…Oh my God
Adorable, funny, what a great story! I can’t wait to see what unfolds with the dynamic duo…
OH MY GOD, IS RIGHT….THAT WAS FABULOUS PLEASE POST AGAIN CAN’T WAIT FOR MORE…THANKS
LOL!!!!! What a way to stop!!!!!! LMAO!!!!! POST SOON WILL YA!!!!!
Oh, my God too..lol..oh please post soon i cant wait for the next one
oh dont leave us hanging, please,
post real soon, great job
Hey portard you know this is just wrong leaving us hanging like that right?! well it was a good chapter, but what the hell do they say to one another. hmmmmm. pls don’t leave us hanging too long, K?
Very cute story. I just caught up with all the chapters and now I’m all tuned in and waiting for the next episode.
great story! can’t wait to hear Bette get out of this one! don’t leave us hanging like this….c’mon WHAT HAPPENS NEXT?!?!?
PLEASE POST TONITE!!!!! cant wait to see what Bette and Tina do!
Oh my God…what an understatement indeed. This is going to be an interesting introduction none the less. Bette & Tina…sparks are going to fly.
Hey…I’ve been lurking in the shadows catching up on this story bit by bit, and not commenting (sorry) because I’ve been so pressed for time lately–sooooo many awesome stories to read and sooooo little time *sighs* Anyway… I finally caught up at this post and just couldn’t wait to let you know how much I’ve enjoyed your version of a B & T beginning so far. In fact, I’m totally enamoured with it! You’re writing is so fresh and witty–I was completely hooked from the first chapter! I love the way you’ve brought Kit up more into the forefront and I can’t get enough of the way that you’ve been able to capture the “feel” of being part of a loving group of friends. I’m looking forward to more of your posts–Thanks=)
Oh please don’t leave us out here..waiting..must have another chapter…this story is funny and sweet. We are here for the ride
Damn this chapter is so funny and they have a good time, but now at Bette house I see we have a little problem here, Bette and Tina see each other again and let see what’s next. Post soon please, thanks!
post soon-can’t wait to see what happens next
GReat chapter keep them coming!!!
wow def agreeing with jackiee def a understatement
Oh my fuckin God is more like it. To funny post real soon I can’t wait to see what is said between the two. Excellent story.
funny story. what a way to end this chapter love the cliff hanger. what will tina do. hit bette for her rudeness? slap her? cant wait to find out.
K
I can’t believe you stopped there! lol Great chapter, can’t wait to see what happens.
hey porTARD – f’n funny. “the whole erika thing” and “im a dyke” that so cracked me up. i dont think ive ever heard tina utter anything remotely like that. just sent me into a fit of giggles. cant wait for the next riot of a chappy. the bitch and farm girl actually meet, properly. heehee. post soon
Not 2 seconds into the story and I am cracking up hysterically at this: Kit: “Ah, baby girl, I’m sorry you had to experience the cold hearted rage of some psycho bitch!….. I cant wait til she discovers she was talking about her own sister….
I could NEVER imagine Tina being “meat tagged” or like in the grocery store buying some meat.
Tina: “Kit, thanks for your concern, but I am a big girl and can handle them. The truth is they really aren’t my type…..LMAO @ Dana & Alice falling all over themselves to get to Tina and she aint even interested in them.
“Hold on Miss Crispy, she’s not interested in you either.”……..Ohhhhhhhh man…I’m dying ova here!!
BTW….that was dasterdly where you stopped at……post again soon. I loved this chapter a lot; and now that they have *cough* bumped into each other again, I am sure the next chapter is going to be an even bigger riot!