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I’ve Got You Under My Skin – Chapter 4
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Previously . . .
Dana: “We would love to have you come over and eat with us. We all have had hard Mondays and we just thought it would be fun to be together.”
Tina: “I don’t want to barge into your little family.”
Dana: “Nonsense, you wouldn’t be barging because we are inviting you to join us. Kit’s sister is even going to stop by later, so you can meet her too.”
Tina: “I don’t know, I just showered and got comfy.”
Dana: “You look great. Really, really great.”
Alice: “Yeah, (looking Tina up and down) you look really, good. We are a casual group . . . you got to eat, don’t you?”
Tina: “Okay, I probably won’t stay long, I’ve had a really exhausting day. Let me grab some shoes.”
As Alice and Dana wait for Tina to put on her shoes, they both are mesmerized by this beautiful southern blonde. Her smile, her smell, her sweetness . . . it was intoxicating.
Tina enters the room . . .
Tina: “Okay, I am ready.”
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Dinner at Dana’s
As Dana, Tina and Alice come through Dana’s front door, Shane and Kit are waiting in the living room.
Kit: (walking towards with arms outstretched to give a hug) “Tina! Hey girl! You survived your first day!”
Tina: (feeling great comfort from the hug) “Yes, I survived,but barely.”
Kit: “What happened?”
Tina: (tearing up) “Sorry . . . God, this is the second time today you’ve seen me cry . . . I really am not like this. I guess I am just a little emotional because I am so tired. I don’t want to ruin my evening, since she ruined my day. I don’t want to get in to it. Let’s just say, some people in this world can be really cruel. And then, there’s you guys. You restore my confidence in humans. Thanks for being so kind to me today.”
Kit: “Ah, baby girl, I’m sorry you had to experience the cold hearted rage of some psycho *****! It sound like we all had some ***** go down today . . . we just need to forget about it! Amen?”
Alice: “Let’s have a rule that we can’t talk about anything that happened from today. Okay? If you do bring something up from today then you have to buy everyone breakfast tomorrow?”
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Honey what an understatement…Oh my God
Adorable, funny, what a great story! I can’t wait to see what unfolds with the dynamic duo…
OH MY GOD, IS RIGHT….THAT WAS FABULOUS PLEASE POST AGAIN CAN’T WAIT FOR MORE…THANKS
LOL!!!!! What a way to stop!!!!!! LMAO!!!!! POST SOON WILL YA!!!!!
Oh, my God too..lol..oh please post soon i cant wait for the next one
oh dont leave us hanging, please,
post real soon, great job
Hey portard you know this is just wrong leaving us hanging like that right?! well it was a good chapter, but what the hell do they say to one another. hmmmmm. pls don’t leave us hanging too long, K?
Very cute story. I just caught up with all the chapters and now I’m all tuned in and waiting for the next episode.
great story! can’t wait to hear Bette get out of this one! don’t leave us hanging like this….c’mon WHAT HAPPENS NEXT?!?!?
PLEASE POST TONITE!!!!! cant wait to see what Bette and Tina do!
Oh my God…what an understatement indeed. This is going to be an interesting introduction none the less. Bette & Tina…sparks are going to fly.
Hey…I’ve been lurking in the shadows catching up on this story bit by bit, and not commenting (sorry) because I’ve been so pressed for time lately–sooooo many awesome stories to read and sooooo little time *sighs* Anyway… I finally caught up at this post and just couldn’t wait to let you know how much I’ve enjoyed your version of a B & T beginning so far. In fact, I’m totally enamoured with it! You’re writing is so fresh and witty–I was completely hooked from the first chapter! I love the way you’ve brought Kit up more into the forefront and I can’t get enough of the way that you’ve been able to capture the “feel” of being part of a loving group of friends. I’m looking forward to more of your posts–Thanks=)
Oh please don’t leave us out here..waiting..must have another chapter…this story is funny and sweet. We are here for the ride
Damn this chapter is so funny and they have a good time, but now at Bette house I see we have a little problem here, Bette and Tina see each other again and let see what’s next. Post soon please, thanks!
post soon-can’t wait to see what happens next
GReat chapter keep them coming!!!
wow def agreeing with jackiee def a understatement
Oh my fuckin God is more like it. To funny post real soon I can’t wait to see what is said between the two. Excellent story.
funny story. what a way to end this chapter love the cliff hanger. what will tina do. hit bette for her rudeness? slap her? cant wait to find out.
K
I can’t believe you stopped there! lol Great chapter, can’t wait to see what happens.
hey porTARD – f’n funny. “the whole erika thing” and “im a dyke” that so cracked me up. i dont think ive ever heard tina utter anything remotely like that. just sent me into a fit of giggles. cant wait for the next riot of a chappy. the bitch and farm girl actually meet, properly. heehee. post soon
Not 2 seconds into the story and I am cracking up hysterically at this: Kit: “Ah, baby girl, I’m sorry you had to experience the cold hearted rage of some psycho bitch!….. I cant wait til she discovers she was talking about her own sister….
I could NEVER imagine Tina being “meat tagged” or like in the grocery store buying some meat.
Tina: “Kit, thanks for your concern, but I am a big girl and can handle them. The truth is they really aren’t my type…..LMAO @ Dana & Alice falling all over themselves to get to Tina and she aint even interested in them.
“Hold on Miss Crispy, she’s not interested in you either.”……..Ohhhhhhhh man…I’m dying ova here!!
BTW….that was dasterdly where you stopped at……post again soon. I loved this chapter a lot; and now that they have *cough* bumped into each other again, I am sure the next chapter is going to be an even bigger riot!