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A helping hand and a push in the right direction-CH. 24
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Tina walked away with her hand covering her neck. It had been a long time since she had a hickey, andarning. ". I remember when…fort to cool down a bit. Big mistake. Alice’ Eli was old enough to know what it was.
Tina rushed into her room where Bette was already showered and changed. She was drying her hair when she heard Tina hurry into the room. She walked out of the restroom and found Tina looking at herself in the mirror.
“Hey baby what are you doing?”
Tina turned around. Bette stopped walking towards Tina. She didn’t look mad, just a little stressed. “What’s wrong?”
“This…” Tina showed Bette her neck.
“Oh…” Bette looked up at Tina apologetically. Bette made her way over to Tina. “….I’m sorry baby I didn’t do it on purpose.” Bette was now inspecting Tina’s neck. Tina saw Bette cringe a little then look back up at her sheepishly. “It’s not too bad it should be gone by the time the gallery opens…I’m sorry babe I didn’t think it’d leave a mark.”
“You forgot how easy it was for this to happen.”
“I know but at least you caught it before you went out there.”
Tina pouted. “No such luck. Alice saw it, as did the rest of the girls…and John.”
Bette cringed. “I bet that was fun.”
“Yes well it’s been awhile since I had a love bite.”
Bette pulled Tina into her arms. “Soo it’s been awhile since anyone’s left their mark on you?”
“Well in the past you’d usually leave them in places that weren’t noticeable…” Bette’s lips curled into a sexy smile. “…but at least in New York if it happens wearing a turtleneck or a collared shirt isn’t too unusual. But as a rule I don’t let it happen in the first place.”
“Hmm it sounds like you’re the alpha in your relationships.”
“I kind of have to be and to be honest having a certain amount of control in my relationships feels good.”
“That’s why Eli didn’t meet a lot of them?”
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very happy to see you post…thanks for the update.
lmao@Eli and the water gun! Alice probably taught Eli that trick. ;)
great update…on the first page though i think there’s a mix up with some sentences…like couple of phrazes got switched or something
Yay! Happiness!
“Babe you’re going to have to take your hands off my ass first.” LMFAO!!! Loved it!… Toribio, I’m off to bed now, and your chapter was the perfect bedtime story, so sweet and loving, thanks! Please, please tell me that you won’t keep us hanging for too long before some…um…more ‘intimate’ reconnection. *cute pout* Anyhow, this is just great!
Happy to see this, Eli is so cute kid. Alice is still Alice big mouth. Hope Tina get tranfer to LA. thanks
I love this story….the pacing, the dialogue, the characters just the whole concept.
Your story is one I wait for faithfully. Drama I understand, but lets hope they go through the drama together and come out stronger. We wouldn’t want Eli to get too upset because his mother isn’t happy
This is wonderful and Eli is funny and cute, love the way fo B&T now and let see whats next, thanks!
This IS perfect Bette….oh I mean Toribio :o)) Another wonderful post, I’m really addicted to this story. Eli is so sweet, I loved “I’ll have whatever Bette’s having.” :o)) And the heated kisses between B&T are SOOOO great – and the banter is priceless LOL. More please :o))
well i finally caught up… loving this story… and i am so glad they are talking and taking their time with everything… and now that tina is looking at her options for moving back… wonderful… the way it should be… bette and tina together… please continue
great post! the things are very well for this family yes!
If you haven’t already figured it out, we love this story. Just keep it coming, and please remember to keep all drama to a minimum.
Great update Tori but something happened on the first page several sentences were cut up and missing words and phrases and I could not put it together to make sense. To me those were essential. Great story other than those problems. Lovve Eli’s reaction to B&T being together. Please don’t make the drama too, too much they’ve been thru enough heartache and lonliness without each other. Give them some time to love again. Thanks again. Great story of reconnection and regaining lost love.
I so love your story, please post soon.
Yeah…what everybody said! Still loving this story and hoping the next chapter shows up soon!
Great update!!!!! Thank you I can not wait to see what happens next. PPS
I love this story…everything is just flowing along…conversation is cool, no tempers flaring. Tina looking at options…this is great! Please post soon.
Oh no, Tina is looking into moving to LA and I bet Bette is looking into moving to NY. Sort of like the Gift of the Magi story line. Drama is fine as long as B&T along with Eli stay together.