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A helping hand and a push in the right direction-CH. 24
A helping hand and a push in the right direction-CH. 24
Day after the party
Tina and Bette were lounging in bed. Tina snuck out of Bette’s arms to get them some coffee. As soon as she walked back in the room she found Bette awake hugging Tina’s pillow.
“You’re awake.”
“It’s no fun waking up alone.”
Tina put the coffee cups on the side table and crawled back into bed with Bette. Bette pulled Tina down on top of her immediately followed by some passionate kisses.
“Wow babe maybe I should let you wake up by yourself more often.”
“Don’t even joke about that. We’ve spent too many mornings away from each other already.”
“You’re absolutely right baby…” Tina rolled to her side to get the coffee. “…will you accept this cup of coffee as a peace offering?”
Bette pretended to think about it. “On one condition…”
Tina loved when Bette was playful in the morning. Bette sat up and accepted her cup of coffee. “I’ll agree to whatever condition you can think of.”
Bette’s sexy smile made a reappearance Eli to have fun so I won’re of especially the week of the opening." as she took a sip of her coffee. “It’s dangerous to agree to something before hearing what it is.”
“I trust you.”
The softness in Tina’s voice and the love in her eyes gave Bette pause. She put her coffee down on the side table and sat up straighter before turning back to Tina. Tina moved in closer when she saw Bette’s mood change.
“You really do don’t you.”
Tina took Bette’s hand. “Do you think I’d let someone I didn’t trust take care of my son?”
“I know you trust me to take care of Eli, I’d do anything for him. But that’s not what I was talking about.”
“I’m a little confused I thought we were talking about my trusting you.”
“We are. What I meant was, you trust me with your heart again. You really believe me when I say I love you and only you. That I don’t want to ever hurt you again…”
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(52 votes, average: 3.88 out of 5)
very happy to see you post…thanks for the update.
lmao@Eli and the water gun! Alice probably taught Eli that trick. ;)
great update…on the first page though i think there’s a mix up with some sentences…like couple of phrazes got switched or something
Yay! Happiness!
“Babe you’re going to have to take your hands off my ass first.” LMFAO!!! Loved it!… Toribio, I’m off to bed now, and your chapter was the perfect bedtime story, so sweet and loving, thanks! Please, please tell me that you won’t keep us hanging for too long before some…um…more ‘intimate’ reconnection. *cute pout* Anyhow, this is just great!
Happy to see this, Eli is so cute kid. Alice is still Alice big mouth. Hope Tina get tranfer to LA. thanks
I love this story….the pacing, the dialogue, the characters just the whole concept.
Your story is one I wait for faithfully. Drama I understand, but lets hope they go through the drama together and come out stronger. We wouldn’t want Eli to get too upset because his mother isn’t happy
This is wonderful and Eli is funny and cute, love the way fo B&T now and let see whats next, thanks!
This IS perfect Bette….oh I mean Toribio :o)) Another wonderful post, I’m really addicted to this story. Eli is so sweet, I loved “I’ll have whatever Bette’s having.” :o)) And the heated kisses between B&T are SOOOO great – and the banter is priceless LOL. More please :o))
well i finally caught up… loving this story… and i am so glad they are talking and taking their time with everything… and now that tina is looking at her options for moving back… wonderful… the way it should be… bette and tina together… please continue
great post! the things are very well for this family yes!
If you haven’t already figured it out, we love this story. Just keep it coming, and please remember to keep all drama to a minimum.
Great update Tori but something happened on the first page several sentences were cut up and missing words and phrases and I could not put it together to make sense. To me those were essential. Great story other than those problems. Lovve Eli’s reaction to B&T being together. Please don’t make the drama too, too much they’ve been thru enough heartache and lonliness without each other. Give them some time to love again. Thanks again. Great story of reconnection and regaining lost love.
I so love your story, please post soon.
Yeah…what everybody said! Still loving this story and hoping the next chapter shows up soon!
Great update!!!!! Thank you I can not wait to see what happens next. PPS
I love this story…everything is just flowing along…conversation is cool, no tempers flaring. Tina looking at options…this is great! Please post soon.
Oh no, Tina is looking into moving to LA and I bet Bette is looking into moving to NY. Sort of like the Gift of the Magi story line. Drama is fine as long as B&T along with Eli stay together.