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A helping hand and a push in the right direction-CH. 24
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Bette’s grin widened. “Sorry I didn’t realize they were still there.” Bette took her hands away as Tina got off of Bette’s lap.
Tina put on her robe and noticed that Bette was still sitting in bed. “Are you going to go out there with me?”
“I think I’m going to have to take a cold shower before I go out there.”
“I’m sorry babe.”
“Don’t be T that was a very good way to start my morning.”
Tina laughed as she walked out of the room leaving Bette to her shower. Tina joined the rest of the girls at the table; the kids were still asleep they weren’t expected to wake up anytime soon.
“Isn’t my baby sister going to join us?”
“She’s taking a shower. She’ll be right out.”
Everyone noticed the change in Tina’s mood. When she wasn’t sipping her coffee she seemed to be in her own world and her huge smile was a dead give away that it was Bette that put that smile on her face.
Alice couldn’t help herself. “Hey TK are you feeling alright you look a little flush. Maybe doctor John should check you out.”
That got Tina’s attention. “What…no I’m fine.” Tina put her coffee down and lightly touched her cheek. “I’m fine John.” Tina felt her cheeks getting warmer.
Shane nudged Alice. “Leave her alone.”
Tina decided to put her hair up into a ponytail in an effort to cool down a bit. Big mistake. Alice’s eyes went wide.
“Holy shit Porter hoovered you.”
“What…no I don’t get hickeys…”
Alice was laughing. “What do you have a hickey resistant neck.” Dana nudged Alice.
Tina looked over at Shane. “Is it bad?” She took her hand off and showed them again.
She saw a few cringes. “It’s noticeable but not bad.”
“I can’t believe I didn’t even feel it.”
Alice winked at her. “You never do when the good one’s do it. They keep you in the moment. I remember when…”
Tina shot Alice a look of warning. “Don’t even go there. I need to find a mirror.”
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very happy to see you post…thanks for the update.
lmao@Eli and the water gun! Alice probably taught Eli that trick. ;)
great update…on the first page though i think there’s a mix up with some sentences…like couple of phrazes got switched or something
Yay! Happiness!
“Babe you’re going to have to take your hands off my ass first.” LMFAO!!! Loved it!… Toribio, I’m off to bed now, and your chapter was the perfect bedtime story, so sweet and loving, thanks! Please, please tell me that you won’t keep us hanging for too long before some…um…more ‘intimate’ reconnection. *cute pout* Anyhow, this is just great!
Happy to see this, Eli is so cute kid. Alice is still Alice big mouth. Hope Tina get tranfer to LA. thanks
I love this story….the pacing, the dialogue, the characters just the whole concept.
Your story is one I wait for faithfully. Drama I understand, but lets hope they go through the drama together and come out stronger. We wouldn’t want Eli to get too upset because his mother isn’t happy
This is wonderful and Eli is funny and cute, love the way fo B&T now and let see whats next, thanks!
This IS perfect Bette….oh I mean Toribio :o)) Another wonderful post, I’m really addicted to this story. Eli is so sweet, I loved “I’ll have whatever Bette’s having.” :o)) And the heated kisses between B&T are SOOOO great – and the banter is priceless LOL. More please :o))
well i finally caught up… loving this story… and i am so glad they are talking and taking their time with everything… and now that tina is looking at her options for moving back… wonderful… the way it should be… bette and tina together… please continue
great post! the things are very well for this family yes!
If you haven’t already figured it out, we love this story. Just keep it coming, and please remember to keep all drama to a minimum.
Great update Tori but something happened on the first page several sentences were cut up and missing words and phrases and I could not put it together to make sense. To me those were essential. Great story other than those problems. Lovve Eli’s reaction to B&T being together. Please don’t make the drama too, too much they’ve been thru enough heartache and lonliness without each other. Give them some time to love again. Thanks again. Great story of reconnection and regaining lost love.
I so love your story, please post soon.
Yeah…what everybody said! Still loving this story and hoping the next chapter shows up soon!
Great update!!!!! Thank you I can not wait to see what happens next. PPS
I love this story…everything is just flowing along…conversation is cool, no tempers flaring. Tina looking at options…this is great! Please post soon.
Oh no, Tina is looking into moving to LA and I bet Bette is looking into moving to NY. Sort of like the Gift of the Magi story line. Drama is fine as long as B&T along with Eli stay together.