Fan Fiction
This story has been set to a rating of PG-13. Age verification is required to proceed.
A helping hand and a push in the right direction-CH. 24
Tina leaned in and tenderly kissed Bette before she could finish her sentence. Tina moved her leg over Bette’s and straddled her, sitting down in Bette’s lap as they continued to kiss. As their kiss deepened Bette wrapped her arms around Tina before her hands slowly made their way underneath Tina’s shirt. Tina tangled her fingers in Bette’s hair as one of her hands gently held the back of Bette’s neck bringing Bette even closer. Normally when they kissed like this everything else would melt away and was forgotten, but things were becoming very heated and they still had a very full house many of which were at the breakfast table. She hated to do it but Tina pulled out of their kiss. Bette wasn’t so willing to end the kiss and leaned forward to kiss Tina again. Tina tried to pull away again but this time turned her face to the side. Bad move because Bette proceeded to kiss along Tina’s jaw and down to her neck. Bette was now lightly kissing Tina’s neck. Tina moaned when she felt Bette’s tongue make contact with her skin.
“Baby…babe we have to stop.”
“Why? Doesn’t this feel good?”
Bette was still kissing Tina’s neck applying a bit more pressure. “It feels soo good…” Tina was finding it very hard to concentrate. “…but we’re not alone and I’m sure someone’s bound to walk in on us if we continue.”
Bette let out a groan of frustration as she removed her lips from Tina’s neck. Tina turned her face back and was resting her forehead against Bette’s.
“I’m so sorry baby. I know it’s not fair to stop something I started but…”
Bette had managed to calm down a bit she was still feeling a little overheated. “It’s okay baby. You’re right I definitely don’t want our first time to be with a house full of people. I want it to be really special.”
Tina lightly kissed Bette and disentangled her fingers from Bette’s hair. “We should probably go make an appearance outside.”
“Yeah.”
Tina smiled. “Ready?”
“Yes.”
Tina laughed. “Babe you’re going to have to take your hands off my ass first.”
Comments
Leave a Reply
You must be logged in to post a comment.



(52 votes, average: 3.88 out of 5)
very happy to see you post…thanks for the update.
lmao@Eli and the water gun! Alice probably taught Eli that trick. ;)
great update…on the first page though i think there’s a mix up with some sentences…like couple of phrazes got switched or something
Yay! Happiness!
“Babe you’re going to have to take your hands off my ass first.” LMFAO!!! Loved it!… Toribio, I’m off to bed now, and your chapter was the perfect bedtime story, so sweet and loving, thanks! Please, please tell me that you won’t keep us hanging for too long before some…um…more ‘intimate’ reconnection. *cute pout* Anyhow, this is just great!
Happy to see this, Eli is so cute kid. Alice is still Alice big mouth. Hope Tina get tranfer to LA. thanks
I love this story….the pacing, the dialogue, the characters just the whole concept.
Your story is one I wait for faithfully. Drama I understand, but lets hope they go through the drama together and come out stronger. We wouldn’t want Eli to get too upset because his mother isn’t happy
This is wonderful and Eli is funny and cute, love the way fo B&T now and let see whats next, thanks!
This IS perfect Bette….oh I mean Toribio :o)) Another wonderful post, I’m really addicted to this story. Eli is so sweet, I loved “I’ll have whatever Bette’s having.” :o)) And the heated kisses between B&T are SOOOO great – and the banter is priceless LOL. More please :o))
well i finally caught up… loving this story… and i am so glad they are talking and taking their time with everything… and now that tina is looking at her options for moving back… wonderful… the way it should be… bette and tina together… please continue
great post! the things are very well for this family yes!
If you haven’t already figured it out, we love this story. Just keep it coming, and please remember to keep all drama to a minimum.
Great update Tori but something happened on the first page several sentences were cut up and missing words and phrases and I could not put it together to make sense. To me those were essential. Great story other than those problems. Lovve Eli’s reaction to B&T being together. Please don’t make the drama too, too much they’ve been thru enough heartache and lonliness without each other. Give them some time to love again. Thanks again. Great story of reconnection and regaining lost love.
I so love your story, please post soon.
Yeah…what everybody said! Still loving this story and hoping the next chapter shows up soon!
Great update!!!!! Thank you I can not wait to see what happens next. PPS
I love this story…everything is just flowing along…conversation is cool, no tempers flaring. Tina looking at options…this is great! Please post soon.
Oh no, Tina is looking into moving to LA and I bet Bette is looking into moving to NY. Sort of like the Gift of the Magi story line. Drama is fine as long as B&T along with Eli stay together.