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A helping hand and a push in the right direction–Ch. 10
Alice: "Eli hasn’t mentioned anything?"
Bette: "Well when we first meet he asked me if I still loved Tina and if given the chance would I be with her again, but that doesn’t mean that she’s single."
Alice: "What did you say?"
Bette was quiet and was looking down. After a minute she looked back up at them. She started to talk again but her voice was lower.
Bette: "You guys know that I’ve always regretted losing Tina. I’ve never loved anyone as much as I love Tina. You know I’ve tried to move on but do you really think I have a chance with her again?"
Kit: "Bette she named him ‘Eli Porter Kennard’ I don’t think you were the only one that had trouble letting go."
Alice: "She did let me see." Alice took the document away from Kit and Kit gave her a look telling her not to do that again. "Sorry Kit my hands have a mind of their own…I can’t believe I missed that the first time, I must be slipping."
Bette: "You’re not the only one that missed it. I didn’t notice that until I got home. Lucky for me Shane was here to help calm me down."
Alice: "Porter I think there’s definitely a chance for a love connection between you and Tina. You already know that her son likes you."
Shane: "You’ve talked to Tina a few times how have you two been getting along?"
Bette looked over at Eli turned back and smiled.
Bette: "It was a little awkward at first. I couldn’t believe I was actually talking to Tina, but now it feels natural to answer the phone and hear her on the other end. God I always did love her voice, but it’s different now."
Alice: "Why?"
Bette: "Because I’m different. I’m not the same person I was nine years ago and I’m sure Tina’s changed. But even though we’ve been apart for so long I still feel a connection with her…All we talk about is Eli but you guys should have heard me I was a nervous wreck, and she managed to calm me down." Bette started to laugh a little remembering her conversations with Tina. "She’s been so great about letting me spend time with Eli."
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(53 votes, average: 4.04 out of 5)
I have to tell you again I can’t get enough of this story. I hope you get to post soon…
5 stars…5 stars…5 stars. I love this story. Can’t wait for Tina’s arrival so they can talk face to face. Keep everyone healthy and happy. No plane crashes for Tina, no car wrecks, etc.
Dainty is very smart. To put two and two together .Elizabeth Porter and Eli Porter Kennard. Eli reminds me of Bette so knowledgeable and always ready to learn more. He will love Bette the way Tina does forever. He have surrounded with lots of love and a Mom that knows heart ache. I caught the He wasnt a woman and some one else had her love. Wonder it Bette hear the same thing? thanks,Eli is a amazing child thanks
This story is definitely a winner. I just love it and the way you’re unfolding the different characters. Dialogue is excellent and I do appreciate the longer chapters. I can really get engrossed in it.
it has been a very relaxing and easy read, thanks…so wonderful to see how happy everyone is with Eli…can’t wait for Tina to get to LA so they can talk face to face
As with all great stories there has too be a certain amount of drama. So is it on the cards? Anyway loved this chapter, you’ve captured the essense of all the main characters to perfection. Thanks and post soon.
This story is awesome! I hope there is nothing wrong with Tina and that her naming Eli after her 1st love, is only because she missed and loves her so much. The story is happy and upbeat and I hope if there is any drama, that its minimal.
Super story! Love it.
YIPPEEEEEE!! Doing happy dance!!! Great chapter as always can’t wait to see how the week goes and when T arrives..post SOOOONNNNNNNNNNNN!! THANK YOU!!!
Just brilliant! can’t wait for more. :)
Maybe I imagined it but wasn’t Oliver as the donor mentioned in one of the first chapters? And I feel dumb I didn’t even noticed that Eli is in the name Elizabeth. DUHHHHHHH lol
Obviously, you’ve got us all hooked. More soon?
Damn this is amazing and wonderful and can’t wait to see more. Ok post soon please, thanks!
Awesome chapter and Eli is adorable..just like Bette :)
the phone time was so sweet! and Bette getting jelous was great! they still love each other ! glad that the gang was so nice with Eli, i can’t wait to read about Tina landing in LA! you are doing so great! congrats!
Thanks for taking time out to post this chapter. I am getting so excited about Tina coming to LA. I can not wait until Bette and her are face to face. Eli seems to know that both of them are still very much in love with each other. It is going to interesting when Tina explains her naming Eli with Bette’s last name. Post when you can.
Wow! Thanks for this awewsome story that you’re taking your time to tell. I love the way you’ve fleshed out this journey, and I feel like a butthead for not seeing the Eli–Elizabeth connection! I was so excited when I saw your latest post appear! Hope the next one is a long one, too! Thanks so much for hooking us into the possibility of a happy ending, all as a result of a little child leading the way!
great story-i can’t wait until the next post-
well i just read all 10 chapters and i love this story… i am so glad they are nice to each other over the phone and that tina didn’t go crazy when bette started to yell about taking eli back… when she was going to ask bette to keep him for the week… so now when tina comes to visit… i hope she also gets to stay with bette… she has plenty of room… please continue
Another great chapter T! More…more…and more please!
awesome, I am so in love with this story, can’t help but love Eli, and I agree…short for Elizabeth? Tina’s been carrying a torch for Bette forever, why oh why did she stay away for so long; Aanywayz can you pleaseeeeee get them face to face, mouth to mouth, body to bodyyyyyy like not in 3 days but tomorrow!!!!lmao….more please!!!!
I just love this story. Tina and Bette talking is so great. I can not waiat for the next POST!!!!!! Thank you
god i love this fic…..continue soon please……..ohhh and thanx for the long chappy……
I LOVE IT, I LOVE IT. Uuummmmm, love the story or couldn’t you tell. This was a fantastic chapter, so happy that everyone got along so well as I knew they would. Just knew that everyone would love Eli and just surround him with lots of love and most of all Bette would love him more, and his mother. Can hardly wait for Tina to get there just possibly the next day. I don’t believe she will wait another 2 or 3 days, if she is not already in California. I hope she will explain that since he was a boy she oculd not name him Elizabeth, so she shortened the name to Eli Porter, makes sense to me. Post again soon, please.