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A helping hand and a push in the right direction–Ch. 10
Bette stayed inside waiting for Eli to come back out.
Eli: "Bette."
Bette: "I’m over here. Ready to get in the pool?"
Eli: "Yeah are you going to come in?"
Bette: "Sure in a little bit. Let’s get outside I’m sure Jack’s waiting for you…Hey Eli do you really consider us all family?"
Eli: "Mom thinks of all of you as her family so that makes you my family. Right?"
Bette: "Right. Come on everyone’s waiting for us."
Eli: "Do you think it’s too early to call them my Aunts?"
Bette put her arm over Eli’s shoulder and started to walk him outside.
Bette: "I think they’d like it very much if you did." At this point Eli stopped before stepping outside.
Eli: "What do I call you."
Bette: "What do you mean?" Bette said a little confused by the question, didn’t Tina consider me family?
Eli: "It’s just that whenever we talked about Kit, Alice, Dana, and Shane she said they were my Aunts. But you were always Bette."
After hearing this Bette looked a little sad she wasn’t sure how to take what she just heard and Eli recognized her change in mood.
Eli: "Bette whenever I asked if you were like my Aunt, mom would say that you were a lot more then an Aunt." Hearing this made Bette smile again. "I’m only telling you this so that you won’t take it the wrong way when I call everyone else Aunt and not you…"
Bette: "Then you keep calling me Bette." Bette pulled him into a hug. "Just know that I love you very much and that will never change." They hugged for a little while longer and noticed that they had an audience. "Come on lets go have some fun."
Eli: "Okay."
As Eli was walking to the pool Bette called him back.
Bette: "Hey Eli before you get in maybe you should put on some sunscreen. I have some over by the towels."
Eli: "Right. I almost forgot." Eli started to put on some sunscreen then walked over to Bette. "Bette can you put some on my back, mom usually does it for me."
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(53 votes, average: 4.04 out of 5)
I have to tell you again I can’t get enough of this story. I hope you get to post soon…
5 stars…5 stars…5 stars. I love this story. Can’t wait for Tina’s arrival so they can talk face to face. Keep everyone healthy and happy. No plane crashes for Tina, no car wrecks, etc.
Dainty is very smart. To put two and two together .Elizabeth Porter and Eli Porter Kennard. Eli reminds me of Bette so knowledgeable and always ready to learn more. He will love Bette the way Tina does forever. He have surrounded with lots of love and a Mom that knows heart ache. I caught the He wasnt a woman and some one else had her love. Wonder it Bette hear the same thing? thanks,Eli is a amazing child thanks
This story is definitely a winner. I just love it and the way you’re unfolding the different characters. Dialogue is excellent and I do appreciate the longer chapters. I can really get engrossed in it.
it has been a very relaxing and easy read, thanks…so wonderful to see how happy everyone is with Eli…can’t wait for Tina to get to LA so they can talk face to face
As with all great stories there has too be a certain amount of drama. So is it on the cards? Anyway loved this chapter, you’ve captured the essense of all the main characters to perfection. Thanks and post soon.
This story is awesome! I hope there is nothing wrong with Tina and that her naming Eli after her 1st love, is only because she missed and loves her so much. The story is happy and upbeat and I hope if there is any drama, that its minimal.
Super story! Love it.
YIPPEEEEEE!! Doing happy dance!!! Great chapter as always can’t wait to see how the week goes and when T arrives..post SOOOONNNNNNNNNNNN!! THANK YOU!!!
Just brilliant! can’t wait for more. :)
Maybe I imagined it but wasn’t Oliver as the donor mentioned in one of the first chapters? And I feel dumb I didn’t even noticed that Eli is in the name Elizabeth. DUHHHHHHH lol
Obviously, you’ve got us all hooked. More soon?
Damn this is amazing and wonderful and can’t wait to see more. Ok post soon please, thanks!
Awesome chapter and Eli is adorable..just like Bette :)
the phone time was so sweet! and Bette getting jelous was great! they still love each other ! glad that the gang was so nice with Eli, i can’t wait to read about Tina landing in LA! you are doing so great! congrats!
Thanks for taking time out to post this chapter. I am getting so excited about Tina coming to LA. I can not wait until Bette and her are face to face. Eli seems to know that both of them are still very much in love with each other. It is going to interesting when Tina explains her naming Eli with Bette’s last name. Post when you can.
Wow! Thanks for this awewsome story that you’re taking your time to tell. I love the way you’ve fleshed out this journey, and I feel like a butthead for not seeing the Eli–Elizabeth connection! I was so excited when I saw your latest post appear! Hope the next one is a long one, too! Thanks so much for hooking us into the possibility of a happy ending, all as a result of a little child leading the way!
great story-i can’t wait until the next post-
well i just read all 10 chapters and i love this story… i am so glad they are nice to each other over the phone and that tina didn’t go crazy when bette started to yell about taking eli back… when she was going to ask bette to keep him for the week… so now when tina comes to visit… i hope she also gets to stay with bette… she has plenty of room… please continue
Another great chapter T! More…more…and more please!
awesome, I am so in love with this story, can’t help but love Eli, and I agree…short for Elizabeth? Tina’s been carrying a torch for Bette forever, why oh why did she stay away for so long; Aanywayz can you pleaseeeeee get them face to face, mouth to mouth, body to bodyyyyyy like not in 3 days but tomorrow!!!!lmao….more please!!!!
I just love this story. Tina and Bette talking is so great. I can not waiat for the next POST!!!!!! Thank you
god i love this fic…..continue soon please……..ohhh and thanx for the long chappy……
I LOVE IT, I LOVE IT. Uuummmmm, love the story or couldn’t you tell. This was a fantastic chapter, so happy that everyone got along so well as I knew they would. Just knew that everyone would love Eli and just surround him with lots of love and most of all Bette would love him more, and his mother. Can hardly wait for Tina to get there just possibly the next day. I don’t believe she will wait another 2 or 3 days, if she is not already in California. I hope she will explain that since he was a boy she oculd not name him Elizabeth, so she shortened the name to Eli Porter, makes sense to me. Post again soon, please.