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You (Part the Forty-Seventh)
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Shane had a lot of customers as always, so Bette and Dana just sat around and talked for an hour or so while she finished up. Bette was really happy to learn that the filming for ESPN had gone so well. “You know, I could probably speak to the coach of the tennis team if you wouldn’t mind giving them a speech. A lot of kids on campus have been asking about you since Jenny’s story got printed.”
“That fucking story’s going to be the death of us all, socially speaking,” Dana muttered. “I mean, I get that she was trying to draw on her experiences, but come on. It’s a little too close to home for me, and the way she wrote my coming out wasn’t exactly nice. And I don’t like some of the things she said about you. Or Tina. Or Alice. Or…anybody, really.” She’d been expecting Bette to agree, but she just shrugged. Dana pointed at her exaggeratedly and laughed. “You’re telling me you haven’t even read it yet? I can’t believe you! The whole book’s basically about what a shit you are.”
“Fantastic,” Bette muttered. “I’ll read it eventually. I just think Jenny’s little play for attention is getting her in over her head. To tell you the truth, I’m kinda worried about her. She’s been a lot more over the top lately, and I’m not sure it’s just the fame going to her head.”
“You think she might be having more…uh, mental issues?” Dana asked quietly as Shane walked over.
“I think she is,” Shane said by way of greeting. “I mean, I love her to death, but something’s not right about her. I don’t think she really got everything worked out when she went back to Skokie. I keep telling myself I’ll mention it to her, but I can’t bring myself to do it.”
“You will, when you think it’s right. You obviously care about her, I don’t think you’ve got it in you to let her hurt herself,” Dana said reassuringly. Shane just smiled in acceptance of this and smiled.
“Okay, Bette, let’s get your hurr did. The I’ll mess around with Miss Dana’s.” She stopped and grinned. “Yeah, I said it. It’s a joke, calm down.”
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Bravo! I love seeing these two working things out and how much they truly love each other. Plus they get all the support from their best friends. I must say, the whole witnessing someone dying thing has to be the most traumatic experience. You really nailed it in Alice/Tasha conversaton. Your writing is so real. I often can picture the scenes unfold in my head. Thanks again for a wonderful chapter. Will Alice become really successful because of the chart and still drive the mini? Hope so. I am a little apprehensive about Tahsa though. Alice by nature is a caring person. I just hope that her love for Dana will keep her out of trouble. Can’t wait for your next post. btw, it’s water under bridge regarding “on the boards” last night. There is no need for apology. I was not even slightly displeased. Hope today is better for you. Can’t wait for you next post.
As always Muted you make me smile at all of your updates for our Danish. Sorry haven’t posted a comment in a while, but i have read them all and love your writing dearly. It always amazes me how i can see what you write in my mind. it is so much better then the show itself, i might not watch and just read your stuff instead :). ok, i’ll peak, only because of leisha though, keep up with the happy mood:) and the writing!
Perfect – as usual. Great to have you posting this story again as we need all of our Danish writers as you know that you are the best!!!
Once again my Sunday Danish fix, yay! Nice job in getting Tasha into the picture. Actually it’s kinda freakish how well you blend these characters into your story with close to actual storylines/dialogue from the show. I have to say your description of Dana’s eyes toward the end of the chapter just about melted my entire being, thanx!? Seriously, this story makes the actual show look like one big nightmare; I’m with Dana and Alice this has to be the reality…!
Babe you know I heart you and I heart this story, I really liked the was you got Tasha to open up a bit, I’m so loving my version of paws in this. I also loved the NC-17 well you knew I do anyway hehe.
I cannot express the excitement I felt when I saw an update. I haven’t quite had my danish fix besides watching my season 1 and 2 dvds. I’m so estatic about Dana mentioning kids with Alice. Too cute. Hope to see another soon.
hey, really good Alice & Tasha convo you created here. Very believable and real. Alice’s therapy sounds like a lot of work for both of them. Great great update!Nice to hear about your happyness in the private life department. Hope it works out for you. And hey, shut up about the ugly stuff, you’re silly if you think that. I just meant that you have a talent for words and writing and I’m sure talking as well. That also would have to mean you are charming and all the other stuff love and flirting requires, lol. So: good luck!
my god muted are u aware just how much i love this story well times that by a million you just cant help urself can you, getting better and better every chap i know its just a story and i prob sound like an idiot but ur just so good plus im in love with danish :) keep up the great work!!!
that was great I can’t wait to see what will happen next and I think that alice and tasha can help each other get pass all the problem that they are both having please post soon great update I love it
I’ve been reading you, and I’ve finished Valediction, I meant to leave a comment but I haven’t made an account first. I just thought I’d finally leave one and let you know that your work is really really good! I love it… and it makes me so happy that there’s atill Danish stories out here. thank you for taking time to write this:)
Awesome to see another update so soon…Great Stuff…I am happy that you are in a good mood, it’s a great way to feel…Love DANISH…Love, Love, Love, PPS