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WESTERN SKIES
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Kit – When is the exhibit?
Bette – In ten days!
Kit – Did you finish all your paintings?
Bette – Yes!
Kit – And where is my invitation?
Bette chuckles.
Bette – You never go!
Kit – But I like to receive them anyway.
Bette – I’ll give you before I leave.
She takes another bite of her muffin.
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A day later
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Western Skies Ranch, morning: Bette leaves the house carrying her suitcase. Jim places it on the back of his truck. She looks around.
Bette – Are they still in Breckenridge?
Jim – I think so.
Bette – Say goodbye to them for me, Jim.
Jim – I will.
Bette – And please take Charlie for a ride from time to time.
Jim – Sure! He always misses the valley when you leave.
They enter the truck and drive away.
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San Francisco International Airport, afternoon: Bette is at the arrival station when a red Volkswagen beetle stops at the curb with a short haired blonde woman at the wheel. The brunette opens the door.
Bette – Hey, Al! Thanks for picking me up!
She places her suitcase on the back seat.
Alice – No problem! I haven’t seen you in ages!
Bette – Yeah … I stayed a while longer this time.
She gets into the car and kisses Alice on the cheek.
Alice – About time you came! Isn’t the date of the exhibit approaching?
Bette – Yes! Thanks for talking to Angela!
Alice – Yeah, she will handle the reception. How is Kit?
She puts the car in first gear.
Bette – Fine!
Alice – Oh … I have a story to tell you!
The brunette smirks.
Bette – I’m sure you do …
They drive away.
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Western Skies stable afternoon: Tina enters the stable carrying an apple. She approaches Minnie’s stall and notices that Charlie is in. She smiles and pats Minnie.
Tina – You got your boyfriend back, didn’t you, Minnie?
The horse nickers. She gives her half of the apple. She walks over to Charlie’s stall and pats him.
Tina – Hi, pretty boy!
Charlie gives a short blow. Jim comes in carrying a bucket.
Tina – Hi, Jim! Is Bette in the house?
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Hi, thanks for the chapter!
I comment again when i done with reading
So, Bette kissed Tina and then sleeped with Joanna? If not, how Joanna was in her cabin? Did Bette give all her fucking buddies keys from her cabin? So i think she’s sleeping with her. And in that case maybe for Tina better stay away from her – this Bette just a player
I’ll see where you go in this story
Hi, Zhenya,
I think Joanna went to Bette’s cabin univited hoping to reconnect with her, but it didn’t happen. Apparently she also gave up, recognising that Bette has found love and kissed her goodbye. That’s how I see it, at least 😅
I thought about it, but how Joanna gets the key?
We’ll see, maybe later author gives up clearing about this
I thought about the key too, but hadn’t Tina found the cabin open too and decided to just wait on the porch, the day she “lost” Minnie? Maybe Bette never locks up the cabin’s door ????
Maybe)
This is why I said that it is fun to find out what the readers think. Zhenya, the first thing that Bette asks Joanna when she wakes up is: “What are you doing here?” And Joanna replies: “I miss you. We haven’t been together in a while.” This is a rustic cabin in Bette’s property. I don’t think she worries about keys. As Atritonia pointed out, even Tina got in uninvited at some point.
Thank you for this first season, dbff! I enjoyed it a lot.
I love the parallelism between Minnie & Charlie and Tina & Bette and how you write as for a screenplay.
Can’t wait to read what will happen at the opening!
It was a slow burn alright! Quite the dream, the one Tina had ????
Thanks for the help, Atritonia. You are very perceptive. And I also like the parallelism that you mention, particularly in Tina’s conversations with Minnie. I think she has a lot going on in her subconscious. :)
Thank you for this first season!
I really enjoyed it alot
Thank you for the Scene Setting First Season!
Look forward to your next post, soon I hope!
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I am not with Zhenya and have faith in Bette.
Enjoyed first season thanks. PPS
SG
Thank you so much for the first season dbff!!!
I really enjoyed it!!!
Seems Bette should lock her cabin to make sure uninvited woman can’t enter it.
But i understood that Joanna wanted a Bette for breakfast, i would love that too ????
I am ready for the second season!!!
I haven’t commented on a story in awhile as I’ve been hiding as a silent reader, but I just had to hop on here and tell you how much I absolutely love this story! So much that I kept checking back frequently hoping for a new post and you never disappoint!
Can’t wait to see how it all progresses and I also like that it hasn’t felt rushed at all.
PPS!
Great Chapter!
It seems Charlie has Bette withdraws also.. just as Tina is having in her dreams. The painting of her I think will make her forget all about miss trouble making Joanna and follow her heart.
We all know she will indeed make it to the opening and be drop dead gorgeous and I think Bette is not quiet ready for the fireworks because I’m not convinced that Bette left her an invitation.
I know if Joanna can see a difference in Bette than Kit sure has and knows who has make that difference. And seeing the painting backed her theory up. Mmm… thank you loved it and can’t wait to see whats up next.
Just caught up. Enjoyed it a lot. Thanks