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Jim – No, Miss Tina! She left yesterday for San Francisco. I drove her to the Rent-a-car. She asked me to say goodbye to all of you.
The blonde raises her eyebrows.
Tina – Oh … I didn’t know that she was leaving today …
She gives Charlie the other half of the apple. She sighs, looking sad.
Chapter 19
Breckenridge Bar, night: Tina, Brian, Jen and a couple of crew members are in the bar drinking beer. She looks sad.
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Ranch house porch, morning: Kit is rocking in a chair, when Tina arrives at the ranch and parks her car. She is wearing sunglasses. Kit waves to her.
Kit – Hey, Tina! I’ve been waiting for you!
Tina – Hi, Kit!
The blonde walks up to the porch.
Tina – Sorry, we went out to a bar last night and …
She chuckles.
Tina – … let’s just say, I had to leave my car there and get a ride. So, I went to retrieve it this morning.
Kit – That must have been fun!
Tina shakes her head.
Tina – Not really … I don’t know what I was thinking … I hadn’t drunk like that since my first year in college.
She chuckles.
Tina – And I woke up with a headache!
Kit – Too bad!
Tina – Did you want to talk to me?
Kit – Oh, I have something for you!
She hands her an envelope. Tina takes off her sunglasses and squints. She stares at the envelope, where her name appears: Tina Kennard.
Tina – What is it?
She looks at Kit inquisitively.
Kit – Open it!
She opens the envelope and retrieves a card to find an elegant formal invitation to an exhibit entitled “Women” at the Bette Porter Gallery. She raises her eyebrows.
Tina – Wow …
She looks pensive.
Kit – Bette always sends me invitations for her exhibits. She asked me to also give you this one.
A smile appears on the blonde’s face.
Tina – It’s nice of her.
Kit – It’s a little more than a week from now!
Tina – Are you going?
Kit – No, I can’t. But you should! Then you can tell me all about it!
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Hi, thanks for the chapter!
I comment again when i done with reading
So, Bette kissed Tina and then sleeped with Joanna? If not, how Joanna was in her cabin? Did Bette give all her fucking buddies keys from her cabin? So i think she’s sleeping with her. And in that case maybe for Tina better stay away from her – this Bette just a player
I’ll see where you go in this story
Hi, Zhenya,
I think Joanna went to Bette’s cabin univited hoping to reconnect with her, but it didn’t happen. Apparently she also gave up, recognising that Bette has found love and kissed her goodbye. That’s how I see it, at least 😅
I thought about it, but how Joanna gets the key?
We’ll see, maybe later author gives up clearing about this
I thought about the key too, but hadn’t Tina found the cabin open too and decided to just wait on the porch, the day she “lost” Minnie? Maybe Bette never locks up the cabin’s door ????
Maybe)
This is why I said that it is fun to find out what the readers think. Zhenya, the first thing that Bette asks Joanna when she wakes up is: “What are you doing here?” And Joanna replies: “I miss you. We haven’t been together in a while.” This is a rustic cabin in Bette’s property. I don’t think she worries about keys. As Atritonia pointed out, even Tina got in uninvited at some point.
Thank you for this first season, dbff! I enjoyed it a lot.
I love the parallelism between Minnie & Charlie and Tina & Bette and how you write as for a screenplay.
Can’t wait to read what will happen at the opening!
It was a slow burn alright! Quite the dream, the one Tina had ????
Thanks for the help, Atritonia. You are very perceptive. And I also like the parallelism that you mention, particularly in Tina’s conversations with Minnie. I think she has a lot going on in her subconscious. :)
Thank you for this first season!
I really enjoyed it alot
Thank you for the Scene Setting First Season!
Look forward to your next post, soon I hope!
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I am not with Zhenya and have faith in Bette.
Enjoyed first season thanks. PPS
SG
Thank you so much for the first season dbff!!!
I really enjoyed it!!!
Seems Bette should lock her cabin to make sure uninvited woman can’t enter it.
But i understood that Joanna wanted a Bette for breakfast, i would love that too ????
I am ready for the second season!!!
I haven’t commented on a story in awhile as I’ve been hiding as a silent reader, but I just had to hop on here and tell you how much I absolutely love this story! So much that I kept checking back frequently hoping for a new post and you never disappoint!
Can’t wait to see how it all progresses and I also like that it hasn’t felt rushed at all.
PPS!
Great Chapter!
It seems Charlie has Bette withdraws also.. just as Tina is having in her dreams. The painting of her I think will make her forget all about miss trouble making Joanna and follow her heart.
We all know she will indeed make it to the opening and be drop dead gorgeous and I think Bette is not quiet ready for the fireworks because I’m not convinced that Bette left her an invitation.
I know if Joanna can see a difference in Bette than Kit sure has and knows who has make that difference. And seeing the painting backed her theory up. Mmm… thank you loved it and can’t wait to see whats up next.
Just caught up. Enjoyed it a lot. Thanks