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The Real Deal Ch16 – Finale
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She kisses my lips again, this time is softly. I grant her immediate access when her tongue massages mine gently. I feel like falling, my knees are too weak to support me now. My arms around her neck are the only thing that is preventing me from falling.
Her hands found my breasts, and her cold fingers are brushing against my hardened nipples. I gasp at the contact.
One of her hands has slipped inside my pants. “You are wet.” She teases, smiling sexily.
“So you are…” I smile back.
She pulls my pants off and I am fully naked in front of her. She stares at my body with desire, her body is definitely warming up cuz I can feel the heat radiating from her.
“You like what you see?” I ask her, touching my nipples to tease her.
She nods dumbfounded.
“Good. Because it’s only fair if you take yours off too.” I whisper into her ear seductively.
“You’re such a tease.” She says, smiling.
I take her shirt off, unbutton her jeans and pull it down roughly.
There are two rings on Shane’s necklace. I recognise them right away, there are supposed to be our wedding rings!
“You kept them with you all this time?” I ask her.
She nods, giving me a shy smile. I hold them in my hand dearly.
“Why?” I don’t know why I ask.
“To keep me from making the same mistake twice; once is stupid, twice is unforgivable.” She looks so vulnerable all of a sudden.
I kiss her amorously, without any hesitation, my heart aches knowing that she is wearing them all these years. I want to be with her – only her.
“I made you two some soup, come out when you are done!” Mum knocks at the door.
We paused for a moment, scared that Mum may walk in. We giggle at our lucky escape when we are sure that she is staying out.
“I don’t know how to explain this if she comes in now.” I say jokingly.
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Whoaaaaaaaaaaaa!!!!!A M A Z I N G ! ! ! ! !Thank you so much for this!!!!!! =)
Nice job! Great story! Took my mind off my life for two whole days. Who would have thought I’d find another good story on this page. Luved every single minute of it. Gotta go. I need to check ur other storrys. Oh and u know… I’d lke to see Shay come back or something.
Heart-warming. It’s got everything anyone could ever deam of for Sharmen. I just wish we’d see this on TV but first we gotta have Carmen back. Well done catseye! I’ll expect greater things from you.
You are the best!!!!! Thanks alot for this chapter it was the greatest ever. I hope you find a little time to do the sequele =) LOL. The HOT scenes were soooooo intense. Thanks again. Hope to hear from you soon.
Great Job! Thanks for this story. Please DO continue to write more, ASAP!
*applauds* nicely done, hot scenes too ! Thank you for this !
clearly and easily the best ive read in a long long time * claps* this whole story was amazeing and mezmerising at the same time the whole time. You were and are amazeing. I hate to see it end but wow what an ending i lvoed this post it was long but not long enough i might add, and it was perfect. thank you for the Real Deal.
Applause!! The best fan fiction I’ve ever read. I hope you’re going to write a sequel, cause there are not enough Sharmen-stories =( …
what else can i say? i applaud you! i worship you! haha! the love scenes are perfect and amazingly hot! the storyline is by far, the greatest i have ever read about sharmen. thanks a lot for making The Real Deal and i sure hope, despite your uber busy schedule, that you’ll still write more stories for us to savor. you have a hell of a lot of fans catseye! and i’m looking forward to more of your stories! thanks again!
catseye!! You Roock!!! Thank you so muuuch for this amazing reunion and finale! I soo loved the very well writen sex scenes lol =) they sure brought me some good memories about Shane and Carmen togheter on tv. Keep on the great job you’re doing! Sharmen forever!!
Wow you did an amazing job with this. Somehow I missed the last update but now that I’m all caught up all I can think is WOW! I’m so glad Shane gave Carmen the diary,there really was no other way to make sure Carmen knew how she felt. Three days of marathon sex is pretty much how I would expect the reunion of these two to go…*hint hint IC, take notes on this fic for ideas for season 5* You did a totally kick ass job on this fic, it was a pleasure to read. Thank you!
Wow you did an amazing job with this. Somehow I missed the last update but now that I’m all caught up all I can think is WOW! I’m so glad Shane gave Carmen the diary,there really was no other way to make sure Carmen knew how she felt. Three days of marathon sex is pretty much how I would expect the reunion of these two to go…*hint hint IC, take notes on this fic for ideas for season 5* You did a totally kick ass job on this fic, it was a pleasure to read. Thank you!
just want to say thank you. you are really wonderful writer and loyal sharmener. thanks again. waiting for your another gift.
Loved it this is a great story wish i could write like it. x
Loved it this is a great story wish i could write like it. x
ONE OF MT FAV STORYS!!!! LOVED IT