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    The Real Deal Ch16 – Finale

    Story written on March 22, 2007 by catseye.
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    Story Shortlink: https://mail.assertive-maroon-jellyfish.104-250-143-187.cpanel.site/?p=65052
    Author Notes:

    Syrup – good. Sex – better. Carmen – the best. ‘If God tells me this is wrong, then I don’t want to be right.’; ‘If this is a dream, please don’t let me wake up, because being with her, I am complete.’


    Previously on The Real Deal

     

    Shane, “No, cuz you here with me, I am not afraid anymore.” 

     

    This is Shane’s diary! 

     

    My heart is racing fast – for you.

    My palms are sweating – for you.

    My heart knows something my mind cannot explain.

    I love you, in love with you – I think I have already said too many times or not enough.

     

     

    Carmen, “We need to get you inside before you get sick.” 

     

    Shane, “No, this is good… don’t stop.”  They kiss again in the rain.

     

    Carmen, “We can’t. Mum is watching.” …smiling happily at each other.

     

    Shane, “Let her watch!” She pleads and kisses her again.

    ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~


     

     

    Ch 16 – Finale

     

    To the world you may be just one person;

    But to one person you may be the world.

     

    Casa de Morales

     

    We finally made it back to mum’s house.  Mum is shaking her head again but gives us some towels to dry ourselves. 

     

    “Get the wet clothes off!   You two will get a cold.  Especially you, Chane.  Carmen, give Chane some dry clothes to put on.”  She orders us.

     

    I am glad that she didn’t throw Shane out.  This is a good first step, although it will take some time for her to get used to the idea of seeing her in this house again.

     

    I take Shane to my bedroom. Once I closed the door, Shane attacks me with kisses again, pushing me against the door, sending tingling sensations all over me.  She is working her way down, tracing my jaw line and start kissing my neck.

     

    I let out a moan. “Shane…we are supposed… to change… not make out…”  I say with difficulty, but managed to squeeze it out between giggles and moans.

     

    “mm… ok.”  She mutters and pulls my shirt over my head.  My bra came off in an instant… I don’t even notice how she managed it. She continues her kissing trail downwards.

     

    “Shane…” I moan, with lack of a better word in my head.

     

    “I am changing …”  She stops the kisses and gazes at me longingly. “your clothes…” she says huskily. 

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    2. Nice job! Great story! Took my mind off my life for two whole days. Who would have thought I’d find another good story on this page. Luved every single minute of it. Gotta go. I need to check ur other storrys. Oh and u know… I’d lke to see Shay come back or something.

    3. Heart-warming. It’s got everything anyone could ever deam of for Sharmen. I just wish we’d see this on TV but first we gotta have Carmen back. Well done catseye! I’ll expect greater things from you.

    4. You are the best!!!!! Thanks alot for this chapter it was the greatest ever. I hope you find a little time to do the sequele =) LOL. The HOT scenes were soooooo intense. Thanks again. Hope to hear from you soon.

    7. clearly and easily the best ive read in a long long time * claps* this whole story was amazeing and mezmerising at the same time the whole time. You were and are amazeing. I hate to see it end but wow what an ending i lvoed this post it was long but not long enough i might add, and it was perfect. thank you for the Real Deal.

    9. what else can i say? i applaud you! i worship you! haha! the love scenes are perfect and amazingly hot! the storyline is by far, the greatest i have ever read about sharmen. thanks a lot for making The Real Deal and i sure hope, despite your uber busy schedule, that you’ll still write more stories for us to savor. you have a hell of a lot of fans catseye! and i’m looking forward to more of your stories! thanks again!

    10. catseye!! You Roock!!! Thank you so muuuch for this amazing reunion and finale! I soo loved the very well writen sex scenes lol =) they sure brought me some good memories about Shane and Carmen togheter on tv. Keep on the great job you’re doing! Sharmen forever!!

    11. Wow you did an amazing job with this. Somehow I missed the last update but now that I’m all caught up all I can think is WOW! I’m so glad Shane gave Carmen the diary,there really was no other way to make sure Carmen knew how she felt. Three days of marathon sex is pretty much how I would expect the reunion of these two to go…*hint hint IC, take notes on this fic for ideas for season 5* You did a totally kick ass job on this fic, it was a pleasure to read. Thank you!

    12. Wow you did an amazing job with this. Somehow I missed the last update but now that I’m all caught up all I can think is WOW! I’m so glad Shane gave Carmen the diary,there really was no other way to make sure Carmen knew how she felt. Three days of marathon sex is pretty much how I would expect the reunion of these two to go…*hint hint IC, take notes on this fic for ideas for season 5* You did a totally kick ass job on this fic, it was a pleasure to read. Thank you!

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