Fan Fiction
This story has been set to a rating of NC-17. Age verification is required to proceed.
The Laws of Attraction: Part Twenty Two
Login to add story to favorites
(16 votes, average: 4.50 out of 5)You need to be a registered member to rate this post.
Loading ...
“Okay,” Alice said, sounding as dazed as she looked on hearing these
words and on feeling the depth of that desire focused on her. She moved
away slightly and said nervously, gesturing over her shoulder to the
duffle bags, “I just have to you know”
“Put it on, I know,” chuckled Dana, amused that somehow Alice had
become the one that was feeling anxious. Unwilling to let that go on
for too long, she tugged the blonde down to her by gripping the front
of her black tank top. Lifting herself up to give Alice a clinging kiss
which was slow and sweet, she murmured, “Hurry back.”
“Okay,” Alice said again to then roll off the bed with a thump. Cursing
under her breath while trying to ignore the sound of Dana’s girly
giggles. She quickly crawled over to the duffle bags and searched
through them almost frantically to find what she was looking for. With
a triumphant whoop, she located the ***** that was pretty much
an exact replica of the one at home. Both realistic looking in color,
shape, and at a fairly tame size of six inches. Something that would be
reduced even more when placed firmly in the harness which Alice was
busy searching for. Now the harness was entirely different, like the
sales girl said, it was sturdy but not made for skin on skin contact.
Meaning the best time to wear this harness would be wearing the black
leather pants Alice was currently sporting. Hastily untying her shoes
and kicking them off along with her socks, because for some reason it
felt wrong to have ***** with her shoes and socks on in this situation,
the blonde jumped to her feet and kept her back to Dana. For some
strange reason she was feeling really nervous about this and she just
didn’t want to watch Dana watching her putting on the *****. Once she
had the harness and the ***** firmly in place and was sure everything
was where it should be and it was covered in the right amount of needed
lube, she found herself imitating the tennis player and swallowing a
lump in her throat. “Okay,” she said once more. “You ready?”
“Yeah,” Dana’s reply sounded and her voice was thankfully missing the
teasing Alice expected, instead it was like her own. Anxious but filled
with so much want and desire and overwhelming trust. And when Alice
turned around to face the athlete, that’s what she saw. Moving towards
her and sinking down onto the bed, crawling hands and feet towards Dana
and hovering over her, she smiled softly and sighed at the feel of the
brunette tangling her fingers in her hair and meeting their lips for a
kiss, murmuring into her, “I love you.”
Comments
Leave a Reply
You must be logged in to post a comment.
ahh – formatting fun!
Congrats on the award, well deserved!
Ok – a few things cause this is possibly your best chapter –
Gabby fucking Deveaux – loved it! especially when Shane spit it out with the same disdain!
Alice in leather on riding a motorcycle – need I say more? Women on a bike – always hot, alice in leather on a bike, damn! very nice visual….
Your shane is just awesome!
“White chocolate is oppressed,” lmao.
oh – and the whole big gesture vs paying attention and doing something that fit Alice, great detail – and it is so great when you realize someone truly hears what you say.
ok – i could go on and on – cause this really was a great chapter – but I’ll leave it with nice switch with sex scene. Well done on the scene in general, but the switch, nice. All around, well done!
Dude, this was such a funny chapter. You balanced it very well!!!! And the sex scenes are just so perfectly apt for these two. ( I prbably have to watch some of these lez movies and chuck in my opinion of them…lol)
Great as always. Congratulations for the award, even I don’t understand the category (?), anyway you deserve it, as much as Sulkygeek deserve other (ok I don’t mind in wich one).
Now I’m officially confused, I always tought that the worst lez movie was Bar Girls (even scribegrrrl wrote something once), and I already watched it and it’s really bad. Now I’m curious and I have to get Claire of the Moon to see wich is worst, lol. Thanks.
Wonderful as usual. The visuals in this chapter were very clear and intriguing. The shouter in the next room will be greatly dissapointed with the amount of stamina that Dana and Alice have… very amusing. I had that last scene play out in my head very clearly complete with sexy noises and funny shouting.
Don’t be sad, maybe someday these movies become classics, you know like every bad movie that really deserve that title in this world, lol. I have to confess I have a weakness for those, haha, I’m a fan of series B movies (I don’t know how you call them in english, so sorry) and Ed Wood works, even I have his novels :P . Ok, better I left before I confess more odd things. Thanks for share your talent.
Claire of the Moon is only the worst lesbian movie in my opinion and the opinion of most of my friends. That subject is highly up for debate. Bar Girls is just as bad though. God… why are so many lesbian movies crappy? It makes me sad inside. lol.