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The Laws of Attraction: Part Twenty Two
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“It feels great,” interrupted Dana, she thrust her hips up and into
Alice, groaning as the ***** slid further inside of her at the motion.
She pried her eyes open with some effort and reiterated in strong
tones, “You feel great. Now please, Al,” she said in devastatingly
seductive tones. “Would you ***** me already?”
“Don’t have to tell me five times,” drawled Alice playfully, noting the
number of times the tennis player had stated that particular request in
the evening. Smiling into Dana and meeting her lips for another kiss,
she brought one hand up to cup the side of her face and the other down
to rest firm against her hip. Then she began a slow rhythm of thrusts,
arching up and into the brunette, pushing further inside only to pull
out almost to the tip and thrust in again. Only to increase the pace
when she felt Dana moan and buck into her, obviously wanting more. That
was when the thrusts became hard and fierce and her other hand moved up
and she entwined her fingers with the athlete’s, pressing them up and
into the bed. Parting from their hot kisses and muttering through
gasping breaths, “Are you close? How does it feel, baby?”
“Really close,” Dana said raggedly, groaning as Alice thrust
particularly deep and arching into the writer while squeezing her hands
tightly. “I told you it feels great.” She forced her eyes open and
chuckled, freeing a hand to tangle in messy blonde locks and bring
Alice to her for a kiss. “Stop asking me that.”
“Sorry,” said Alice wryly, moaning just seconds later when the tennis
player bucked up into her and created a delightful grind of friction.
“God, Dana,” she groaned and thrust forward, arching hard and fast into
the other woman.
The ***** came suddenly and it took them both by surprise, not only
Dana but Alice who soon followed. And when it was over, they lay
tangled together, a jumble of arms and legs, with Alice still wearing
the strap on and it still inside of Dana, they were almost tired enough
to just fall asleep. But that was when a series of loud bangs sounded
against the wall, causing cheap plaster to fall down on
their heads.
“KEEP IT *****’ DOWN, WILL YA?! SOME PEOPLE CAN’T ***** WHILE HEARIN’ YOU *****! HAVE SOME *****’ RESPECT!”
For a few seconds they remained silent then they burst into hysterical
laughter which only increased when Dana confessed that only made her
want to have ***** even louder next time. Something that did occur, once
they managed to get the strap on and leather pants off Alice.
Much to the irritation of their hotel neighbors.
To be continued…
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ahh – formatting fun!
Congrats on the award, well deserved!
Ok – a few things cause this is possibly your best chapter –
Gabby fucking Deveaux – loved it! especially when Shane spit it out with the same disdain!
Alice in leather on riding a motorcycle – need I say more? Women on a bike – always hot, alice in leather on a bike, damn! very nice visual….
Your shane is just awesome!
“White chocolate is oppressed,” lmao.
oh – and the whole big gesture vs paying attention and doing something that fit Alice, great detail – and it is so great when you realize someone truly hears what you say.
ok – i could go on and on – cause this really was a great chapter – but I’ll leave it with nice switch with sex scene. Well done on the scene in general, but the switch, nice. All around, well done!
Dude, this was such a funny chapter. You balanced it very well!!!! And the sex scenes are just so perfectly apt for these two. ( I prbably have to watch some of these lez movies and chuck in my opinion of them…lol)
Great as always. Congratulations for the award, even I don’t understand the category (?), anyway you deserve it, as much as Sulkygeek deserve other (ok I don’t mind in wich one).
Now I’m officially confused, I always tought that the worst lez movie was Bar Girls (even scribegrrrl wrote something once), and I already watched it and it’s really bad. Now I’m curious and I have to get Claire of the Moon to see wich is worst, lol. Thanks.
Wonderful as usual. The visuals in this chapter were very clear and intriguing. The shouter in the next room will be greatly dissapointed with the amount of stamina that Dana and Alice have… very amusing. I had that last scene play out in my head very clearly complete with sexy noises and funny shouting.
Don’t be sad, maybe someday these movies become classics, you know like every bad movie that really deserve that title in this world, lol. I have to confess I have a weakness for those, haha, I’m a fan of series B movies (I don’t know how you call them in english, so sorry) and Ed Wood works, even I have his novels :P . Ok, better I left before I confess more odd things. Thanks for share your talent.
Claire of the Moon is only the worst lesbian movie in my opinion and the opinion of most of my friends. That subject is highly up for debate. Bar Girls is just as bad though. God… why are so many lesbian movies crappy? It makes me sad inside. lol.