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The Laws of Attraction: Part Twenty Two
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“I love you too, baby,” Alice said, her voice thick with emotion. “I love you so much.”
She then deepened the kiss, slipping her tongue into Dana’s mouth,
sucking on it long and hard and continuous, tasting everything the
brunette had and wanting more. Her hands sliding over tanned skin in a
knowing exploration, touching and feeling and stroking until Dana’s
body was humming with desire and she was arching eagerly into every
caress whether it be teasing or firm and knowing, wanting all that
Alice was giving to her but needing more. Needing what they had talked
about for all these months, what she had agreed to just moments ago.
“***** me,” Dana rasped, pulling her lips away from the blonde’s, her
blue eyes dark and pleading. “I want you to ***** me.” Reaching down
more out of instinct than any type of real knowledge since Dana had
never done anything more than kiss men and not very well at that, she
grabbed the ***** and led it towards her *****. Though she found
herself unable to make that first move to slip it inside, somehow she
needed Alice to do that for her. Sliding her hands forward to cup the
sides of the writer’s neck, she smoothly rose up to murmur against her
lips in a kiss, “Please, Al. I want that.”
“Dana,” said Alice almost brokenly, crushing her lips against the
athlete’s and kissing her powerfully. One hand buried in wavy brown
locks to hold her steady while the other reached down to carefully
guide the ***** into Dana, kissing her harder and deeper when she
finally did slide in, absorbing the moan of pleasure the other woman
released and crying from relief on feeling it. Wanting so badly for
Dana to enjoy this, to love this, to make her feel everything she hoped
for with this experience. When they finally parted, she rested their
foreheads together and looked into Dana’s eyes and said with a slight
pant, “Are you okay?”
“I didn’t know it would feel like this,” muttered Dana through a moan,
closing and opening her eyes, fingers still tangled in Alice’s messy
blonde hair. She laughed a little at herself and said in self
deprecating tones, “But why would I know, right?”
“Right,” Alice chuckled though her face was lined with concern. She
carefully pushed a lock of hair from Dana’s eyes and said, “Does it
feel good? Because if it doesn’t we–”
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ahh – formatting fun!
Congrats on the award, well deserved!
Ok – a few things cause this is possibly your best chapter –
Gabby fucking Deveaux – loved it! especially when Shane spit it out with the same disdain!
Alice in leather on riding a motorcycle – need I say more? Women on a bike – always hot, alice in leather on a bike, damn! very nice visual….
Your shane is just awesome!
“White chocolate is oppressed,” lmao.
oh – and the whole big gesture vs paying attention and doing something that fit Alice, great detail – and it is so great when you realize someone truly hears what you say.
ok – i could go on and on – cause this really was a great chapter – but I’ll leave it with nice switch with sex scene. Well done on the scene in general, but the switch, nice. All around, well done!
Dude, this was such a funny chapter. You balanced it very well!!!! And the sex scenes are just so perfectly apt for these two. ( I prbably have to watch some of these lez movies and chuck in my opinion of them…lol)
Great as always. Congratulations for the award, even I don’t understand the category (?), anyway you deserve it, as much as Sulkygeek deserve other (ok I don’t mind in wich one).
Now I’m officially confused, I always tought that the worst lez movie was Bar Girls (even scribegrrrl wrote something once), and I already watched it and it’s really bad. Now I’m curious and I have to get Claire of the Moon to see wich is worst, lol. Thanks.
Wonderful as usual. The visuals in this chapter were very clear and intriguing. The shouter in the next room will be greatly dissapointed with the amount of stamina that Dana and Alice have… very amusing. I had that last scene play out in my head very clearly complete with sexy noises and funny shouting.
Don’t be sad, maybe someday these movies become classics, you know like every bad movie that really deserve that title in this world, lol. I have to confess I have a weakness for those, haha, I’m a fan of series B movies (I don’t know how you call them in english, so sorry) and Ed Wood works, even I have his novels :P . Ok, better I left before I confess more odd things. Thanks for share your talent.
Claire of the Moon is only the worst lesbian movie in my opinion and the opinion of most of my friends. That subject is highly up for debate. Bar Girls is just as bad though. God… why are so many lesbian movies crappy? It makes me sad inside. lol.