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The Laws of Attraction: Part Twenty Two
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“Let me take care of you,” said Alice in a throaty drawl, forming a slow and seductive smile before she slid down Dana’s body.
Releasing a shuddering breath and feeling painfully aroused by both
Alice’s words and her expression, Dana pressed her head into the pillow
Alice had bought at some weird tourist spot and squeezed her eyes shut.
It could have been seconds, it could have been hours, but with careful
and sensual care, Alice got the white leather pants off of Dana.
Soft hands trailed up her legs and Alice murmured against the skin as
she moved upwards, “No baby powder, just like I thought.” She looked up
at Dana and quirked her lips up in a tiny grin. “Bad Dana,” Alice said,
her voice low and husky, her brown eyes dark with desire.
“No biscuit?” asked Dana hoarsely.
Forming a smile and laughing into Dana’s skin, Alice moved up to murmur
against her lips, “Not this time, baby. You’re getting something a lot
better than a biscuit. I promise.”
“Yay me,” Dana breathed, her body trembling.
“Yay both of us,” Alice replied before seizing the brunette’s lips in a
deep kiss. The type that Dana had dreamed of as a teenager and the type
she continued to dream of once she realized her feelings for the
writer. It was a kiss endless in the passion it contained, fierce and
gentle and so ***** detailed that it seemed to Dana it would never
stop. That the kiss would go on and on forever which was what she
wanted honestly. For their love to never have a stop and when Alice
kissed her like this that’s what she honestly thought. But the kiss did
end, as it always did and Alice moved down her body, hands trailing
down to easily remove her bra, the only remaining piece of clothing as
her panties had been removed with the leather pants. Suddenly the
blonde returned though, she straddled Dana’s waist and shirked off her
leather jacket, tossing it in the same corner where the discarded
sheets rested. The thump causing the cheap hula dancing lamp to fall on
the floor and the athlete’s head to turn in that direction. Only to
have her face held seconds later by Alice’s hands and turned so she was
now looking up at her. The writer’s blonde hair was wild and
disheveled, making her look impossibly ***** along with the slow smile
curving on her features. “Dana,” she purred, leaning down to put their
faces a breath apart. “If it’s okay I want to try out that something
new we talked about.”
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ahh – formatting fun!
Congrats on the award, well deserved!
Ok – a few things cause this is possibly your best chapter –
Gabby fucking Deveaux – loved it! especially when Shane spit it out with the same disdain!
Alice in leather on riding a motorcycle – need I say more? Women on a bike – always hot, alice in leather on a bike, damn! very nice visual….
Your shane is just awesome!
“White chocolate is oppressed,” lmao.
oh – and the whole big gesture vs paying attention and doing something that fit Alice, great detail – and it is so great when you realize someone truly hears what you say.
ok – i could go on and on – cause this really was a great chapter – but I’ll leave it with nice switch with sex scene. Well done on the scene in general, but the switch, nice. All around, well done!
Dude, this was such a funny chapter. You balanced it very well!!!! And the sex scenes are just so perfectly apt for these two. ( I prbably have to watch some of these lez movies and chuck in my opinion of them…lol)
Great as always. Congratulations for the award, even I don’t understand the category (?), anyway you deserve it, as much as Sulkygeek deserve other (ok I don’t mind in wich one).
Now I’m officially confused, I always tought that the worst lez movie was Bar Girls (even scribegrrrl wrote something once), and I already watched it and it’s really bad. Now I’m curious and I have to get Claire of the Moon to see wich is worst, lol. Thanks.
Wonderful as usual. The visuals in this chapter were very clear and intriguing. The shouter in the next room will be greatly dissapointed with the amount of stamina that Dana and Alice have… very amusing. I had that last scene play out in my head very clearly complete with sexy noises and funny shouting.
Don’t be sad, maybe someday these movies become classics, you know like every bad movie that really deserve that title in this world, lol. I have to confess I have a weakness for those, haha, I’m a fan of series B movies (I don’t know how you call them in english, so sorry) and Ed Wood works, even I have his novels :P . Ok, better I left before I confess more odd things. Thanks for share your talent.
Claire of the Moon is only the worst lesbian movie in my opinion and the opinion of most of my friends. That subject is highly up for debate. Bar Girls is just as bad though. God… why are so many lesbian movies crappy? It makes me sad inside. lol.