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The Laws of Attraction: Part Twenty Two
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“Aye aye,” Dana said, standing perfectly upright and saluting Alice.
“That’s teasing,” muttered Alice to herself, taking the nasty hotel
sheets off and flinging them in the corner of the room. They landed
with an audible thump, causing a nearby lamp that featured a Hawaiian
girl hula dancing on it to tip back and forth as if it would fall off
the rickety table on which it sat. Alice watched this as it happened
and breathed a sigh of relief when it safely rocked to a stop. “Thank
god,” said Alice dryly, pulling the sheets they brought out of the
duffle bag and putting them on the mattress. “I’d hate to have to pay
the whole four dollars to replace that example of lighting monstrosity.”
It was when Alice finished putting the sheets on the mattress that she
heard a rather panicked hiss of a whisper sound in the air, “Al!”
Frowning a bit, Alice turned around to see Dana clad in her white bra
and matching white leather pants crouched over in a position that was
reminiscent of certain toilet activities with a pained look on her face
to match. “Dana?” asked Alice, perplexed. “What are you doing?”
“I can’t get my pants off!” Dana hissed, scowling.
“Why are you whispering?” asked Alice, still utterly perplexed. Walking
over to Dana, who was now hopping around, trying her best to wriggle
her way out of the pants tight fitting clutches.
“Just–” Dana did another hissing whisper but stopped on realizing she
was indeed whispering. She then continued in a normal voice, sounding
thoroughly frustrated, “Just help me!”
“You didn’t put on the baby powder like I said, did you?” said Alice
knowingly, chuckling as Dana kept hopping and futilely tugging at her
leather pants.
“I thought you were being perverted,” whined Dana, she hopped about
some more and looked at Alice a little desperately. “Please help me get
out of this evil fashion mistake?”
Shaking her head in bemusement, Alice reached out to hold Dana’s
fumbling hands busy trying to pry and wriggle her way out of the pants.
Dana looked up at her, eyes wide and questioning and Alice smiled
tenderly. Pulling Dana into a standing position, she led her over to
the bed and gently pushed her down onto it. The athlete opened her
mouth to speak, gaze still filled with confusion and Alice pressed an
index finger against her lips to silence her.
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ahh – formatting fun!
Congrats on the award, well deserved!
Ok – a few things cause this is possibly your best chapter –
Gabby fucking Deveaux – loved it! especially when Shane spit it out with the same disdain!
Alice in leather on riding a motorcycle – need I say more? Women on a bike – always hot, alice in leather on a bike, damn! very nice visual….
Your shane is just awesome!
“White chocolate is oppressed,” lmao.
oh – and the whole big gesture vs paying attention and doing something that fit Alice, great detail – and it is so great when you realize someone truly hears what you say.
ok – i could go on and on – cause this really was a great chapter – but I’ll leave it with nice switch with sex scene. Well done on the scene in general, but the switch, nice. All around, well done!
Dude, this was such a funny chapter. You balanced it very well!!!! And the sex scenes are just so perfectly apt for these two. ( I prbably have to watch some of these lez movies and chuck in my opinion of them…lol)
Great as always. Congratulations for the award, even I don’t understand the category (?), anyway you deserve it, as much as Sulkygeek deserve other (ok I don’t mind in wich one).
Now I’m officially confused, I always tought that the worst lez movie was Bar Girls (even scribegrrrl wrote something once), and I already watched it and it’s really bad. Now I’m curious and I have to get Claire of the Moon to see wich is worst, lol. Thanks.
Wonderful as usual. The visuals in this chapter were very clear and intriguing. The shouter in the next room will be greatly dissapointed with the amount of stamina that Dana and Alice have… very amusing. I had that last scene play out in my head very clearly complete with sexy noises and funny shouting.
Don’t be sad, maybe someday these movies become classics, you know like every bad movie that really deserve that title in this world, lol. I have to confess I have a weakness for those, haha, I’m a fan of series B movies (I don’t know how you call them in english, so sorry) and Ed Wood works, even I have his novels :P . Ok, better I left before I confess more odd things. Thanks for share your talent.
Claire of the Moon is only the worst lesbian movie in my opinion and the opinion of most of my friends. That subject is highly up for debate. Bar Girls is just as bad though. God… why are so many lesbian movies crappy? It makes me sad inside. lol.