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The Laws of Attraction: Part Twenty Two
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They fell into the room, Dana hastily tossing the key onto a
precariously balanced and sadly three legged table then dropping their
duffle bags to the floor. Forgetting her own pet peeves about such
behavior thanks to the heat of Alice’s kisses, intoxicating and fierce
and god, everything Dana had ever thought she wanted. These kisses were
the ones that she dreamed about as a confused fifteen year old before
she knew for sure what her brief romance with Stephanie told her. That
she loved women. She loved tasting them, she loved touching them, she
loved smelling them, she loved everything about them. Dana was really
that impossibly *****. But somewhere along the way, okay, six years one
month and nineteen days along the way her dreams of this kiss changed
into dreams of this kiss with Alice.
Now here she was, having that kiss with the woman she loved for what
seemed like forever and even though the room they rented smelled
disturbingly similar to the Morehouse Cream Style Horseradish her
father liked to eat, Dana couldn’t have been happier. Rising up on her
tip toes and pressing eagerly into Alice, she cupped the blonde’s face
in her hands, grinning as she propelled them towards the bed.
That’s when Alice broke away from the kiss with a gasp, chuckling when
Dana fell forward and into her in an attempt to maintain contact
between them. “The sheets,” she managed to say before the tennis player
met their lips for another kiss, causing her to moan low and deep, in
the way Dana so loved. When she somehow managed to find the strength to
pull away yet again, she said breathlessly, “We need to change the
sheets. I love you, and me, way too much to have ***** on the nasty
sheets that Jimmy Joe has undoubtedly provided us with. No offense to
Jimmy Joe, who three visible teeth or not, seems like a really stand up
guy.”
Groaning at this and starting to strangely resent Alice’s newfound
relationship with her mother and the personality traits she was picking
up from it, Dana started to protest this painful pause in their romance
when she saw the sheets on the bed. Making an automatic
expression of disgust on seeing them, Dana sighed heavily.
“Fine,” Dana muttered, backing away from Alice. “Change the sheets.”
Chuckling at Dana’s reaction and finding the pouting to be entirely
endearing, Alice reached out to hook her fingers into the minute space
between Dana’s stomach and her white leather pants then tugged the
brunette forward. The athlete moved towards her easily, tilting her
body into Alice in an instinctive press though she was clearly
irritated by the blonde’s amusement. Her jaw clenched as she
deliberately stared off to the other side of the room.
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ahh – formatting fun!
Congrats on the award, well deserved!
Ok – a few things cause this is possibly your best chapter –
Gabby fucking Deveaux – loved it! especially when Shane spit it out with the same disdain!
Alice in leather on riding a motorcycle – need I say more? Women on a bike – always hot, alice in leather on a bike, damn! very nice visual….
Your shane is just awesome!
“White chocolate is oppressed,” lmao.
oh – and the whole big gesture vs paying attention and doing something that fit Alice, great detail – and it is so great when you realize someone truly hears what you say.
ok – i could go on and on – cause this really was a great chapter – but I’ll leave it with nice switch with sex scene. Well done on the scene in general, but the switch, nice. All around, well done!
Dude, this was such a funny chapter. You balanced it very well!!!! And the sex scenes are just so perfectly apt for these two. ( I prbably have to watch some of these lez movies and chuck in my opinion of them…lol)
Great as always. Congratulations for the award, even I don’t understand the category (?), anyway you deserve it, as much as Sulkygeek deserve other (ok I don’t mind in wich one).
Now I’m officially confused, I always tought that the worst lez movie was Bar Girls (even scribegrrrl wrote something once), and I already watched it and it’s really bad. Now I’m curious and I have to get Claire of the Moon to see wich is worst, lol. Thanks.
Wonderful as usual. The visuals in this chapter were very clear and intriguing. The shouter in the next room will be greatly dissapointed with the amount of stamina that Dana and Alice have… very amusing. I had that last scene play out in my head very clearly complete with sexy noises and funny shouting.
Don’t be sad, maybe someday these movies become classics, you know like every bad movie that really deserve that title in this world, lol. I have to confess I have a weakness for those, haha, I’m a fan of series B movies (I don’t know how you call them in english, so sorry) and Ed Wood works, even I have his novels :P . Ok, better I left before I confess more odd things. Thanks for share your talent.
Claire of the Moon is only the worst lesbian movie in my opinion and the opinion of most of my friends. That subject is highly up for debate. Bar Girls is just as bad though. God… why are so many lesbian movies crappy? It makes me sad inside. lol.