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    The Burden of Control – Chapter 7

    Story written on July 19, 2005 by tibette99.
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    Story Shortlink: https://mail.assertive-maroon-jellyfish.104-250-143-187.cpanel.site/?p=55513
    Author Notes:

    Bette makes a move, Kit makes a discovery, and we learn the truth.

     

    Bette: No. Shes…its ok.

     

    Tina: (concerned ) I
    didnt know that shed be interested in a position on the board, Bette. I
    swear.

     

    Bette: Its ok, Tina. I can handle her.

     

    Tina: Youd tell me if
    there was a problem, wouldnt you?

     

    Bette: Iuhits not that big a deal.

     

    Tina: The situation is
    complicated enough as it is. I wouldnt want her to put anymore pressure on you
    because of me.

     

    Bette: Dont worry Tina. Its nothing that I cant handle.
    Its just

     

    Tina: Its just
    what? Are you saying that she IS making things difficult?

     

    Bette: NoIlisten, forget it.  Things are fineits just a really busy time.
    You know how it is.

     

    Tina: Yeah. IllIll
    talk to her. Ill try to explain things.

     

    Bette: Tinaplease dont…I can manage.  Really its not a problem.

     

    Tina: Are you sure?

     

    Bette: Positive.

     

    Tina: Ok.

     

    Theres another pause in conversationhowever, it is not as
    uncomfortable as the one before.

     

    Tina: Bette, theres
    something that I need to tell you.

     

    Bette: Okay. You can tell me anything.

     

    Tina: Bette, ImIthat
    is to say um, Im prIshitI cant tell you over the phone.

     

    Bette: Oh. We coulduhwe could meet up. If you want?

     

    Tina: Yeah?. How about
    Thursday. I get off at     4:15. We could
    grab a bite to eat at The Planet. (pauses) *****, youll probably be busy. We
    could wait until the weekend

     

    Bette: (quickly)No. No, Thursdays fine. Ill just take my
    lunch a little late, thats all. Its not a big deal.

     

    Tina: Okay. (pauses)
    Look I should let you get back to work. You must be busy.

     

    Bette smiled. Work?  What work?

     

    Bette: Yeah. There just arent enough hours in a day to get
    through all this.

     

    Tina: Im glad you
    called, Bette.

     

    Bette: Me too Tina.

     

    Tina (mischievously) Even
    if you did hang up on me.

     

    Bette: Hang upnoI didnt. There must have been a a problem
    with the phone lines. I

     

    Tina: Youre a bad
    liar. But its ok.

     

    Bette: (sighs) I just didnt know what to say.

     

    Tina: I dont know
    Bette. It looks like you did. (pauses) Ill see you at The PlanetThursday?

     

    Bette: Right. Four-thirty.

     

    Tina: Bye, Bette.

     

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    1. Nice chapter. I guess we’ll just wait and see where you take us. I guess there could have been a mixup at the lab, right? It really does happen. Although, it is usually the NURSES who mix up the samples. I will run from the tomatoes now…..

    2. Ok with the way Bette and Tina’s conversation was going in the beginning I think I would drink too….LOL….Now Bette can go to this doctor and get more tests that will clear up this mistake….Post soon!

    3. Christy,
      Man, do I ever resent that statement! Nurses do not mix up samples….it is usually a lab screw up. Now that is out of the way…I am hoping that the doctor switched the sample with another patient. (Christy, now we are both off the hook.) Great chapter…Tina is pregnant and Bette might have cancer…great drama going on here.

    4. Cliff hangers I hate them post soon Tina is hurting bette to by not taking some of the responsiblity for some of the problems in their relationship. Tina needs to examine herself a little and not just place the blame on bette

    6. OK first off if you kill anyone off I will be ok with it!!! Yeah it really shocking and upseting but this is fan fic, so do what you want with YOUR story. The begining of B/T phone convo had me lmao, it was great. So cancer?? what type??
      OH and I love drama so bring it on!!!
      awesome update, can’t wait for the downhill ride. it’s the best part of the rollercoaster ride. lol

    7. Good chapter Tibette, and it was 5 pages long. Bette said that she “SHE MIGHT HAVE CANCER” I hope everything turn out fine for her. I hope Bette let Kit be there for her. And I hope Tina tell Bette she love her before she find out about the cancer.

    8. Great chapter…You got to have some DRAMA, but PLEASE at leaset let her go in to remission atleast.So they could live happily ever after….please post real soon..THANKS…..

    9. oh no please no more cancer for that poor woman…i just have one question is there any chance for B and T be happy again? please give me hope to believe..great chapter sad but great post soon thanks

    10. I’m glad they talked. All of them.
      Bette needs to come out of her haze and address her health. Perhaps the baby will motivate her. Is yours a story where she knows about the baby already and is just waiting for Tina to reveal it to her?
      Thanks for posting! And I like that you have extra pages!

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