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London to LA ch13
Alice – I just know, well I think I know
Lucy – well in my experience, and I have a lot , not that im boasting or anything. Don’t assume Al, listen to the woman, just because Kate was at her house this morning it doesn’t mean she fucked her brains out last night
Alice – well it sure looks like it to me, anyway you didn’t see them the other night, all touchy feely…. And… giggly..smiley crap
Lucy – what both of them?
Alice – well more Kate than Dana but. . .
Lucy – Jesus Al are you sure your not jumping to conclusions, maybe a touch of the green eyed monster. I mean you didn’t expect Dana to behave like a nun for the past five years did you?, come on you haven’t exactly put it about but you aint no nun either Alice, I should know!
Alice – I know. . . . its just . . . oh I don’t know
Lucy – Alice, talk to her tonight. You want to know what I think?
Alice – no not really
Lucy – well tough shit, cos I’m gonna tell ya. I think she’s totally in love with you, you can tell by the way she looks at you, and judging by the looks she was giving me, she thinks you and me are doing the ole horizontal tango
Alice – nah Dana jealous I don’t think so
Lucy – oh yeah she was giving me the evil eye from the moment we walked into that place yesterday.
Alice – really?
Lucy – yep, so Al what are you going to do?
Alice – talk to her, because I get the feeling that if I don’t, your gonna make my life miserable.
Lucy – ah you know me so well, and hey if Dana is fucking that Kate bird, well me and you could you know – she wriggles her eyebrows at Alice smiling
Alice – laughs at her friend – been there done that, besides you aint all that
Lucy – laughs – is that so, you better start running Pieszecki cos I’m gonna get you.
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(30 votes, average: 3.73 out of 5)
I really missed your story! I’m glad all the misunderstandings are dealt with. :D Dana really has do A LOT when it comes to Alice trusting her again. It will take a while…probably a very long while. But if Dana’s stick around and stays persistent, shlice’s heart again. (She already won Jake over. ;))
damn..poor alice. thats a lot to take in. i hope she finds her way back to dana, and it all works out. great post, please update soon!
Well hope Alice will give Dana a chance. Ok post soon please, thanks!
loved it~ please post more soon
Hey i’ve just found this story and its brilliant! Please post more! :)
So glad you’re back with this story. I love this side of them. Hope Alice makes Dana fight for her and Jake.
I’m happy Dana finally told Alice how she was feeling. But I’m especially happy that Alice’s reaction was realistic. I’m glad she didn’t immediately fall into Dana’s arms again.
Great post and it’s nice to see that you’re back! I love this story and I find it very realistic. I just hope that Danish get together sooner rather than later, but rebuilding that trust will prolly take a while. Anyways, I can’t wait to find out what happens next, so please post soon:)
im so glad you’ve returned. i’ve loved this story from the beginning. i love the whole lucy aspect. she reminds me of debra messings cousin in the wedding date.
Theyve got to get back together, its ment to be. Great chapter, please post again soon. Love this story.
I read it and later I realize that I didn’t comment, how foolish of me. I think this was a great chapter Alice is right not to trust so soon that was an extreme break up for the poor girl and I can see where she’s coming from. I do want to see them together so I hope that’s in the cards. I also loved the donkey too. great job