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    Just The Girl – Chapter Thirty Five (a HYD-inspired fic)

     

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    Sea World. San Diego, CA.

     

    “Wow..” Tina’s eyes danced around as they darted from one sight to another. She was having a hard time trying to absorb everything all at once. She held on tight to Bette’s limp hand as her girlfriend warily eyed their surroundings.

     

    “Shit..” Bette cursed as they stood just past the entrance of the theme park and observed the throngs of people milling about. “Ow!” She cried out in pain as two kids zoomed in between her and Tina and stepped on her foot. Despite it being a weekday, it seemed like every kid in California was inside the park. “Don’t they have school?” Bette grumbled as she massaged her throbbing foot through her expensive DKNY sneakers. Tina merely shrugged in response, she was so in awe of her surroundings.. this being her first time inside Sea World.

     

    “There’s always a million of kids in here, even during school days.” Jenny answered as she read the park map and began leading the way towards the nearest attraction.

     

    “Yeah.” Max nodded his head in agreement. “Haven’t you been here before?” He asked Bette, the brunette shook her head in response as she continued to look around and wrinkle her nose in distaste. “I’m surprised.” Max followed up. “Is Sea World too low class for your high tastes, your royal AIRness?” He provoked with a sly smile.

     

    “No..” Bette smiled tightly. “But you certainly are.” She muttered under her breath.

     

    Tina cleared her throat and met Jenny’s eyes nervously. “Okay!” The best friends exclaimed at the same time, trying to break the tension that was beginning to brew between their two dates.

     

    “Where to Jen?” Tina asked in a high pitched voice as she squeezed her girlfriend’s hand in order to stop the girl from killing Max with her eyes.

     

    “To the Journey to Atlantis ride..” Jenny answered quickly as she pulled Max a little further away from Bette. She didn’t know what was up with her girlfriend, but he had been saying testy things to Bette even when they were in line to get tickets outside. If Max had been studying in Redwind, he would know that what he was doing was nothing short of suicide.

    Comments

    1. Strike one up for Bette. She is standing up to her father and showing Tina the depth of her feelings at the same time. After growing up with unlimited riches, I think it would be extraordinarily difficult to be left penniless. I hope Bette returns after reading Tina’s letter. Great story!

    2. I have been gone all day & am just know getting achance to catch up on my Fav. Fic. This was another awesome update…makes me want to go to Sea World minus the breaking up part. I hope they work things out-w/ a little help from Alice & Shane. I have just 1 request…please no more Max.

    3. First of all LMAO at Daddy Kennard being heartbroken about getting a promotion. Then what the hell is Tina thinking throwing things out there without explaining first…we all know Bette reacts at the first word and doesn’t listen. However, Bette better start listening if she doesn’t want to become just like Melvin…alone and bitter.

    4. first?????? youpiiiiiiiiiiiken is so funny? How did he work out promotion = fired?PMSLNow it s time for he F4 to show their support to their leader, help Bette fae and beat her father on that challenge. Great chapter, very funny with Tina’s dad but sad that Tina and Bette fought. They need each other right now to be strong against Melvin.PPS

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