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Just The Girl: Chapter Forty Five (a HYD-inspired fic)
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James smiled, leaned forward and whispered into Shane’s ear. “I appreciate your thoughtfulness but I would have to decline.” He said apologetically. “Yes, I’m having a hard time but seeing what you and Miss Alice are wearing, I’m beginning to appreciate just how lucky I am.” He admitted with a sly, teasing grin. Shane pouted and walked away dejectedly.
“Hey J!” Alice stalked over to James next. “You know I’ve been meaning to ask,” She tugged at his tight clothes and looked pointedly at the pronounced bulge in his pants. “How’s the circulation down there?” She laughed and walked away, leaving James blushing and unconsciously covering his crotch.
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11:45 AM
A few hours and a couple of spilled paint later, Shane and Alice – donned with their protective masks – stood in the middle of the living room and admired their work. Despite the bickering and ribbing that went on between them all morning and during their early lunch, the two surprised themselves when they finished applying the primary coat an hour ahead of schedule. As the sounds of muffled conversations and the cling and clatter of tools echoed around the apartment, they stood in silence, literally watching and waiting for the white paint to dry. In an hour or two, they would begin applying the finishing coat and paint the walls powder blue as their leader had instructed. Bette, their designated slave driver, had delegated specific jobs for everyone: she and Tina were working on the walls in her bedroom, James and Sonja were tag-teaming inside the tiny bathroom to install the water heater and play plumber with the pipes, and Alice and Shane were trusted to do all the painting in the living room and the adjacent dining area. James volunteered to paint the kitchen some other time, thinking it was a bad idea to let the two girls use such highly flammable materials near the oven and stove. It would be a shame to burn the apartment down after all their hard work.
But so far so good; everyone was doing a pretty good job of fulfilling their tasks. Alice, in particular, was feeling mighty pleased with herself. Her first house painting experience was not the disaster that everyone thought it would be. Too bad Sam wasn’t here to witness it all, Alice would have wanted nothing more than to gloat in front of their number one skeptic. Unfortunately, the lazy one claimed that she was going to rest this one out because of a swollen cheek; Alice had pressed for more info but Sam refused to elaborate. Whatever, Alice sighed, she would grill Sam tomorrow. Anyway, the girl owed them an explanation for hiding from them all day yesterday.
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ROFLMAO! Totally hilarious from start to finish, Alchemy! BRAVA! Loved scary-alpha-horny Tina who couldn’t wait to get properly laid again and her mostly alpha but sometimes henpecked girlfriend Bette who’d do anything to please her. “They’re just painting. What could they possibly do wrong except spill a few drops of paint?” => Miscalculation of the year! Shane and Alice do make such a great comedic tandem. “Diarrhea green and phlegm green” => Yuckiness to the nth power! Huge thanks for this rib-tickling update, Alchemy! :) And happy birthday! You’re one talented writer and witty lady and you’re just 22! May all your dreams come true. :)
Awesome job-So glad U are back-I was starting to miss my Fav Fic. So funny—Great job.
funny funny funny. Bette, blame yourself lol, Tina reminded you to check on them pmsl. This was great thank you for the post. Can’t wait to see the appartment decorated. please post again when you can.
Sure hope Bette takes care of Tina next chapter, after she kills Alice and Shane first of course! lol PPS
That was so hilarious and cute, Alice is crazy but gonna love her. Please post more, thanks!
once again i laughed so hard while reading this…….omg…i love your sense of humor!!
tears this update was soooo funny… too bad the TLW doesn’t stuff like this all the time! :)PPS
i have luved this story from the first chapter, but your wicked sense of humor kills me, i luv it!!!!!!!!!
I laughed until I had tears running down my face, thanks
to funny… i have a question… why don’t they go the the yacht… it was bette birthday present from sam… so she still owns that… anyway… you just gotta love shane and alice… with all of their money i don’t know why they just didn’t pull out their cells and call for some more… love this story… PPS
LOL, Bette poking her dirty fingers in Al and Shane’s mouths as revenge is better than getting their heads shaved, or worse! Hopefully they’ll get it repainted… Such a fun chapter Alchemy, thanks for posting. cheers!