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Just The Girl – Chapter Forty (a HYD-inspired fic)
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With a heavy heart, and even heavier feet, she walked towards the double doors at the far right hand side of the closet. She flashed a bittersweet smile as she entered her ginormous shoe closet. Imelda Marcos and her one thousand plus shoe collection had nothing on Bette Porter. From stilettos, pumps, boots, mules, slingbacks, sandals, sneakers and flip-flops.. she had every kind of footwear imaginable, in every color and in every style. She sighed as she looked at the small piece of paper near the door. 3,947, it read. That was how she kept count of her current collection. If she didn’t give away those pairs that she had grown out of, she was sure that the number would’ve tripled. Goodbye my precious shoe collection. Her shoulders slumped as she expelled a huge sum of air from her lungs. This farewell thing was so hard, it was taking a toll on her physically, mentally and emotionally. Just one last room to visit, she swallowed hard and steadied herself, the hardest was yet to come.
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“Hurry up fatso!”
“I’m coming!”
“Stop flirting with the flight crew and get your ass inside this plane Shane!”
“Jeez Al. It isn’t as if that thing would leave without me.”
“My jet, my rules. So. Get. Up. Here. Now!!!”
“Tch.. fine.” … “Why are you in such a hurry anyway? Bette is probably still in the estate, you know.”
“Yeah, but that wouldn’t stop her from sending out her goons to shave our heads.”
“Well, you have a point.”
“Of course I do.”
“So where are we going?”
“Vegas!”
“Vegas?”
“Yep. We’re staying in one of your casinos. Since I’m providing the transpo, you’re in charge of the accommodations.”
“But why do we have to stay in Vegas? Why not go to Macau?”
“Hey, in Vegas, we’ll be protected by your goons right?”
“Yeah..”
“Who could provide better security then the McCutcheon mobsters?”
“Um.. Al?”
“Yeah?”
“Shorty and his boys are afraid of Bette.”
“Oh fuck.”
“How much fuel does this jet have?”
“I don’t know. Why do you ask?”
“Maybe we could stay up in the air for a few days. It seems safer..”
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Yay!! SO glad it didn’t take you too long to post. I love your story, and Bette just cracks me up. They’re so cute together, and I love all the temple references! Pretty please, not too long til the next post!
Great Chapter!!! Something tells me that Melvin is going to a good eye on his daughter. Thank you PPS
i just love this story,bette is so funny or should i say thy both are.pps
That was totally cute. Bette and Tina neighbors!!!!! Too funny!!!! lol lol lol
Nice Bette is only a couple of doors down! Great Chapter! PPS
lol! it figures that bette would consider half a million dollars ‘spare change’!! great chapter
Haha–that last part is classic! Glad you’re back–that one day absence was getting to me! :) PPS!
Great chapter, I’m so proud of Bette! I think her $500K cushion might not be enough, for some reason. The girl’s never had to live on a budget in her life… Ken thinking his girl had gone riding was too funny, and I hope the hunt for Al and Shane works out well. Thanks so much for the post, Alchemy. Cheers!
That was so fun and cute. So Bette moved into Tina’s building.
greaaaaaaaat chapter. so funny. I thought Ken knew his daughter had her first ….lol. I hope Melvin willsee that Tina is a great girl, good for Bette and that they are really in love.Melvin will still have an eye on Bette, I might buy the building and restore it who knows? You are a great writer Alchemy10. PPS
Ha they live in the same building! I think Tina will be sneaking out in the middle of the night, hope they don’t wake all the neighbors…especially dad! lol PPS
1 of my fav updates. I loved the way U explained how sore Tina was from all the love making & how she explained to her dad about riding a black beauty all day-such a classic use of a metaphor referring to sex. Only someone like Bette would think 500 thousand was being poor-Too funny!!! Great job as always.
Hope Melvin will see that Tina is good for Bette. That was wonderful and so funny. B&T are so cute and sweet, love them. Nice that Bette just down a couple door form Tina, they gonna have fun and cant wait to see it. Please post more, thanks!
1 of my fav updates. I loved the way U explained how sore Tina was from all the love making & how she explained to her dad about riding a black beauty all day-such a classic use of a metaphor referring to sex. Only someone like Bette would think 500 thousand was being poor-Too funny!!! Great job as always.