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Just The Girl – Chapter Forty (a HYD-inspired fic)
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Overwhelmed with a great sense of nostalgia mixed with a tiny piece of sorrow, she laid herself down on her bed and closed her eyes. She reveled at the wonderful feeling of the mattress on her tired self. It was specially made to follow the contours of the body lying on top of it. It made her sad when she thought about not being able to share this wonderful piece of work with Tina. Making love in here would have been a truly wonderful experience.. but oh well, maybe in another life. Goodbye comfy bed. She rolled face down on the sheets and inhaled deeply. She smiled as the flowery scent of the comforter invaded her nostrils. This was the smell that had been lulling her to sleep for the past few years.. it was familiar.. it was comforting.. but it was time to go. Goodbye sweet smelling comforter. She flashed a melancholic smile as she pushed herself up from the bed and made the silent journey to her closet.
She sighed as she stood by the doorway and clapped her hands twice. One by one, the spotlights inside the ridiculously spacious maze of fashion and excess came into life.. illuminating the wide array of designer clothes, gowns, handbags, scarves, belts, jewelry, watches and glasses that were arranged neatly through rows and rows of wooden shelves, racks, platforms and glass cases. She walked towards the rack full of neatly arranged, color coordinated gowns and ran her fingers along the different fabrics. Her body would surely miss the divine sensation of having these expensive articles of clothing on her skin. She would also miss the feeling of absolute sexiness, power and femininity that washed over her body whenever she wore those gowns and looked at herself on a mirror. These clothes were like her second skin – a soft and silky armor that bestowed her with extra confidence and grace. Goodbye Gucci.. Versace.. Dior.. Dolce.. Balenciaga.. and all you other beautiful creations. She smiled sadly as she looked at her dresses. If only she could take them all along with her. But the only closet big enough for all of them was this one, she smiled bitterly. With a last lingering look, she left her gowns and ambled towards the handbags that were lined up on the shelves at the corner of the room. Her lower lip trembled as she traced the designs on the bags with her finger. Goodbye my beloved Prada, LV, Chloe, Fendi, Coach, Hermes.. and all others whose names I can’t even pronounce. She sniffled as she wiped away the stray tear that was threatening to fall from her eye. Her purses, her clutch bags, her hobos, her totes.. they were all custom made for her. And she treasured each one, although numbering in hundreds, she knew each bag by heart. So as she said her goodbye to the leather and synthetic marvels before her, she bade farewell to a piece of her heart as well.
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Yay!! SO glad it didn’t take you too long to post. I love your story, and Bette just cracks me up. They’re so cute together, and I love all the temple references! Pretty please, not too long til the next post!
Great Chapter!!! Something tells me that Melvin is going to a good eye on his daughter. Thank you PPS
i just love this story,bette is so funny or should i say thy both are.pps
That was totally cute. Bette and Tina neighbors!!!!! Too funny!!!! lol lol lol
Nice Bette is only a couple of doors down! Great Chapter! PPS
lol! it figures that bette would consider half a million dollars ‘spare change’!! great chapter
Haha–that last part is classic! Glad you’re back–that one day absence was getting to me! :) PPS!
Great chapter, I’m so proud of Bette! I think her $500K cushion might not be enough, for some reason. The girl’s never had to live on a budget in her life… Ken thinking his girl had gone riding was too funny, and I hope the hunt for Al and Shane works out well. Thanks so much for the post, Alchemy. Cheers!
That was so fun and cute. So Bette moved into Tina’s building.
greaaaaaaaat chapter. so funny. I thought Ken knew his daughter had her first ….lol. I hope Melvin willsee that Tina is a great girl, good for Bette and that they are really in love.Melvin will still have an eye on Bette, I might buy the building and restore it who knows? You are a great writer Alchemy10. PPS
Ha they live in the same building! I think Tina will be sneaking out in the middle of the night, hope they don’t wake all the neighbors…especially dad! lol PPS
1 of my fav updates. I loved the way U explained how sore Tina was from all the love making & how she explained to her dad about riding a black beauty all day-such a classic use of a metaphor referring to sex. Only someone like Bette would think 500 thousand was being poor-Too funny!!! Great job as always.
Hope Melvin will see that Tina is good for Bette. That was wonderful and so funny. B&T are so cute and sweet, love them. Nice that Bette just down a couple door form Tina, they gonna have fun and cant wait to see it. Please post more, thanks!
1 of my fav updates. I loved the way U explained how sore Tina was from all the love making & how she explained to her dad about riding a black beauty all day-such a classic use of a metaphor referring to sex. Only someone like Bette would think 500 thousand was being poor-Too funny!!! Great job as always.