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Just The Girl – Chapter Forty (a HYD-inspired fic)
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Ahem. “Want me to lick your wound for you? Maybe kiss it too? I could make it all better..”
“Fuck Porter!”
“What?”
“Now my thingy is throbbing as well.”
Snort. “Are we talking in codes now?”
“Yeah. My dad is still at home. For all you know, he might be pressing his ear to the door in an attempt to eavesdrop.”
“…”
“Porter?”
“…”
Sigh. “He can’t hear your end of the conversation, you know.”
“..you don’t know that..”
“Oh come on! My dad doesn’t have bionic ears.”
“You’ll never know. Overprotective fathers tend to have sharp hearing.. to complement their sharp claws and extra sharp knives.”
“My daddy is a harmless teddy bear.”
“He is. But that doesn’t mean that he won’t maul me when he finds out that I’ve defiled his beloved cub.”
“Delusional.”
“Cautious.”
“Hey.. I forgot to ask. Why did you call?”
“Oh. I.. I just wanted to tell you that I won’t be attending class today..”
“Why not?”
“Umm.. you know..”
“Wait.. shit. Sorry babe. It’s happening today right? It completely slipped my mind.”
“Yeah. Um, I’m done packing but I.. I just need to do a few more things. I’ll go to you as soon as I’m done, ‘kay?”
“Take your time babe. And Porter?”
“Yeah?”
“I’m just a phone call away.”
“I know.”
“If you feel that you need someone there with you, just call. I might not be of much use in my sorry state, but I’ll drag my aching ass to you in a heartbeat and keep you company.”
“Kennard?”
“Yeah?”
“Thank you.”
“Its the least I could do.”
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Porter Estate. Monday Morning.
It takes a couple of seconds to say Hello, but forever to say Goodbye..
Bette Porter sighed as she re-read the anonymous quote that Sam texted her this morning. The message came with a few words of consolation from her best friend.. words that were sweet, a little sad but uplifting all the same. Touched as she was with Sam’s thoughtfulness, it was the quote at the end of the message that really struck a nerve inside of her. The truth behind the simple statement hit her hard, making her stop for a few minutes and think.
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Yay!! SO glad it didn’t take you too long to post. I love your story, and Bette just cracks me up. They’re so cute together, and I love all the temple references! Pretty please, not too long til the next post!
Great Chapter!!! Something tells me that Melvin is going to a good eye on his daughter. Thank you PPS
i just love this story,bette is so funny or should i say thy both are.pps
That was totally cute. Bette and Tina neighbors!!!!! Too funny!!!! lol lol lol
Nice Bette is only a couple of doors down! Great Chapter! PPS
lol! it figures that bette would consider half a million dollars ‘spare change’!! great chapter
Haha–that last part is classic! Glad you’re back–that one day absence was getting to me! :) PPS!
Great chapter, I’m so proud of Bette! I think her $500K cushion might not be enough, for some reason. The girl’s never had to live on a budget in her life… Ken thinking his girl had gone riding was too funny, and I hope the hunt for Al and Shane works out well. Thanks so much for the post, Alchemy. Cheers!
That was so fun and cute. So Bette moved into Tina’s building.
greaaaaaaaat chapter. so funny. I thought Ken knew his daughter had her first ….lol. I hope Melvin willsee that Tina is a great girl, good for Bette and that they are really in love.Melvin will still have an eye on Bette, I might buy the building and restore it who knows? You are a great writer Alchemy10. PPS
Ha they live in the same building! I think Tina will be sneaking out in the middle of the night, hope they don’t wake all the neighbors…especially dad! lol PPS
1 of my fav updates. I loved the way U explained how sore Tina was from all the love making & how she explained to her dad about riding a black beauty all day-such a classic use of a metaphor referring to sex. Only someone like Bette would think 500 thousand was being poor-Too funny!!! Great job as always.
Hope Melvin will see that Tina is good for Bette. That was wonderful and so funny. B&T are so cute and sweet, love them. Nice that Bette just down a couple door form Tina, they gonna have fun and cant wait to see it. Please post more, thanks!
1 of my fav updates. I loved the way U explained how sore Tina was from all the love making & how she explained to her dad about riding a black beauty all day-such a classic use of a metaphor referring to sex. Only someone like Bette would think 500 thousand was being poor-Too funny!!! Great job as always.