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Just The Girl – Chapter Forty (a HYD-inspired fic)
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Riiinnngggggg. Riiiiinnnnggggg. Riiiiiinnnnngggggggg.
A shrill ringing sound invaded her ears after a few minutes, making her bury her face even deeper into the pillow. Oh God, she groaned as her head started to throb a little. There’s only one person who’d be calling her at this time in the morning, she smiled despite her annoyance. Bette Porter.. the love of her young life and the root cause of her current physical incapacitation. She felt for the golden phone that was ringing just beside her pillow and brought it near her face. Her eyes grew big at the picture that popped up on the screen as soon as she flipped the phone open. Her girlfriend must’ve changed a few settings on her cell phone. The caller display for Bette now showed a close-up picture of the brunette trying to roll her eyes in all of her Quasimodo-esque glory.. she looked a little possessed, a beautiful love child of Quasi and Linda Blair from the Exorcist. She laughed at the sight but then quickly suppressed her laughter as her muscles throbbed in protest. She would need to take a whole container’s worth of pain meds to squash her discomfort away.
Click.
“Good morning Kennard!”
“Ugh.. good morning Porter..”
“Are you okay? You don’t sound so good.”
“No.” Grooooaaaan. “My entire body feels like lead and I can’t walk straight, let alone stand without danger of my legs giving way. I don’t think I’d be going to school today. Babe, I think should have taken a couple of bottles of Red Bull too..”
“Aww.. my poor baby. I told you that the last round inside the car was pushing it..”
“I didn’t hear you complaining last night..”
“True. But I did warn you nonetheless.”
“Okay okay, so you were right.” Groaaan. “Stop rubbing it in Porter.“
Sigh. “Sorry. We got a little carried away, huh?”
“Biggest understatement of the year. God, my body is aching in places that I never new existed..”
“Don’t worry, your body will get used to the exercise pretty soon. I’ll make sure of that..”
“You better.”
“Want me to start later?”
“Babe, you know I would love to. But right now.. my.. uhm.. wound.. is still a little fresh and sore.. so..”
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Yay!! SO glad it didn’t take you too long to post. I love your story, and Bette just cracks me up. They’re so cute together, and I love all the temple references! Pretty please, not too long til the next post!
Great Chapter!!! Something tells me that Melvin is going to a good eye on his daughter. Thank you PPS
i just love this story,bette is so funny or should i say thy both are.pps
That was totally cute. Bette and Tina neighbors!!!!! Too funny!!!! lol lol lol
Nice Bette is only a couple of doors down! Great Chapter! PPS
lol! it figures that bette would consider half a million dollars ‘spare change’!! great chapter
Haha–that last part is classic! Glad you’re back–that one day absence was getting to me! :) PPS!
Great chapter, I’m so proud of Bette! I think her $500K cushion might not be enough, for some reason. The girl’s never had to live on a budget in her life… Ken thinking his girl had gone riding was too funny, and I hope the hunt for Al and Shane works out well. Thanks so much for the post, Alchemy. Cheers!
That was so fun and cute. So Bette moved into Tina’s building.
greaaaaaaaat chapter. so funny. I thought Ken knew his daughter had her first ….lol. I hope Melvin willsee that Tina is a great girl, good for Bette and that they are really in love.Melvin will still have an eye on Bette, I might buy the building and restore it who knows? You are a great writer Alchemy10. PPS
Ha they live in the same building! I think Tina will be sneaking out in the middle of the night, hope they don’t wake all the neighbors…especially dad! lol PPS
1 of my fav updates. I loved the way U explained how sore Tina was from all the love making & how she explained to her dad about riding a black beauty all day-such a classic use of a metaphor referring to sex. Only someone like Bette would think 500 thousand was being poor-Too funny!!! Great job as always.
Hope Melvin will see that Tina is good for Bette. That was wonderful and so funny. B&T are so cute and sweet, love them. Nice that Bette just down a couple door form Tina, they gonna have fun and cant wait to see it. Please post more, thanks!
1 of my fav updates. I loved the way U explained how sore Tina was from all the love making & how she explained to her dad about riding a black beauty all day-such a classic use of a metaphor referring to sex. Only someone like Bette would think 500 thousand was being poor-Too funny!!! Great job as always.