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Just The Girl – Chapter Forty (a HYD-inspired fic)
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“That’s it.” Sonja gripped Bette’s hand tightly, she has heard enough. “I’m coming with you.” She stated in a voice that left no room for objections.
“Whaaaaattttt?!!!!” Bette whipped her head to look at the older woman. She can’t be serious.. right?
“I won’t be able to sleep at night knowing that you aren’t well taken cared of.” Sonja bit her lower lip in thought. She could picture her little Bette starving to death, oversleeping each morning and wearing badly washed clothes. She couldn’t stand back and allow the kid that she has meticulously taken cared for all these years to suffer. “You need someone to look after you.”
“Sonja..” Bette sighed. “I understand and appreciate your concern but.. I need to do this on my own.” She pulled the woman a little closer to her and patted her arm. “I need to learn how to survive on my own two feet.” She met Sonja’s gaze and smiled at the unconvinced look on the woman’s features. “Sure, I’ll probably lose a few pounds and destroy a few clothes.. but I think it comes with the learning process.” She winked as Sonja sighed in resignation.
“Why did you have to grow up so fast? I wasn’t prepared..” Sonja whispered sadly, earning a chuckle from the young girl.
“Me too.” Bette grinned.
“Can I at least come by for a visit?” Sonja sighed as Bette rubbed her arm up and down in a comforting manner.
“Of course.”
“Everyday?”
“As much as you want.” Bette laughed.
A cough from behind disrupted the conversation between the two. They turned around to see a puffy eyed James standing behind them. He cleared his throat before he spoke up. “The guard just called. Your father’s convoy is at the gate.” He said, trying in vain to even out his shaking voice. He had already embarrassed himself a lot this morning when he broke down in front of Bette while she gave him last minute instructions over breakfast. His young boss spent an hour trying to placate him. But still.. he couldn’t help but feel pensive and sad.. especially since the end was coming near.
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Yay!! SO glad it didn’t take you too long to post. I love your story, and Bette just cracks me up. They’re so cute together, and I love all the temple references! Pretty please, not too long til the next post!
Great Chapter!!! Something tells me that Melvin is going to a good eye on his daughter. Thank you PPS
i just love this story,bette is so funny or should i say thy both are.pps
That was totally cute. Bette and Tina neighbors!!!!! Too funny!!!! lol lol lol
Nice Bette is only a couple of doors down! Great Chapter! PPS
lol! it figures that bette would consider half a million dollars ‘spare change’!! great chapter
Haha–that last part is classic! Glad you’re back–that one day absence was getting to me! :) PPS!
Great chapter, I’m so proud of Bette! I think her $500K cushion might not be enough, for some reason. The girl’s never had to live on a budget in her life… Ken thinking his girl had gone riding was too funny, and I hope the hunt for Al and Shane works out well. Thanks so much for the post, Alchemy. Cheers!
That was so fun and cute. So Bette moved into Tina’s building.
greaaaaaaaat chapter. so funny. I thought Ken knew his daughter had her first ….lol. I hope Melvin willsee that Tina is a great girl, good for Bette and that they are really in love.Melvin will still have an eye on Bette, I might buy the building and restore it who knows? You are a great writer Alchemy10. PPS
Ha they live in the same building! I think Tina will be sneaking out in the middle of the night, hope they don’t wake all the neighbors…especially dad! lol PPS
1 of my fav updates. I loved the way U explained how sore Tina was from all the love making & how she explained to her dad about riding a black beauty all day-such a classic use of a metaphor referring to sex. Only someone like Bette would think 500 thousand was being poor-Too funny!!! Great job as always.
Hope Melvin will see that Tina is good for Bette. That was wonderful and so funny. B&T are so cute and sweet, love them. Nice that Bette just down a couple door form Tina, they gonna have fun and cant wait to see it. Please post more, thanks!
1 of my fav updates. I loved the way U explained how sore Tina was from all the love making & how she explained to her dad about riding a black beauty all day-such a classic use of a metaphor referring to sex. Only someone like Bette would think 500 thousand was being poor-Too funny!!! Great job as always.