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Just The Girl – Chapter Fifty Three (a HYD-inspired fic)
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“Is too!”
“Is not!”
“Shut up and watch fatso.” Determined to prove Shane wrong, a deathly serious Alice placed her hands over the card.
Shane and Sam kicked each other under the table as they looked on, both of them in danger of cracking up.
Here goes nothing, the blonde closed her eyes and mumbled a short, desperate prayer beneath her breath. “Dear God, my Econ grades suck donkey balls. Please please please please please please please please do some fancy schmancy miracle and make it higher. You can change water into wine and all that jazz so I bet this is just a piece of cake for you. Change it please, I’m begging you. Pretty pretty pretty please. With a big ass cherry on top. Please? Oh, and thank you in advance. Amen.”
Alice sighed. That has got to be her longest conversation with God, ever. Meaning, it should work. Dammit, it has to work.
Popping one fearful eye open, she gazed at her report card.
“Shit.” She hung her head down low.
“See? You’re going to hell.”
“Fuck off!”
Unable to show further restraint, Shane and Sam let it all out and shared a loud, belly laugh.
Alice slumped down unto the table and sighed ruefully, finally giving up on her report card. Well, that was disappointing. No matter how much she flipped the card and studied it from different angles, her Economics grade still looked the same. Praying for a miracle didn’t help too. With a defeated groan, she started banging her forehead softly on the wood, all the while mumbling words of regret. “This is what I get for being too fucking complacent. Damn, maybe I should have given Roberts a gift.. a watch.. or some serious bling.. or maybe offer to pay for that flatty’s boob job. God knows she needs a decent pair..”
“Why? Did she fail you?” An incredulous Sam reached over and snatched the report card from her dejected friend’s hand. Admittedly, though there were times when they deserved it, teachers never gave a member of F4 a grade lower than a B-. Holding the blonde’s card, she gave it a look and with furrowed brows, she returned her gaze to her fair haired friend. “Jeez, she gave you a B. Why the heck are you complaining?” She slid the paper back to Alice. She never knew her friend to be the grade conscious type. That sounded more like Bette than the happy-go-lucky Alice.
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See… My heart dropped at page 30. I knew something sad was on its way. I really love how you write. So good! Soooo good! But please fix this. It’s too good to end it like how I think it is. Unless you’re doing it like the show which has a chapter 2.
So great to see this story back.Tina should go with Bette.
Oh, no! I feared this might happen, but I trust you to make everything turn out right for our girls. BTW since you left it like that, you can’t keep us waiting long!
i can’t believe tina wants to go to different schools… and could under stand if it was money… but thats not an issue… i some times don’t under stand her… she has to realize bette will not go to yale… ok i trust you to make things right… MERRY CHRISTMAS… to you and your family… PPS
i absolutely love, love love this story and i get frustrated at the length of time between posts but when you post you soooooo make it for it!! The way you write these two (especially Bette) is just brilliant even though its quite obvious Bette is whipped by Tina i’m not sure it’s all gonna go Tinas way this time…can they really be parted long term?!! pps!
Man, I was having withdrawls & it wasn’t pretty…I am so glad that you are back. It was a long chapter & was way wirth the read. very funny & sexy.. I loved F4’S pranks-they were classic. Great job!!!!!
That was sad and hope Tina will go with Bette. The F4’s spranks is funny. Please post soon, thanks!
What a power Tina’sgotover Bette? A bit sad at the end. Hope Tina will go with Bette. These two can not be apart. Thank you for the long chapter, you are rock. PPS
Noooo long disyance never works. Suck it up Tina and go to Yale or just let Bette go to USC, it really doesn’t matter where you go to school, it’s how you run with the big boys! PPS
I’m so going to cry! They need a happy ending! Fix this, please!!!
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO :(
ur gonna split them up. tina is right bette needs to grow and so does she.. distance will only make the heart grow fonder! please don’t let tina hook up with guys:)PPS
great chapteroh god what an ending!! PPS
Damn, I so saw that coming but still my heart broke a liitle. I am glad Tina is going to give Bette what she needs. I just hope they make it through college still together. I love this Story. Thank you
OMG! All mighty queen of the induced heart attack, please spare us this agony and let this be a happy ending. Thanks for the post.
Wow, a 33-page update. You’re an awesome writer, Alchemy. The lovebirds’ “unique” reviewing method in the last chapter is awfully funny! :> I’m not familiar with HYD but I have a bad feeling on how this story is gonna end. So Alchemy, if I go down on my knees and beg, would you consider deviating from the probable gloomy ending of that story and give us a happy ending instead? I don’t know how their relationship will survive such distance and painful parting. There’s enough gloom in the real world right now what with the global recession and all the other shit that when I retreat into the fictional world of these young, horny lovebirds, I just want to see them happy, together and in love. Please, please fix this ending, Alchemy. Anyway, thanks a lot for sharing this story and writing these lovely, kilometric updates! And Merry Chrismas to you and your loved ones!!! :>
great story , please update soon